Subject: Luv story contest Fri Sep 30, 2011 3:18 pm
easy right a inspiring story with LOVE. make it nice, not disgusting. and make it sweet. ONLY story's it good be short or long idc thank you. have a wonderful day
powerstay Senior Fantagian
Posts : 393 Join date : 2011-09-01 Age : 21 Location : In America.Epic win.
Once upon a time,I was bored! So, I heard about a forum about fantage.I rushed on the computer and made a account on it. I saw a player named MaceThen i looked up more about him.I was surprized and shiocked!I said to myself,I did not know there was a spam attack!How could this happen?[spoiler]Chapter{small}2!
Then i looked up EVEN more things about the forum and mace.I found out he was the admesister. I was so glad that this was a safe website!I played and played until i had over 100 posts. When i passed 100,I was soo proud!
Once upon a time,I was bored! So, I heard about a forum about fantage.I rushed on the computer and made a account on it. I saw a player named MaceThen i looked up more about him.I was surprized and shiocked!I said to myself,I did not know there was a spam attack!How could this happen?[spoiler]Chapter{small}2!
Then i looked up EVEN more things about the forum and mace.I found out he was the admesister. I was so glad that this was a safe website!I played and played until i had over 100 posts. When i passed 100,I was soo proud!
[END}
I'm so sorry, but that's really the worst story I've heard. And you said B2uty's was bad...
powerstay Senior Fantagian
Posts : 393 Join date : 2011-09-01 Age : 21 Location : In America.Epic win.
Sorry that the chapters are short. I was in a rush
Chapter 1
Spoiler:
Brittney has always hated her neighborhood. Most of her neighbors were old people who doesn't like kids at her age. She was the only twelve-year-old in the whole entire neighborhood. Her parents never let her leave the house because they are afraid she will get kidnapped. It was like a prison in this town. Brittney wished she was never born. On a sunny Friday, Brittney looked out her bedroom window. The rays from the sun was like an ocean, making everything glow with an orange-yellow light. Something caught her eye. It was a boy, a boy about her age. He was sitting in front of a house, sitting on the front yard of the house. Brittney stared at him. He had silky black hair. She really couldn't tell what color his eyes were. He wore black clothing.
Chapter 2
Spoiler:
Brittney saw him get up and walk toward-her house! She started to tingle all over. She ran downstairs to see him. She opened the door before the boy could even ring the doorbell. "Um,hi?" The boy said. Brittney felt like she was about to explode.
Well, this is all I had in mind. I might update later if I have more ideas.
Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 27 Location : Define "Location"
"But My love, if you go you could... could...." Silver said choking on her own feelings for the young man in front of her. It was dark and the soft phosphorescent light of the moon illuminated their features. The young girl couldn't help but frown at her once best friends choice in departure to the unknown land to help her foolish cousin. He smiled faintly trying to comfort her. "Silver, I've known you for most of my life, you helped me get through the hard training of becoming one of your Aunts, the queens, finest soldiers in her army. You must let me go, River your very cousin needs me. Being a god-child allows me to help him in whatever way possible. As a daughter of the fearless and cold-blooded Mooniah, you shouldn't be afraid but..but-but proud!" He emphasized the word boldly and possibly cheerfully. Silver shuddered at the sound of it. He was determined to keep his duty... if he wasn't he wouldn't be using her heritage against her. "I'm nothing like mother, you should know that." she counterattacked sharply. The words hanging there and cutting him like a sword. "True enough but you shouldn't be worried I'm strong you know that" He brushed her long black hair behind her ear, exposing her red eye that seemed to match her blue eye's fiery look. She looked away in anger immediately. "Don't bother say it" "Thing is your" "NO! IT'S NOT GOING TO WORK THIS TIME"Silver snapped back "your" "Don't try Phoenix. It WILL not work" "Beautiful"Phoenix said dreamily. Silver's heart melted like butter. She couldn't possibly be mad. All she could do now was hope he wouldn't get himself killed. She looked into his deep azure eyes. His slightly spiked brown hair was soft in shone bright. His eyes were twin stars, set ablaze by the goddess of light and god of fire themselves. There was no way she could stop him now, not with the determined look in his eyes. "Fine" she said harshly "I wish you luck when you go BUT may I give you something before you leave?" "Yes anything my dear. Your gift is one I can cherish forever" She leaned in closely and brought his head down to eye level. She alluringly and softly said "surprise" and kissed him on the lips. The grass around that was ablaze, he was in-fact a god-child. Fire was his specialty. The glorious colors of the fire set a mood of romance and seriousness at the same time. But he didn't resist the kiss. In fact he seemed to share it with her. When they stopped she steeped back and smiled softly her heart was aglow and it showed on her marble white face. He was a bit bewildered at first and then he pulled some of his fire into a small sphere. "I was meaning to do this earlier but now would be okay" He took a small rock out of his pocket. It was plain and translucent. A glorious crystal indeed. The fire that was twirling in his hand jumped to the rock giving it a fiery glow. "This will keep me close to you in some way. It also will keep you safe until I can get back" he handed the fiery crystal to her. "It's gorgeous" silver replied it was warm with his love to her touch. she then leaned on him lovingly. He didn't mind but he stared outwards now fearing what might become of him.
He almost stayed for her.
Here chu go ^^ I know it's bad I was busy doing other things and there is so much I want to describe but meh
Usui Hero Fantagian
Posts : 5275 Join date : 2011-09-09 Age : 24 Location : Worldbuscus
_________________________________________________ CHAPTER 1 i looked into his eyes. His eyes were so bright like the sun. he turned and faced me. Our eyes meant and looked away. he was blushing non stop his face turned red like a apple. Then he looked at me again and his voice speaked through my ears. "so ummm nice drawing" he said nicely. "thanks i said. his brown shaggy hair was falling through his eyes i noticed today was prom and i hadn't asked anyone. Then he said he wanted to ask me something. he said "wanna go to prom?" i burst with happenies and said YES.
sorry for the dumb story but ima finish it later okay;)
Once upon a time,I was bored! So, I heard about a forum about fantage.I rushed on the computer and made a account on it. I saw a player named MaceThen i looked up more about him.I was surprized and shiocked!I said to myself,I did not know there was a spam attack!How could this happen?[spoiler]Chapter{small}2!
Then i looked up EVEN more things about the forum and mace.I found out he was the admesister. I was so glad that this was a safe website!I played and played until i had over 100 posts. When i passed 100,I was soo proud!
[END}
that was an event that happened on the forum about a few months ago.... that ain't really a story B2uty is pretty entertaining and true even though in real life i hate story writing
Yuki scrambled around the forest, dodging each tree in her path. She panicked, looking for Riku, a bit worried about what happened. Rustling was heard in the bushes; she carefully walked over, her eyes widening at the sight.
"R-Riku!" She said, feeling as if she were going to explode with tears. Riku was laying on the floor, his blood dripping onto the floor, a sword pierced into his chest. She carefully grasped the sword's handle, but let go slowly, seeing him in pain. Shaking her head, she took hold of the blade's handle, muttering a few words. The sword soon disappeared, leaving dust behind.
Riku sheepishly smiled, closing his eyes. "My time is up soon, I'm afraid.." He quietly said, his voice shaking.
"No, you can't leave me now, Riku!" Yuki cried as tears streamed down from her red eyes, slowly rolling over her pink cheeks. She was kneeling near the dying Riku, her face buried in her hands. Yuki slowly took her hands off of her face, watching a weak smile spread across of Riku's face.
"Do not worry, Yuki, I won't ever leave you.." He placed his cold hand on Yuki's cheek, wiping tears away. She sobbed even more, holding onto his hand.
"I-I can heal you! Ju-Just hang in there, Riku!" Her tears quickly rolled onto her cheeks, like a waterfall forming in her eyes. Her hands touched Riku's chest, her hand glowing bright yellow. The color soon died away, Yuki's eyes widening.
Why isn't it working? It has to! She panicked, the tears flowing on its own. The smile was still glued to Riku's pale face. "Yuki.." His voice trailed off.
"Yuuki.." He took her by the arm, pulling her in for a kiss. Yuki's eyes widened, her cheeks glowing a bright red now. She pulled away, looking in a different direction in embarrassment. Riku took her hand, holding it gently.
"I love you." Riku's voice softly told Yuki, but loud enough for her to hear.
"I-I love you too.." Yuki sobbed, watching Riku's eyes slowly close, his life fading away.
"Forever.."
Sorry it's short.. I'm in a rush right now, so yeah. I'll probably edit it later. c;
Crownie Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1010 Join date : 2011-09-11 Age : 28 Location : In the center of the sun.
Subject: Re: Luv story contest Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:39 pm
I'll give it a shot, just for fun (; Sorry if it's long. Love stories are just better long LOL.
My First Love.
chapter 1:
The shoes squeaked on the floor and the sound of the ball bouncing on the hard wood floor echoed the gym. I walked toward the bleachers to watch the guys practice for their basketball game. I watched my childhood friend, Jake, who had the ball. He dribbled in, cut left, and took the shot. Swish! The ball made it in the basket. Jake high five'd and smiled at his teammates. He soon caught me eyeing him and smiled at me and waved. I waved back embarrassed and kept walking avoiding looking at him.
"Lia, watch out!" someone called out.
Suddenly I woke up and I was on the ground surrounded by everyone and their stares. I felt a painful thumping on my head. Someone pushed everyone out of the way and made way in the circle. It was Jake.
"Lia, are you alright?" Jake crouched down and took a look at my forehead.
"Yeah I'm fine." I tried to laugh it off and got up.
Jake walked me to the bleachers and sat an the lower seat across me. He stared into my eyes and poked my forehead.
"It's red." He smiled.
I covered and buried my face with my hands in my sleeves. I was embarrassed; how could I be so unaware and slow? Jake pulled my face out of my hands and looked at me again, but with a different expression. He looked somewhat mad.
"Are you wearing make-up?" He asked.
"Uh.. yeah"
"Why? You look just fine without it!"
"It's because I wanted to - "
"Jake! Jake-y!" a girl's voice called out.
chapter 2:
Heels clacked across the gym. It was Jake's girlfriend. She was slender with long straight brown hair that bounced with her every step. She wore a tight shirt that was a bit too low with ripped up skinny jeans. Her make-up made her face look flawless. Her name was Rebecca.
"Here you are babe! Are you ready to go?" Rebecca examined me from head to toe.
"Yes, just hold on. I want to talk with my best friend for a second. I haven't had a nice talk with her for a while now." He shoo'd her away.
"Really? Wow babe." She stormed off.
"Now... It's because you wanted to what?" He turned his head toward me.
I couldn't say now after seeing his girlfriend. He was taken. I shouldn't be trying to impress him. I shouldn't be trying to take him. It's wrong. But it was my mind versus my heart. My heart began to thump and soon I could feel it in my throat.
"To impress you..." my heart whispered out loud to him.
"..what?" He awkwardly tried to laugh.
"I love you, Jake..." I looked down and my tears involuntarily started to fall. Flashbacks of me and Jake played in head.
When we were at the park, he yelled "Amelia, I'm sorry. Forgive me." in front of everyone because he made me mad. When I almost tripped and he quickly grabbed my hand. When we had sleepovers with his sisters and we were the last to sleep and the last to wake up. When he woke up next to each other and he held my hand. Years and years ago I still held those memories dear to me in my heart.
He was silent.
"I'm sorry. Forget what I said." I got up and ran out the gym door.
chapter 3:
He ran after me and caught up. Jake grabbed my wrist. I looked back and saw him looking at me with that look. Not the look he gives Rebecca, but the look he used to give me when ever I cried when we were young. He grabbed my other arm and pulled me into a hug.
"How can I forget something so important to me?" He said in my ear. "Even if I want to, I wouldn't... I won't be able to.
I pushed him away with both my hands on his chest and my arms fully extended. I faced the ground. I knew what I was doing was wrong. Thunder started to shake the sky and rain fell slowly, slowly increasing.
"I'm sorry, Jake. I can't ruin your relationship. It was stupid of me. I said that on an impulse."
"Lia..." Jake tried to step closer.
"Go. Go to Rebecca." I dropped my arms and let go of him. "It'll make me happy just seeing you happy with her." I tried to smile for him.
Jake tried to smile back with a little hint of worry in it. He jogged around the corner of the gym and disappeared. I peeked behind the gym corner. I saw him and Rebecca talking. Rebecca threw her arms around Jake and squeezed him. I felt nothing but the pain of a broken heart. But I still smiled for Jake's sake.
Rebecca stopped embracing him and started walking toward the car. Jake turned back and caught me eyeing him. He smiled and turned back. He joined his girlfriend in the car and they drove away.
Goodbye my first love.
Best read with this playing in the background LOL:
Guest Guest
Subject: Re: Luv story contest Sat Oct 01, 2011 1:53 pm
Crownie wrote:
I'll give it a shot, just for fun (; Sorry if it's long. Love stories are just better long LOL.
My First Love.
chapter 1:
The shoes squeaked on the floor and the sound of the ball bouncing on the hard wood floor echoed the gym. I walked toward the bleachers to watch the guys practice for their basketball game. I watched my childhood friend, Jake, who had the ball. He dribbled in, cut left, and took the shot. Swish! The ball made it in the basket. Jake high five'd and smiled at his teammates. He soon caught me eyeing him and smiled at me and waved. I waved back embarrassed and kept walking avoiding looking at him.
"Lia, watch out!" someone called out.
Suddenly I woke up and I was on the ground surrounded by everyone and their stares. I felt a painful thumping on my head. Someone pushed everyone out of the way and made way in the circle. It was Jake.
"Lia, are you alright?" Jake crouched down and took a look at my forehead.
"Yeah I'm fine." I tried to laugh it off and got up.
Jake walked me to the bleachers and sat an the lower seat across me. He stared into my eyes and poked my forehead.
"It's red." He smiled.
I covered and buried my face with my hands in my sleeves. I was embarrassed; how could I be so unaware and slow? Jake pulled my face out of my hands and looked at me again, but with a different expression. He looked somewhat mad.
"Are you wearing make-up?" He asked.
"Uh.. yeah"
"Why? You look just fine without it!"
"It's because I wanted to - "
"Jake! Jake-y!" a girl's voice called out.
chapter 2:
Heels clacked across the gym. It was Jake's girlfriend. She was slender with long straight brown hair that bounced with her every step. She wore a tight shirt that was a bit too low with ripped up skinny jeans. Her make-up made her face look flawless. Her name was Rebecca.
"Here you are babe! Are you ready to go?" Rebecca examined me from head to toe.
"Yes, just hold on. I want to talk with my best friend for a second. I haven't had a nice talk with her for a while now." He shoo'd her away.
"Really? Wow babe." She stormed off.
"Now... It's because you wanted to what?" He turned his head toward me.
I couldn't say now after seeing his girlfriend. He was taken. I shouldn't be trying to impress him. I shouldn't be trying to take him. It's wrong. But it was my mind versus my heart. My heart began to thump and soon I could feel it in my throat.
"To impress you..." my heart whispered out loud to him.
"..what?" He awkwardly tried to laugh.
"I love you, Jake..." I looked down and my tears involuntarily started to fall. Flashbacks of me and Jake played in head.
When we were at the park, he yelled "Amelia, I'm sorry. Forgive me." in front of everyone because he made me mad. When I almost tripped and he quickly grabbed my hand. When we had sleepovers with his sisters and we were the last to sleep and the last to wake up. When he woke up next to each other and he held my hand. Years and years ago I still held those memories dear to me in my heart.
He was silent.
"I'm sorry. Forget what I said." I got up and ran out the gym door.
chapter 3:
He ran after me and caught up. Jake grabbed my wrist. I looked back and saw him looking at me with that look. Not the look he gives Rebecca, but the look he used to give me when ever I cried when we were young. He grabbed my other arm and pulled me into a hug.
"How can I forget something so important to me?" He said in my ear. "Even if I want to, I wouldn't... I won't be able to.
I pushed him away with both my hands on his chest and my arms fully extended. I faced the ground. I knew what I was doing was wrong. Thunder started to shake the sky and rain fell slowly, slowly increasing.
"I'm sorry, Jake. I can't ruin your relationship. It was stupid of me. I said that on an impulse."
"Lia..." Jake tried to step closer.
"Go. Go to Rebecca." I dropped my arms and let go of him. "It'll make me happy just seeing you happy with her." I tried to smile for him.
Jake tried to smile back with a little hint of worry in it. He jogged around the corner of the gym and disappeared. I peeked behind the gym corner. I saw him and Rebecca talking. Rebecca threw her arms around Jake and squeezed him. I felt nothing but the pain of a broken heart. But I still smiled for Jake's sake.
Rebecca stopped embracing him and started walking toward the car. Jake turned back and caught me eyeing him. He smiled and turned back. He joined his girlfriend in the car and they drove away.
Goodbye my first love.
Best read with this playing in the background LOL:
I love you.
Crownie Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1010 Join date : 2011-09-11 Age : 28 Location : In the center of the sun.
Subject: Re: Luv story contest Sat Oct 01, 2011 2:20 pm
@Taost - I'm glad you like it? XD lol
Guest Guest
Subject: Re: Luv story contest Sat Oct 01, 2011 2:32 pm
Crownie wrote:
@Taost - I'm glad you like it? XD lol
iDon't like it. iLove it.
Mila Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2017 Join date : 2011-09-01
Subject: Re: Luv story contest Sat Oct 01, 2011 9:53 pm
lol there all so great
Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 27 Location : Define "Location"
Subject: Re: Luv story contest Sat Oct 01, 2011 10:08 pm