My new song 2

Verse 1
i was walking in downtown
Then i saw clown
i screamed
Then i was under a light beam
it was the palm
i stayed calm

Chorus
i typed really slowly
F then A then N then T then A then G then EEEEEEEEEEE
FANTAGE IS AWESOME
I THINKS COOL
FANTAGE IS AWESOME
IT MAKES U DROOL
oh

Verse 2

Staries, Brainies
candy swap pearly pop
i cant stoooooop
maybe if i win i will get stars
to get cool cars


Chorus
i typed really slowly
F then A then N then T then A then G then EEEEEEEEEEE
FANTAGE IS AWESOME
I THINKS COOL
FANTAGE IS AWESOME
IT MAKES U DROOL
oh

Verse 3

oh i all i am saying
that fantage is never boring
maybe in the morning
but over all
i love it a lot

nice song but...

After I saw clown you forgot to put "a" so it should be:
"I saw a clown.

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Very interesting.
I would give you some tips and pointers but I just learned that i have a soccer game tonight
So i'm gonna have to help ya maybe tomorrow or something

thank u so much i right it by my head