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castiel
Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 554
Join date : 2011-11-15
Age : 23
| Subject: More crap art by me :p  Sat Dec 10, 2011 3:18 pm | |
|  I really should stop art spamming =a= I got sai on my sis's comp tho o 3 o And in the city, I'm going today, My older sister has another mac with no internet she never uses. Maybe if i'm lucky I can take it back with me until I get my comp fixed xc. Also, I might go to a dude's mansion for a xmas party tonight. Kthnxbai gaiz have a nice day ^^. | |
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el
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621
Join date : 2011-07-20
Age : 22
Location : canada
| | Subject: Re: More crap art by me :p Sat Dec 10, 2011 3:22 pm | |
| The hair is ok. But try working on her nose and mouth. 8.5/10 ^^
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Janelle
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4931
Join date : 2011-02-28
Age : 21
Location : ur mom
| | Subject: Re: More crap art by me :p Sat Dec 10, 2011 3:24 pm | |
| The hair is nice and I agree with Fuko-Chan 8/10 | |
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powerstay
Senior Fantagian
Posts : 393
Join date : 2011-09-01
Age : 21
Location : In America.Epic win.
| | Subject: Re: More crap art by me :p Sat Dec 10, 2011 3:38 pm | |
| - Janelle wrote:
- The hair is nice and I agree with Fuko-Chan 8/10
yep. agreed. | |
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el
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621
Join date : 2011-07-20
Age : 22
Location : canada
| | Subject: Re: More crap art by me :p Sat Dec 10, 2011 3:48 pm | |
| Red lined with more specific critiques.  You should gentley curve her nose in and out and her hair should be less poofy. I just added the eyes for future reference. And her lips should be smoother and yeahh | |
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Pommu-pon
Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1597
Join date : 2011-05-09
Age : 25
Location : wwwwww
| | Subject: Re: More crap art by me :p Sat Dec 10, 2011 4:08 pm | |
| I love the colouring technique of the hair, but the position of the face with the shape of the hair doesn't go well that much.  That's my advice for the restructure. I still love the realistic colour of the hair ^^ 5.5/10 | |
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castiel
Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 554
Join date : 2011-11-15
Age : 23
| | Subject: Re: More crap art by me :p Sun Dec 11, 2011 9:48 pm | |
| - Miki-lu wrote:
- I love the colouring technique of the hair, but the position of the face with the shape of the hair doesn't go well that much.
That's my advice for the restructure. I still love the realistic colour of the hair ^^
5.5/10 @everyone I forgot to edit the post o_o. Its just hair practice xD Ik about the anotomy and stuff o 3o | |
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pokeranger
Hero Fantagian
Posts : 5454
Join date : 2010-01-29
Age : 25
Location : Loading...
| | Subject: Re: More crap art by me :p Sun Dec 11, 2011 10:13 pm | |
| It's pretty. :3 Just that the mouth curve shouldn't be so close to the nose. For this 90 degree view I think, the hair looks straight forward. The bangs should be a bit more loosened. I don't know how to explain lol. Make the bangs a bit more... down-ish. o-o | |
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castiel
Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 554
Join date : 2011-11-15
Age : 23
| | Subject: Re: More crap art by me :p Sun Dec 11, 2011 10:15 pm | |
| - pokeranger wrote:
- It's pretty. :3 Just that the mouth curve shouldn't be so close to the nose. For this 90 degree view I think, the hair looks straight forward. The bangs should be a bit more loosened. I don't know how to explain lol. Make the bangs a bit more... down-ish. o-o
thanksfordeyreply :3 | |
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