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taehyung
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| Subject: Chibi Coloring  Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:32 am | |
|  I used a picture that i ordered from Mustard so i credits for the drawing I linear-ted it and colored it! Rate Please. Critique no cause i didn't draw it,Mustard drew it. | |
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amanda
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:09 pm | |
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:14 pm | |
| What the user above me said. | |
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castiel
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:55 pm | |
| ^What he said about what the person of them said | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:56 pm | |
| i not a fan of princesses butttt 9/10 | |
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elise
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sat Dec 24, 2011 1:10 pm | |
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Monsterbunny
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sat Dec 24, 2011 1:25 pm | |
| -20/10 jk ill give it a 4.9/10 | |
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Janelle
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sat Dec 24, 2011 2:02 pm | |
| ^ What she just said except 4.5/10 | |
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Stars
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sat Dec 24, 2011 2:14 pm | |
| why is it bad? It's very good. Look at the shading.
9/10 I think its beautiful. | |
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Relora
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sat Dec 24, 2011 3:09 pm | |
| 8/10
it's very nice but shading could be a teensy bit better that's all lol | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:28 pm | |
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Bloobu
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sat Dec 24, 2011 5:00 pm | |
| I don't know how you shade on the program you use (is it SAI?) and I can't shade well myself, but I do think it could be a little better  Keep trying! 5.8/10 | |
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ashley123
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sat Dec 24, 2011 5:08 pm | |
| 7/10.
Its actually pretty good. | |
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Alyssa:)
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sat Dec 24, 2011 6:07 pm | |
| 7/10 Pretty good. The head needs to be a bit smaller, and more to the right. | |
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pokeranger
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sat Dec 24, 2011 6:19 pm | |
| I'm taking you used SAI. The dress shading looks kind of weird. The hair needs a bit more shading, in my opinion. I don't know what to rate it, so therefore, I won't. LOL | |
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taehyung
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sun Dec 25, 2011 12:45 am | |
| - Kary90 wrote:
- 7/10 Pretty good. The head needs to be a bit smaller, and more to the right.
Did you read well my first post? It said Don't Critique cause i didn't drew it Mustard Did!Thanks for the feedback guys! and i used Sai. | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sun Dec 25, 2011 1:31 am | |
| 5/10
I only saw you shade the hair. |
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Pommu-pon
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| | Subject: Re: Chibi Coloring Sun Dec 25, 2011 6:22 am | |
| 4.5/10
I'm only going to critique your colouring instead of the actual drawing, k?
The colours looks kinda bold for some reason, maybe from the lack of shading.
The only thing I see you did for 'shading' is put a shine on the dress and on the hair.
You should make the shine more transparent and add in more shading, maybe add in small highlights in the hair.
It looks like you used the Magic Wand tool and then filled in the colours and there are small white bits in a few places, looking at the small fold lines on the dress. That have whites around them.
You should make new layers under the lineart and make different layers for the different colours. Colour freely and rub out any bits that goes out of place. Do NOT use the magic tool unless your brush is an actual pen tool (SAI). Here's an example of an old random drawing I did:
- May stretch page:
I know this is Photoshop, but I assume you can do the same on SAI, unless I'm wrong.
Sorry if any of my critique or advice is innaccurate. | |
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