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elise Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 613 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 32
| Subject: A story (No title yet!) Fri Jun 22, 2012 1:05 pm | |
| Ok so. Let me get something straight first. I got the name Wendy Woove from Wendy WOO. k? alright. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Chapter 1. - Spoiler:
I look up in the stars. So bright and shiny... "Hey!!" a famillar voice say's. "Wendy! You there?" I get up calmy from the soft mossy grass, "Yes.. i'll be there..." "Okay! Just hurry please Wendster!" My litte sister, Yumi, says loudly. She likes to go in crowded places. I like quiet places. I go inside to see a suprise party going on. "What? Whats going on?" I say with a shocked look on my face" "TOMMOROWS your FIIIRST DAY OF WITCH SCHOOL! and YOUR BIRTHDAY!" My mother says, extremely LOUD. "Oh...Great..Could we have less suprises?" I say dissapointed. "Sure honey, after all its your birthday!!" Mom says. Ugh. Why does my family like suprises soo much? Time to get my spellbook. It has a hidden password only my family knows.
OPENING SPELLBOOK...PLEASE WAIT.
"Welcome! Please enter the voice-password"
"Wendythewitch"
VOICE DETECTED, PASSWORD CORRECT. WELCOME WENDY.
"Hmm...where is it?..Wait! I need to ask mom something" I say to myself."Mom wheres the Cube Star Present?" My mom shudders and puts her fingers in a "Oops" Postion. "About that.." I get a bit mad. I've wanted that since i was 5. Still haven't got it. She said I would get it when i'm a more advanced witch. I AM. Normally i'm not usaully angry. Until today. "I forgot to get the l-last batch from the Most Wanted Gifts 4 Teens.." My mom says, trembling, since im a strong witch and can destroy a whole house with 1 rare power. But I would never do that to my mom. "MOM! I told you for 8 years to get it for me! HOW COULD YOU?" "I'm sorry sweetie!!" she says, looking gulity and sad. I stomp softly into my room and start sulking. My sister wakes up from her nap, shes a sloth, shes very lazy. I don't know why. "Yaaawn...What's wrong sis?" says Yumi sleeply. "Sniff..." I say still kinda sulking. When I calm down..I tell her everything that happend. "...Come with me." Yumi says quietly. She grabs my hand and makes a hush sound as we go into her closet. Yumi gets her yellow coat and shows me it. I'm confused.."Yumi? What is this?" I ask.."Yours." she hands me her coat and tells me to close the door. "Hmm? Theres something inside." Yumi smiles with pure pride. "?" "OH MY WITCHES!" "YOU GOT ME IT???!?!?" I say loudly but not enough for mom to hear. "Shh!! I love you too by the way" Yumi says, winking with A LOT of pride. I'm so happy. I could fly towitch teen school house to rub it in there faces with my expensive rare happish one. Yumi goes back to her nap peacefully with pride. I decide to go to bed too. Good night diary.
Chapter 2 is up next. EDIT: Done with chapter 2! . ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ - Spoiler:
Oof!!" I say, waking up while rubbing my eyes. "Wake up silly goose!" Yumi says tapping my head repeatdly. "BREAKFAST GIRLS!" Mom says, then sings a happy tune. "Did you get your present?" My mom winks."You did that..?' I say..feeling gulity. "Yes! Sorry I couldnt help this suprise!" My mom says clapping her hands cheerfully. "I'm sorry!!" I say while hugging my mom tightly." I eat my breakfast.. mm.. "So todays my first day of school!" "Bye Mom! Bye Yumi!" "Bye sis!" "Bye hun!" I walk to the bustop and see 3 girls and a boy, 2 of the girls are giggling and whispering the other one just smiles at me and keeps walking, the boy, I dunno.."Hi! You must be new! I'm Zoe, my powers are usaully WATER. Keep that in mind!" Hm. She seems nice, I'll introduce myself. "Hi! Yea I'm new, I'm Wendy, my powers are usaully mixed. I'm pretty strong, keep THAT in mind, heheehe!" We both laugh and talk and become friends. Maybe this will be fun...you'll never know. "So yeah, thats some of the popular girls, she makes the face "Over there" look to the 2 girls,theres a group so watch out. Rumour has it a few are nice. But some are just wicked mean, or just a bit nice and mean." Zoe explains. "Oh and, thats Jack over there, he's usaully quiet and dosen't talk to the populars. Don't tell anyone I like him. But the popular groups leader, Jessica Shay, is his girlfriend. Soo.." Zoe says. "Wow! You know that much? May i ask all the names?" I ask, impressed. "Heh ok, The 2 of them, the one whos ALWAYS in Purple, Taylor Swiesse, shes a nice one. But not so nice when it comes to judging fashion. The other one, Zariah Jones, is a bit mean, a bit nice.Hey were almost there! Lets go." Me and Zoe get on the bus togther and talk. I think this will be fun! Be right back Diary, see you at lunch. Cafeteria 12:00 "Zoe, over here!" I wave my hand around to make Zoe come over here.."Hey! Wendy!" Zoe replies cheerfully, as always.."So Wendy, i'll show you around school." Zoe smiles. "Why..? I'm fine its alright." I say. "Um...Alright.." Zoe says dissapointed.."So yeah, Jessica Shay is the most popular girl in the school. Munch Munch Munch.." "Zoe, shes just a big fat meanie, dont go for Jack,hes probaly a jerk too." I say proud. "...I gotta go.." Zoe says, shaking her head." Zoe scurries off somewhere. Did I just lose my friend? Why? I didn't do anything. Maybe I should tell Yumi about this, even if shes like.. 5, shes very wise and playful. I'm serious. She goes to school later then me. 'Cause shes wise and smart. So yeah...Bell ringing, catch you later diary. School Bus =3= What a tiring day..Sorry I couldn't write in you later diary. I hope Zoe is back to my friend.. I don't know what I did wrong. "Zoe...?" I tap her shoulder quietly, her hair waves in a diffrent direction..I guess shes still mad about something I did.. "Oh well.." I say to myself. "Sigh" I say. "Hey. Mind if i sit here?" A voice says. "Oh my gosh." I gasp, but hold my breath and say "Okay.." quietly. Zoe looks back at me, tears in her eyes, "Why..?" She whispers. But I heard. "Exuse me, isn't your name Jack?" "Yea. I'm Jessicas boyfriend" "Hm. Alright. Just out of curiousity, do you like Zoe? Yes or no? I can sense if your lying." "Gulp...yes" he whispers. Zoe smiles at me. I guess were friends again. "She likes you too. Dump Jessica and get your girl!" I say, winking. "Ok!" Jack says promplty. Walking... We all get off the bus, Zoe explains why she was mad. "Oh. What I said to you. Sorry." "Yea. Jack isnt a jerk!! " Zoe wails. "Sorry. oh hes about to dump jessica and go 4 u" Jack walks towards a girl named Jessica Shay, wearing long blonde hair a red miniskirt,and a shirt whose on the top brand charts. "Ya I got your text Taylor!" "Haha. Yea ur fashion is AMAZING" Taylor compliments Jessica. "Now shes the leader, if she says something mean TO HER. She gets OUT." Zoe explains. "Okay. Knew it.." I mumble. "Ooh! Jack honey! Ova here!" Jessica waves over to Jack. "Which Lipstick Red or-" "No. I'm breakin' up with you." Jack interuppts. "Why!?!?" Jessica says, shocked. "I like Zoe better then you" "HMPH! WHATEVER. GO TO UR LOSERS." "Haha!!" Me and Zoe laugh. "Ok so. Zoe..Wanna go-" "YES!" "Heh" Oh Diary..What a happy ending today.. I'll write back when I'm at home <3 ~Wendy
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Hey Diary! I'm Home, me and Zoe are at my house, we decided to have a sleepover, both of our moms are speaking to each other, Yumi's takng a nap as always. Sometimes, she can take a nap for 3 straight days. My Mom thinks its a "Relaxing Activity" Heh...So yeah, Were playing this game called, "Wand Wave!" It helps us practice our wand waving, but I ust use my hands since i'm an advanced witch. But I STILL have to practice. "Someones calling! Laaalalal" The doorbell rings, Mom gets up to get the doorbell, "Hi young lady! Are you here for the girls?" I hear my mom say, "Yes!" A famillar voice says. Taylor! What is she doing here? Oh yeah. Our rug.."The girls are over there in that room sweetheart." "Thank you ma'm" Taylor says and enters the room, she shuts the door and whispers "Its okay. I'm not spying, Cross my heart." Taylor says quietly. "Hmm...Promise?" Zoe says, not trusting her 100%. "Yes." Taylor says. "Fine. Alright. What do you want?" Zoe asks. "Help me. Jessicas sooo mean. And i'm nice. I know i'm not good with fashion, but could I hand out with you too in my free time?" She explains. Before Zoe could object, I say "Sure! You could be part of our sleepover, just ask your mom first." I say happily. Taylor gets out her phone and asks her mom, "Okay, thanks mom, Love you!" "So. Are you staying?" I ask her. "Yep!" Taylor says cheerfully, Zoe grumbles for a few mintues. Then we get another controller and start playing,"Wand Wave!"Together.
My Room, 7:00
"PILLOW FIGHT!!!" Taylor says. We start whacking each other with pillows, Zoe finally smiles and joins the fun, then we settle down and watch a movie with popcorn, then Zoe gets up to get us some fruit punch and ice cream, My mom put some snacks on the counter so if were hungry we could get something, Zoe says "This is actully fun, you know Wendy. I thought you were too good to be my friend, and then.. here we are. Best friends. Taylor. You too." Zoe starts getting tears in her eyes, we start hugging each other, Yumi comes in the room when we are done crying and asks, "May I stay?" Yumi says. "Sure." I say, we all go to bed at 10:00. This is gonna be a blast. But i'm getting REEEALLLY sleepy, Yaaawn, Nighty Niight Diary.....
NEXT DAY!
"BREAKFAST GIRLS!" Mom shouts out. We all get up and wash our faces and brush our teeth. "Ahh...Just like a school morning." Zoe says. Taylor fixes up her hair and puts it in a ponytail. We sit down to eat some oatmeal, strawberry for Zoe, Banana for me, and Blueberry for Taylor.My mom says stop eating for a second and listen. "Me and your mother's talked for a bit, we are going to take you to Witch Fun time Aqua Land!" We all SQUEE LIKE HORSES. OH MY WITCHES! We all say. CATCHA LATER DIARY, I'LL WRITE BACK ON THE DAY OF AQUA LAND! LOVE ~Wendy
----------------------------------------------------------------------EDIT------------------ edit2x: cast (i used fantage people)CLICK ALL THE LINKS IF U WANNA SEE TEH PEOPLE http://prntscr.com/az0as = Zoe Higgins: Girlfriend of Jack NOW.Best friend of Wendy Woove. Catchphrase: "Keep EXPLAINING not going :]" http://prntscr.com/az0ds Jessica Shay: Girlfriend of Jack Lead popular, Most popular, Mean. http://prntscr.com/az0n2 Taylor Swiesse.:Fashionita, Kinda sassy when fashion judging.. Catchphrase: "Fashion gets betta" http://prntscr.com/az0rm Jack Tray: Boyfriend of Jessica Boyfriend of Zoe Higgins. Catchphrase: "..." http://prntscr.com/az0uq Yumi Woove: Litte sister of Wendy Woove,Daughter of Wendy Woove. Wise for just a litte kid..Very playful Catchphrase: "Heheheheeeehee!!!" http://prntscr.com/az0w3 Wendy Woove: Daughter of Victoria Main person in the story.Best friend of Zoe Higgins Big sister of Yumi Woove Catchphrase: "Protect your people if you're strong and brave enough!" http://prntscr.com/az0yb Victoria Woove: Mother of Wendy Woove and Yumi Woove Catchphrase: "Money dosent grow on trees! Suprises grow on happiness!" Whew.
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| | | mich Hero Fantagian
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| | | Weekays Expert Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: A story (No title yet!) Fri Jun 22, 2012 1:13 pm | |
| Je vais vous lire bientôt | |
| | | Abstract Veteran Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: A story (No title yet!) Fri Jun 22, 2012 1:51 pm | |
| I like it. I think there are some spelling mistakes like "happened" and "tomorrow". I did get quite confused, but I pretty much understood everything going on. Let's see what happens next! | |
| | | elise Devoted Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: A story (No title yet!) Fri Jun 22, 2012 3:23 pm | |
| - weekays0 wrote:
- Je vais vous lire bientôt
Me no understando :c - Quote :
- I like it. I think there are some spelling mistakes like "happened" and "tomorrow". I did get quite confused, but I pretty much understood everything going on. Let's see what happens next!
Yeah I had to edit some mistakes and all. My friend spellchecked. Chapter 3 will be done probably on Monday --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 2 is out! PM me if you don't understand Btw i'll make the cast with it. The more I make chapters, the more people will come. And, help me with the title guys xD Comment what it should be OR, if you wanna criticize me, ask. | |
| | | elise Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 613 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: A story (No title yet!) Sat Jun 23, 2012 10:52 pm | |
| UPDATE: Chapter 3's out! I'm in a rush so I think I made some mistakes. Enjoy the story ^^ | |
| | | Abstract Veteran Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: A story (No title yet!) Sat Jun 23, 2012 11:01 pm | |
| I kind of got confused around chapter 2 and 3. I do like it though, playful story~ | |
| | | 3agle Senior Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: A story (No title yet!) Sat Jun 23, 2012 11:28 pm | |
| i like it! It sounds really awesome!!!! | |
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