Chapter 1: my story idk the title right now

Mandoki was in a tree. Thinking about her father and what happened. it happened when Mandoki was in her room drawing. She heard a loud scream. She went downstairs and hid behind the couch. She saw these men taking her father. Her father saw her, he had a tear on his face.Stop , it's bad. She got down of the tree. Feet hurt. Mandoki took off her shoes. Better. She heard a very low voice behind her. She moved her head slowly. The men. She blinked. The men who took my father. She ran as far as she can. She stopped.A tear went down her face. Mandoki sat down. She was thinking. The men.Her father.Life.

nice story but you picked the wrong forum to post this but idc cool story

oh your right i have to put in literature, sorry but thank u

No offense, but I'm rather confused >.<

This is confusing me.
I'm not understanding this story.