A Fantage Wizard Story Chapter 1

Chapter 1
A Big Surprise

One day, a girl named Allison woke up from her dream of being a wizard. She said " I really want to be a wizard one day. ". Then, she got out of bed took a shower, brushed her teeth, and changed clothes. After that, she went downstairs to eat her breakfast. When Allison was downstairs eating her breakfast her mom told her this cool and awesome surprise! Since her parents are wizards. She can finally become a WIZARD! Her mom and dad said not to tell anyone and that she will be taking wizard classes. She was freaking out alot! She was so excited!

...it was short and not very detailed o.e

~peace♥~ wrote:

...it was short and not very detailed o.e

Couldn't say it better.
This could approve tho.

sammy1553 wrote:

~peace♥~ wrote:

...it was short and not very detailed o.e

Couldn't say it better.
This could approve tho.

yea...but maybe for improv stories... o.o

Hopefully this can be made into a good story/series

yea,just detail and think think think! ; )

J.K. Rowling did non-stop writing and wrote in cafes now she has a best seller ^.^ keep writing!

Yup dreams can come true.

cool story brah! lol xD

Anime wrote:

cool story brah! lol xD

When im not busy i could maybe help her/him and make it even better It could be improved

@Anime dats why if chu go ima be sad chu so crazy xD

it is short not very detailed because it's just the beginning at the end it's gonna be better i promise

reminds me of wizards of waverly place. hate that show. but yours pretty good, i hope the school is like hogwarts