A mystery story.. Chapter 1

Senior Fantagian Posts : 298 Join date : 2011-09-18

Hello my name is Jessica. I'm 16 years old and my father was murdered by someone I do not know who it is but...I have to crack the case! Here are some of our friends who were in here and they said....

Anni: When i went downstairs i saw your FATHER DEAD ON THE FLOOR!!

Mom: * weeping * Sad

i didn't see anything!

Sis: I think its nobody and he just died? Neutral

Brother: Well sis maybe it was a jailer?

Aunt: I don't know!

I was thinking... I didn't know who it was all I heard was a scream then a thump, I needed to crack the case! can you help me out? Comment below to answer or guess!

To Be countined Neutral

Subject: Re: A mystery story.. Chapter 1 Sat Oct 01, 2011 8:28 am

It's enjoyable but the format you're using is more of a play based format. Wouldn't this make it more of a play than a story o.o?

Senior Fantagian Posts : 298 Join date : 2011-09-18

>_> i did it on fantage

so i made it a story!

Subject: Re: A mystery story.. Chapter 1 Sat Oct 01, 2011 8:44 am

Well it has a story-line but that my friend is a play.

Senior Fantagian Posts : 298 Join date : 2011-09-18

wat?

o_o i did not get what you just said..

Subject: It's a play not a story idiot >.> Sat Oct 01, 2011 9:26 am

Okay then.

IT
IS
A
PLAY

that help?

Senior Fantagian Posts : 298 Join date : 2011-09-18

yes i did ok...

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