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no
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| Subject: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] ![That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Icon_minitime](https://2img.net/i/fa/subsilver/icon_minitime.gif) Sat Jul 14, 2012 12:35 pm | |
| You all know about Spyder, right? Well he was a friend of mine and it was horrible seeing him be so immature. I told him not to do it, we all warned him but he went and got himself banned. So here's the story of what happened... - Spoiler:
It was cold that night in our little chatroom. I was just about to get a drink of water before bed when I noticed Spyder's door was closed. Thats weird, I thought. He usually has his door open. I gently turned the knob and nudged it open a bit. I peered inside his room.
He was packing a suitcase.
"Spyder." I said, pushing the door open fully and stepping into the room.
He looked up, "Oh hey, Loke."
"What are you doing packing?" I asked.
"I uh, decided to go do something." I raised an eyebrow at his answer.
"This isn't about your spamming plan is it? You know it isn't a good idea! You'll get yourself banned!" I said.
"I'm going whether you want me to or not, Loke." He zipped the suitcase closed and started walking towards the door.
I grabbed his arm as he passed, "Spyder, none of us want you to go."
But as I looked into his eyes I could see the transformation happening. It was too late.
He wrenched his arm from my hand and continued walking. I followed him down the hall, pleading for him not to go. He neared the front door and as he gripped the knob I could feel tears springing to my eyes.
We had awoken a few others with our arguing, and I felt Taost brush past me to grab onto Spyder.
"Don't leave! It's not worth it!" She cried as he shook her off of him. I watched as Cake and Caneka both tried to hold him back but their efforts were futile. Everything seemed to go in slow motion, even the tears streaming down my face. He finally opened the door and stepped into the snow. My mind seemed to snap back into action as I ran to the doorway and yelled, "Don't get banned!"
He turned around, trollfacing. I heard Caneka gasp behind me.
The transformation was complete, and as he turned around I could see tears run down like rivers on his trollface.
We silently watched as he marched away, unable to do anything now that it was too late.
We eventually went back inside and back to our bedrooms.
I didn't sleep that night.
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Sat Jul 14, 2012 7:58 pm | |
| This is a literary masterpiece. | |
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Abstract
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:00 pm | |
| It's worse if you are actually /there/ when it's happening. ;_;
But no, what Kagamine said. | |
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el
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:03 pm | |
| Brought tears to my eyes.
Awesome job. 10/10 | |
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no
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Sun Jul 15, 2012 5:47 am | |
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Dog
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Sun Jul 15, 2012 6:53 am | |
| Watch out, Harry Potter. This is a best-seller.
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Blue
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Sun Jul 15, 2012 6:55 am | |
| - Caneka wrote:
- Brought tears to my eyes.
Awesome job. 10/10 You said it bro | |
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Dog
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Sun Jul 15, 2012 7:00 am | |
| I loved that so much, that I stopped staring at One Direction to read it. | |
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Squirtle
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Sun Jul 15, 2012 7:53 am | |
| amazing. this is the next big thing! | |
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Weekays
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Sun Jul 15, 2012 8:35 am | |
| This is amazing!
brought tears D: | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Sun Jul 15, 2012 10:01 am | |
| - Kagamine wrote:
- This is a literary masterpiece.
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Golden-Star
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Mon Jul 16, 2012 6:46 pm | |
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Harry
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Mon Jul 16, 2012 7:03 pm | |
| Loke, I don't really know you, but I do know you have epic writing skills. | |
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v
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Mon Jul 16, 2012 7:05 pm | |
| This is a beautiful story, I applaud you. | |
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Flynn
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Mon Jul 16, 2012 7:05 pm | |
| This is beautiful. Better than The Hunger Games. 1000/10. | |
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Golden-Star
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Mon Jul 16, 2012 7:31 pm | |
| - Rue wrote:
- This is beautiful. Better than The Hunger Games. 1000/10.
not really. | |
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Flynn
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Tue Jul 17, 2012 6:12 am | |
| - Rezik wrote:
- Rue wrote:
- This is beautiful. Better than The Hunger Games. 1000/10.
not really. Shut up. | |
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IM MELODY'S HACKER!!!!
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Tue Jul 17, 2012 7:07 am | |
| Amazing *_*
Going to be a best seller one day, lol. | |
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Relora
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Tue Jul 17, 2012 11:38 am | |
| I don't know if I should be following the crowd on this...
So I won't.
It was fine ^^ | |
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Golden-Star
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Tue Jul 17, 2012 11:54 am | |
| - Rue wrote:
- Rezik wrote:
- Rue wrote:
- This is beautiful. Better than The Hunger Games. 1000/10.
not really.
Shut up. Your additude sucks. You have a problem. Thats the reason why i hate you. | |
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Flynn
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Tue Jul 17, 2012 11:56 am | |
| - Rezik wrote:
- Rue wrote:
- Rezik wrote:
- Rue wrote:
- This is beautiful. Better than The Hunger Games. 1000/10.
not really.
Shut up.
Your additude sucks. You have a problem. Thats the reason why i hate you. Wow, thank you. * sarcasm* | |
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Golden-Star
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Tue Jul 17, 2012 12:01 pm | |
| - Rue wrote:
- Rezik wrote:
- Rue wrote:
- Rezik wrote:
- Rue wrote:
- This is beautiful. Better than The Hunger Games. 1000/10.
not really.
Shut up.
Your additude sucks. You have a problem. Thats the reason why i hate you.
Wow, thank you. *sarcasm* No one likes u. | |
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Winnowill
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Tue Jul 17, 2012 12:03 pm | |
| - Rezik wrote:
- Rue wrote:
- Rezik wrote:
- Rue wrote:
- Rezik wrote:
- Rue wrote:
- This is beautiful. Better than The Hunger Games. 1000/10.
not really.
Shut up.
Your additude sucks. You have a problem. Thats the reason why i hate you.
Wow, thank you. *sarcasm* No one likes u. Oh dear, not this again. | |
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Flynn
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Tue Jul 17, 2012 12:04 pm | |
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Golden-Star
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| | Subject: Re: That Fateful Night [a story by Loke] Tue Jul 17, 2012 12:05 pm | |
| - Rue wrote:
- you said it, Silmaril.
I bet u and ur sister are the same ppl. | |
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