Newest Digital Drawing!

I like. I just think the nose should face her left, not her right.

I love it! Especially since it's for me lol. The only critique I have is that the mouth is a bit low and the nose is just a tiny bit too far to the right.

The eyes are beautiful, I like how much detail you put in them. The mouth is a little too low on the face though, maybe move it a tad closer to the nose.

I like the barrettes on her hair too, I think you did a great job on this. c:

9/10 You have come a long long way!

8/10 I would give you a nine but your face is too wide and to apart... or am I just used to drawing anime... I'm pretty sure my mouth isn't on my chin... Sorry If you think I give to much critism hehe me and my best friend draw anime maybe i'll show you or everyone some time... sorry for my babbling... nose should be left and maybe try to size it a little bit to make it smaller for the eyes to fit the face... there I go babbling again...

Cute, but the eyelash is on her hair, and her lips are on her chin and improper. (:
7.5/10

9/10. her eyes are too far up

Blue wrote:

Cute, but the eyelash is on her hair, and her lips are on her chin and improper. (:
7.5/10

In Anime drawings or anything related to that they make it like that(the eyes),Yes i know about the lips and i don't understand about the Improper thingy.

Abstract wrote:

I like. I just think the nose should face her left, not her right.

Yeah i noticed that when i posted the picture

Oogie wrote:

I love it! Especially since it's for me lol. The only critique I have is that the mouth is a bit low and the nose is just a tiny bit too far to the right.

haha lol.its like she is old and her cheeks dangling down.

Eldritch wrote:

The eyes are beautiful, I like how much detail you put in them. The mouth is a little too low on the face though, maybe move it a tad closer to the nose.

I like the barrettes on her hair too, I think you did a great job on this. c:

Thank you :3 ! I used tutorial on DA! I will post the link later.

αℓριηтαя wrote:

8/10 I would give you a nine but your face is too wide and to apart... or am I just used to drawing anime... I'm pretty sure my mouth isn't on my chin... Sorry If you think I give to much critism hehe me and my best friend draw anime maybe i'll show you or everyone some time... sorry for my babbling... nose should be left and maybe try to size it a little bit to make it smaller for the eyes to fit the face... there I go babbling again...

Its not Babbling! its good for ALL these Critisms! Thanks

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Thanks for all these Critiques,rating and nice comments

It's awesome coloring.

-The mouth is too far down..it's on her chin.

-The nose seems too high, and it should be facing the right.

-her neck is soo long. *-*

-I don't like the face shape, but I guess that's just how you draw. ^^

All in all, a good job.

!! No eye brows! Lol just noticed this.

The shape of the face is nice, but the proportions are off.
Even if this is an anime drawing, it should be somewhat based on real face anatomy. Just bring the eyes and nose down, and bring the mouth up. Once you've done that, you should bring the bangs lower as well. I'm also afraid the neck is a bit too long, even for anime, and don't forget eyebrows.
You can look for anime face tutorials and use some guidelines next time you draw.
Good job and good luck!

A line on the hair is connected to the top of her hair (sounds confusing but-)
The nose is facing the wrong way and the eyebrow is on top of the hair.
Also, the mouth is on her chin and I found that the eyes and nose are too high, lower them a bit and raise her mouth.