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 The Girl without a Voice [[ Chapter 1 is out! ]]

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PostSubject: The Girl without a Voice [[ Chapter 1 is out! ]]   Sun Aug 26, 2012 7:24 pm

Okay, so here's a new story I thought of.

Plot:
 

Chapter 1; Junior High:
 

Chapter 2; Friends, Enemies, and the cliques:
 

CHAPTER 2 UNDER CO.


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PostSubject: Re: The Girl without a Voice [[ Chapter 1 is out! ]]   Sun Aug 26, 2012 11:47 pm

I really like it! I can't wait for chapter 2!
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PostSubject: Re: The Girl without a Voice [[ Chapter 1 is out! ]]   Mon Aug 27, 2012 1:28 am

Awesome story! You made a good start. Wink I want to read more (That's how great this story is)! I love you
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PostSubject: Re: The Girl without a Voice [[ Chapter 1 is out! ]]   Mon Aug 27, 2012 2:09 am

This sort of reminds me of Full Moon wo Sagashite, because the characters sort of are alike... In a way.

But, this story was really nice, I like it. I hope you can make more chapters soon. c:
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PostSubject: Re: The Girl without a Voice [[ Chapter 1 is out! ]]   Mon Aug 27, 2012 5:42 am

awesome i wanna read another chapter
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PostSubject: Re: The Girl without a Voice [[ Chapter 1 is out! ]]   Tue Aug 28, 2012 11:36 pm

I added more stuff on chapter one, hope you can read it and it's supposed to end like that. ;]
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PostSubject: Re: The Girl without a Voice [[ Chapter 1 is out! ]]   Tue Aug 28, 2012 11:43 pm

I want more more more it's really good soo far.
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PostSubject: Re: The Girl without a Voice [[ Chapter 1 is out! ]]   Wed Aug 29, 2012 8:31 pm

Only thing I don't understand is why did she become mute..?

(Sorry if this is bumping..)
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PostSubject: Re: The Girl without a Voice [[ Chapter 1 is out! ]]   Wed Aug 29, 2012 8:32 pm

Simply beautiful. However I think you are making things a little too good for Olivia in the start. Try making the events more gradual.
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PostSubject: Re: The Girl without a Voice [[ Chapter 1 is out! ]]   Thu Aug 30, 2012 11:18 pm

i like it & i can't wait for chapter 2 Smile
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