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evan
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PostSubject: Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!!   Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!! EmptyFri Jul 26, 2013 8:18 pm

I am so proud....
My Drawing:
 

Actual Picture:
 

 The drawing is mirrored, because I took a picture of it. sorry about that!
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PostSubject: Re: Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!!   Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!! EmptyFri Jul 26, 2013 8:34 pm

that looks really nice, good work!

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PostSubject: Re: Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!!   Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!! EmptyFri Jul 26, 2013 10:19 pm

That is so good!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!!   Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!! EmptyFri Jul 26, 2013 10:46 pm

It's Really Nice! :> I like it~
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PostSubject: Re: Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!!   Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!! EmptySat Jul 27, 2013 12:24 am

That's very nice! Are we allowed to rate & critique?
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PostSubject: Re: Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!!   Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!! EmptySat Jul 27, 2013 12:37 am

It looks nice and you did a good job!
However I suggest try drawing it free hand rather than heavily referencing a drawing that already exists. Trust me, it feels a LOT more satisfying and enjoyable uwu
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PostSubject: Re: Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!!   Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!! EmptySat Jul 27, 2013 12:41 am

I agree with Witch; For I time I did reference drawing, and I found myself literally COPYING THE LINES rather than actually taking the appropriate steps to draw manga.
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PostSubject: Re: Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!!   Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!! EmptySat Jul 27, 2013 12:28 pm

i don't copy the lines, though.
yes, you may critique and rate otherwise.
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PostSubject: Re: Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!!   Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!! EmptySat Jul 27, 2013 12:32 pm

It's very nice.
The arms look sort of fat to me, though.
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PostSubject: Re: Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!!   Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!! EmptySun Jul 28, 2013 4:42 am

Rate: 8/10

Maybe be a bit neater with the lines and colouring?
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PostSubject: Re: Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!!   Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!! EmptySat Aug 03, 2013 6:11 pm

i give it a 4/10
it's nice and all, but many things are really out of place. for example, her torso and breasts.
her breasts are a bit too low and her torso is far too skinny compared to the rest of her.
her lower arms are fat compared to her upper arms, and her fists look quite a bit off.
another thing, try using just a character reference, and a pose reference! draw the pose (not tracing it, ofc) and make the person in that pose the character you're gonna draw. uwu
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PostSubject: Re: Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!!   Junko Enoshima Traditional drawing!! EmptySat Aug 03, 2013 7:51 pm

its okay. 6/10
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