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matthew
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PostSubject: Deceit Logic {Story by Madoka}   Wed Oct 30, 2013 10:03 am

So uh, this is a story. A story. A creepy, dystopian love story.
WARNING: This story will have some intense parts, some nasty cliffhangers, blood, and it'll keep you impatiently waiting for the next chapter.
Prologue:
 
Chapter 1:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Deceit Logic {Story by Madoka}   Wed Oct 30, 2013 10:07 am

this is incredibly well written for someone your age wow.
i've spotted some punctuation errors in the dialogue but other than that, this is really good!
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PostSubject: Re: Deceit Logic {Story by Madoka}   Wed Oct 30, 2013 10:28 am

Ahh ok!
I have a simple idea for chapter 1 which should be up before this weekend!
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PostSubject: Re: Deceit Logic {Story by Madoka}   Wed Oct 30, 2013 7:46 pm

This is pretty good for something written of your age (I make no sense, I know Very Happy ), no way could my sister pull this off quite yet. Nice!
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PostSubject: Re: Deceit Logic {Story by Madoka}   Wed Oct 30, 2013 9:28 pm

it looks really interesting! i'm excited to see the next chapter. just fix those verb tense errors and put it into paragraphs and you'll be good to go!
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PostSubject: Re: Deceit Logic {Story by Madoka}   Wed Oct 30, 2013 9:52 pm

ahh ok, i'll find all the mistakes xD (IM BAD AT EVERYTHING XDDD)
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PostSubject: Re: Deceit Logic {Story by Madoka}   Thu Oct 31, 2013 3:36 am

have you ever considered taking up the nanowrimo challenge? basically, you have to write a novel of 50000 words during the month of november and the winner gets $2000!
i'll actually write a separate topic about it wait
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PostSubject: Re: Deceit Logic {Story by Madoka}   Thu Oct 31, 2013 2:26 pm

When is the next chapter going to be ready? What day during the weekend?
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PostSubject: Re: Deceit Logic {Story by Madoka}   Thu Oct 31, 2013 5:30 pm

Hmm, probably by Sunday....
Ahh, maybe I'll try!
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