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Subject: Re: Here's a poem. Have a cookie. Thu May 22, 2014 7:04 pm
That was amazing! I could not make a poem that good. Sorry, I don't have any critiques. There is no grammar problems that I can see, and the poem is very creative. Though I am guessing that someone else will come up with something to say.