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Burittanie
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| Subject: Ribbon Girl  Tue Dec 21, 2010 8:24 pm | |
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Made in MS Paint. First time using checkered shading, and I hate it. It's probably cuz I hate shading in general xD I kinda like doing pixel art :] Rate or critique w/ cons and pro's~ EDIT: Edited the headband, does it still look weird?
Last edited by Serah on Tue Dec 21, 2010 8:47 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Code wasn't working D;) | |
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Nakira
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Age : 27
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| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Tue Dec 21, 2010 8:29 pm | |
| Fff this is adorable. *u*
Pro's: The girl is incredibly cute, and you did an excellent job shading.
Con's: Her headband looks kind of awkward, like it needs a little more shading.
9.9/10 8D | |
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pokeranger
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| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Tue Dec 21, 2010 8:50 pm | |
| I like it. :3 I can't draw on MS Paint furshur | |
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McKenna
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Join date : 2010-01-27
| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Tue Dec 21, 2010 9:26 pm | |
| I FIXED IT FOR YOU, MADAM!  Here are the things that needed fixing- (please dont get offended) The checker's color- You needed to darken it to get it closer to the dark red, because it looked weird. The ends of the ribbons- You needed to make the ends a plain dark red, then checker up to the lighter red, then stop. (I hope you get what I mean.. If you zoom in on the pixel you'll see) The black checkers- The checkers were un-needed and the colors were too far apart. I fixed that by doing a regular shade. Other than that, it was amazing. | |
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nymphie
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| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Tue Dec 21, 2010 9:29 pm | |
| that is so cute i love it really creative. | |
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Burittanie
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Age : 26
Location : California
| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Tue Dec 21, 2010 10:07 pm | |
| - kurai tsuki wrote:
- I FIXED IT FOR YOU, MADAM!
Here are the things that needed fixing- (please dont get offended)
The checker's color- You needed to darken it to get it closer to the dark red, because it looked weird.
The ends of the ribbons- You needed to make the ends a plain dark red, then checker up to the lighter red, then stop. (I hope you get what I mean.. If you zoom in on the pixel you'll see)
The black checkers- The checkers were un-needed and the colors were too far apart. I fixed that by doing a regular shade.
Other than that, it was amazing.
:O THAT LOOKS SO MUCH BETTER PLEASE MAKE A TUTORIAL | |
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bladerunner22
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| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Wed Dec 22, 2010 1:47 am | |
| awww its so cute. did you put it in your dA? 10/10 for meh!  | |
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LiyalaXD
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| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Wed Dec 22, 2010 2:01 am | |
| This is awesome, I am Horrible at paint and I can't believe this I finally met someone good at paint! | |
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McKenna
Former Staff
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Join date : 2010-01-27
| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Fri Dec 24, 2010 1:40 pm | |
| - Serah wrote:
- kurai tsuki wrote:
- I FIXED IT FOR YOU, MADAM!
Here are the things that needed fixing- (please dont get offended)
The checker's color- You needed to darken it to get it closer to the dark red, because it looked weird.
The ends of the ribbons- You needed to make the ends a plain dark red, then checker up to the lighter red, then stop. (I hope you get what I mean.. If you zoom in on the pixel you'll see)
The black checkers- The checkers were un-needed and the colors were too far apart. I fixed that by doing a regular shade.
Other than that, it was amazing.
:O
THAT LOOKS SO MUCH BETTER
PLEASE MAKE A TUTORIAL A tutorial for what?... xD | |
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v
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Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Fri Dec 24, 2010 1:51 pm | |
| OMFG THAT'S EPIC
I LOVE THE HAIR SO MUCH
I WANT IT NOW
>o< | |
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♥cherry♥
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| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Fri Dec 24, 2010 3:01 pm | |
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kiki424
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| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Fri Dec 24, 2010 5:38 pm | |
| Thats rlly cute! Great job it, and at least u tried something new, right? 9/10 | |
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Relora
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| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Thu Dec 30, 2010 4:40 pm | |
| luv it | |
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candy
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| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:43 am | |
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T
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| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:54 am | |
| Awesome! 10/10
I could NEVER pixel like that until I practice a lot xD
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sahilin
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| | Subject: Re: Ribbon Girl Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:25 pm | |
| Its sooooooooo pretty! 10/10 | |
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