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PostSubject: Moving To LA. ( This is the offical one.)   Tue Apr 05, 2011 2:47 pm

Hey Guys,
Nicki here. I rewrote my story Moving To LA. This I am hoping you guys will like more then the other one. Thanks guys here it is.


CHAPTER 1: The Beginning.
ONE day in the summer, a few days before my birthday I decided to go to my best friend Taya's house to hang-out. Taya was home alone so it was really quite in her house.... That's what I thought. I knocked on the front door, she told me to come in. When I got in her house I heard, "SURPRISE!" Taya wasn't home alone after all! I was so happy I nearly cried. Taya screamed,"HAPPY BIRTHDAY BESTIE!!" I hugged her and whispered, "Thanks, You knew I wanted a surprise party didn't you?!" Taya nodded and then everyone sat down at the tables to eat. We ate all my favorite foods,
Pizza, bread sticks, chips, and we drank Taya's famous fruit punch. It was the best party ever until,
the phone rang. " I got it" said Taya. She got up and walked over to the phone, picked it up and said, "Hello?" A second later she said. "One second please." Then put the phone down and said, "Nicki it's for you." I was puzzled. I picked up the phone and said, "Hello? Who is this?" there was a pause then the voice said, " Hi Nick, It's dad. I am calling to tell you that, we are going to be moving to L.A."
I paused. I was so shocked I almost dropped the phone. " W-w-what?!?!? I can't! I will miss all my friends I CAN'T" I hung up on him because I couldn't even talk. I ran out of Taya's house. I started bawling. Taya ran after me. " Nicki? What's the matter?" Taya said. " I am moving to L.A." "WHAT?!" said Taya. " I know, I know Taya, I will text you the details later." I said. I walked all the way home crying. I walked in the door. My dad asked me why I hung up on him I told him I was sorry and I that I only hung up on him because I was so upset. Then I walked up to my room and picked up my phone and started texting Taya," I will bring up the conversation at dinner then I text you the details later!" She replied by saying,"k" and then I just laid on my bed staring at the ceiling crying.




CHAPTER 2 What Changed Everything.

"Dinners ready" s aid my mom. I walked in the kitchen. I just really wanted to know the answer of why we were moving. I sat down at the table and look at the food. It was my favorite, corn beef and cabbage. I waited till my mom and dad sat down before I started talking. When everyone sat down I said, "Why are we moving seriously. I don't want to leave Taya and all my friends" Then my mom said, " Woah, wait you didn't tell her?! Nicki, Taya is moving too you know." I started laughing. " YEAH RIGHT. Wait... Are you kidding me?!" "Nope" said my mom. I told her that I would be right back. I grabbed my phone and ran in to the leaving room. I texted Taya saying, " Oh my gosh! YOU MOVING TOO!" After a minute or so, my phone buzzed. Taya replied, " I know. My parents just told me! I gotta eat but I'll come over at six." I replied with a k. I walked back into the kitchen and hugged my parents and sat back down. My dad said that him and Taya's dad are going to open there new bakery in L.A" I was so excited now that Taya was moving too. My mom told me that my dad's last day at his other bakery was tomorrow so, that we could back until we had to leave. At six Taya started helping my pack. Then at 7:00 she had to leave. I went to bed that night with a huge smile on my face.
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Chapter 3 will probably be out tomorrow. Thanks for the good comments guys <3


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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA. ( This is the offical one.)   Tue Apr 05, 2011 5:08 pm

Dude. I love this.
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA. ( This is the offical one.)   Tue Apr 05, 2011 6:34 pm

Very nice U have something going here ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA. ( This is the offical one.)   Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:34 pm

Thanks Makk. Second chapter will be out later. Thanks Relaor!
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA. ( This is the offical one.)   Tue Apr 05, 2011 8:07 pm

Nice! I thought you weree moving in real life.. xD Just some words were capitalized that weren't needed
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA. ( This is the offical one.)   Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:17 am

Sounds great! <3
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA. ( This is the offical one.)   Wed Apr 06, 2011 7:15 am

Wow! That's really awesome!
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA. ( This is the offical one.)   Sat Apr 09, 2011 11:38 am

3rd Chapter will be out in about 10 mins Very Happy
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