Heaven

One day Christina went to bedIt was a late night she had just go in to her pantyhouse Sudenly she heard a Pop (dreambubble) Her toes and hands had been lifted in the air she Wondered what is happening when she woke up on a cloud
Part 2 coming next

Um...

This story DOES have potential, but you have a LOT of elaborating to do if you want people to be interesting in reading it, or most of the experienced writers here are going to think you're being an idiot when you get all excited about posting a new 'chapter' (I'm sorry to say but the easiest way to get insulted on this forum is trying to write a story that's this short.)

You need to say more. I mean, you should try answering the question, 'Is this a good or bad thing for Christina?' for starters. Plus, you HAVE to write more than this. You should just type the whole story in Word and then post it.

Second, grammar. Have you ever read a book that doesn't have any @#$%ing periods in it? Just type like a normal person and not a second grader
And please, don't use emotes in your story.

You need to type more and need better grammar to make it more interesting. This more looks like of what a 4-year-old would write. Not to mean or anything. Plus, I see no periods anywhere.

This story makes no sense. I am not even kidding. It is quite an achievement to have a 3-sentence story make absolutely no sense, and I applaud you.
-What is a pantyhouse?
-Who is (dreambubble)?
-Random pop is random
-Why is "wondered" capitalised?
-Why is the purple face sad?

Oh good lord..
That was like, 3 sentences. Not even. I don't even think you can classify any of what you just wrote as a "sentence", seeing as how a sentence requires punctuation, which this "story" lacks.

First off.
This is way way WAY too short to be a story, and doesn't grab the attention of the readers at all. What is a "pantyhouse"? What is a "(dreambubble)"?

This seemed like you smashed some words together and called it a chapter. I'm sorry, I'm not trying to be deliberately mean, but this..I don't even.

This story could have potential. Alas, it's only a paragraph, so really it needs work. Perhaps some more characters, a longer plot, work on grammar and spelling, and of course a better understanding of what's going on. Other than that, it's other stuff that you need to determine.

I'm really sorry if this sounded mean, it truly is not supposed to.

*blinks*
No offense but, what was that there? I'm gonna be kind and not point out the many flaws since it's already been done.
All I'm saying is that, this story could be a great one. It just needs a bit(LOTS AND LOTS) of work.