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PostSubject: Le Critique~   Sun Sep 04, 2011 9:30 pm

Reading over Cym's critique on my old drawing, I made a new one, but it's not a chibi. xD



Please don't tell me that the colour scheme sucks, I'm already aware LOL

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tumblr / 내 호버크라프트는 장어로 가득 차 있어요. ㅡㅅㅡ
thank u elliot for the pic of me n my gf♥
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PostSubject: Re: Le Critique~   Sun Sep 04, 2011 10:00 pm

10/10!!! DID U REALLY DRAW THAT?!?!? ITS SO COOL!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Le Critique~   Sun Sep 04, 2011 11:08 pm

That's better than last time. :]

But the hair confuses me...
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PostSubject: Re: Le Critique~   Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:12 am

YEA THAT IS AWSOME I CANT BEILIEVE U DREW THAT!
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PostSubject: Re: Le Critique~   Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:55 pm

@Fantage thanks, yeah I did. x]
@Finn how? o_e

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thank u elliot for the pic of me n my gf♥
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PostSubject: Re: Le Critique~   Tue Sep 06, 2011 5:46 am

That's great but isn't the hair a bit...out?
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PostSubject: Re: Le Critique~   Tue Sep 06, 2011 12:52 pm

Melody wrote:
That's great but isn't the hair a bit...out?

Yeah, I was kinda drawing a picture that looked like that. x'D

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PostSubject: Re: Le Critique~   Tue Sep 06, 2011 2:36 pm

It's better than last time, but its still chibi style, or looks it, even if you said it isn't. Razz

One thing I think that you should work on is details. Right now it's a bit blocky, here, let me draw over it with a red pen to show you what i mean.



The main tip is, draw from your wrist, not your fingers or hand. It's hard to do with a mouse, so do it on paper and then scan/take a picture of the drawing and trace it on the computer. Or get a tablet.

Another tip is to use guidelines, I can point you in the direction of some awesome tutorials:

http://drawsketch.about.com/od/animemanga/ss/mangahead.htm
http://www.foxprints.com/tracy/misc/tutorial/char_drawing.html

I can also find some more tutorials if you like~
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PostSubject: Re: Le Critique~   Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:06 pm

@Abbey

ASDFG THANK YOUUU. I draw with a mouse. Rolling Eyes But I may be getting a tablet soon. ^u^

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PostSubject: Re: Le Critique~   Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:12 pm

Pretty good and abbey that was helpful to me as well lol
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PostSubject: Re: Le Critique~   Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:15 pm

8.999999999/10.... i don't feel like critique-ing it
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