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lucia
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PostSubject: my picture(part 2)   Wed Sep 07, 2011 2:58 am

same thing as the first one( the bamboo) i finally finished it!!! so here it is:
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like it? it took me soooo long my arms r so tired right now
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Wed Sep 07, 2011 4:46 am

Its pretty nice ;o
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Wed Sep 07, 2011 8:02 am

thanks i kinda messed up on the cat lol
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Wed Sep 07, 2011 8:30 am

Its nice. Good job. Mah faveorite part is the cat though Smile
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:48 am

Coool
I like the cat even though its mest up
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Wed Sep 07, 2011 10:12 am

it's cute! i like the look on the girl's face hehe XD
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Wed Sep 07, 2011 10:14 am

I see that the cat was too skinny or something and then you made it chubbier?
I think the wall could've been better, it gets too narrow at the bottom.
and the hut house/lines aren't even.

But it's cute :3
the girl is in a little awkward pose, and I think her wrists are too tiny.
but I like her hair and face [:
It's real cute. xD
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Wed Sep 07, 2011 12:20 pm

THE BRICKS ARE NOT PORPORTIONAL!
You didn't stay in the edges
It's off to a total slant :I
The cat's paws are more of blobs than actual paws
The houses' edge is curved.
There's no shading.

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tumblr / 내 호버크라프트는 장어로 가득 차 있어요. ㅡㅅㅡ
thank u elliot for the pic of me n my gf♥
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:23 pm

yea i kinda got bored making the wall because like u just keep repeating it so i kinda accidently made it not ordered lol! im trying to think of another picture to draw but i have no idea of what to draw can u guys give me some ideas?
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Wed Sep 07, 2011 11:39 pm

good job x3
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Thu Sep 08, 2011 12:19 am

thnx Smile
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Thu Sep 08, 2011 5:35 am

you can draw a garden? it seems appropriate for your age. you can also add in birds, people, the usual.
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Thu Sep 08, 2011 6:33 am

ok i kinda got tired so i didnt draw that much stuff lol
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Thu Sep 08, 2011 8:35 am

It's pretty good for a person your age! Very well done.

For the brick, it seems a little narrow, as Ani and Radio said, and needs to be centered. The cat is cute, but the body is a little too small for the head. The girl is good, the hat is marvelous. She's a bit slanted, however, and we need to work on that. The house is okay, too.

Other than this, well done. [:

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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Thu Sep 08, 2011 9:35 am

yea i think the cat and the bricks need a little more practice lol
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Thu Sep 08, 2011 6:23 pm

fantageroxs wrote:
ok i kinda got tired so i didnt draw that much stuff lol

If you want critique, then you shouldn't defend yourself lol.

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thank u elliot for the pic of me n my gf♥
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Thu Sep 08, 2011 6:25 pm

nice try it's nice Razz
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PostSubject: Re: my picture(part 2)   Fri Sep 09, 2011 12:25 am

thnx, im not much of a drawer though, im more a a dancer or ice skater oh and soon a voilinist because i just started.
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