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Crownie
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PostSubject: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:10 pm

Here's a preview of my new story called Charm Juice.
The chapters are kind of long sooo.. I'm only putting up like a preview of chapter one on here (;
Chapter1- "Taste of Happiness" - PREVIEW:
 

Hope it's good & you like it... Sorry for incorrect grammar o_o
kthx...
bai..........


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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:13 pm

When i clicked the spoiler i was like Shocked
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:15 pm

LOL I KNOW. K. too much. :c
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:16 pm

Wow great story for chapter 1 Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:17 pm

@Janelle ~ I know Right! Shocked

@Crownie ~ Your a Better writer than me. C: Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:21 pm

@Cake - thank you.
@queenfairy - nooo. Yours are nice and short. Keeps the attention of the reader c:
And mine has too much dialogue because I originally made this story in a manga form :s
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:25 pm

Queenfairylight7 wrote:
@Janelle ~ I know Right! Shocked

@Crownie ~ Your a Better writer than me. C: Razz
yup
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:27 pm

@Crownie ~ I tried to have not much Dialogue, whats the theme of your story? Since I only read a bit for now.
Mine is like a ♥ story one.
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:31 pm

Queenfairylight7 wrote:
@Crownie ~ I tried to have not much Dialogue, whats the theme of your story? Since I only read a bit for now.
Mine is like a ♥ story one.

It's supposed to be about the girl trying to regain her memories that was lost because of an incident that happened many years ago when she was little. The memories are supposed to be very painful so her subconscious locks them away but since she's older now she's determined to find out what was the incident. and yeahhh.... lol
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:33 pm

Wow. That reminds me of this Anime.
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:34 pm

Really? Which anime o.o
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:39 pm

Hmm. I forgot. xDD
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:40 pm

Ouuu you should pm me once you remember I wanna check it out xD
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:41 pm

Okay. I'll try to remember.
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:43 pm

I find it captivating. Bravo! I wish to read more.
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:45 pm

@Relora ~ Go to the link below her siggy its called My Stories. and Chapter 2 should be there. C:
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PostSubject: THANK YOU ^^   Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:46 pm

Thank chu lol didn't notice that ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:47 pm

Actually what I posted is only a fragment of chapter one >_< ;
Since chapter one is so long...
So you'll have to start somewhere in chapter 1.
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:49 pm

You shoulda posted it all even if it was so long I'm reading it again and I like it :3
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:51 pm

Aurora wrote:
You shoulda posted it all even if it was so long I'm reading it again and I like it :3

Aw thank you. I'm glad you do (:
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sun Sep 25, 2011 3:56 pm

Soy likey.
It's pretty good :>
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sun Sep 25, 2011 4:15 pm

Can't wait 'till the next chapter.
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sun Sep 25, 2011 4:19 pm

Lucifer wrote:
Can't wait 'till the next chapter.

If you're talking about chapter 2, it is out but since these are very long chapters I posted them somewhere else. Link is in my siggy.
&This was only the beginning part of chapter 1 x:
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sun Sep 25, 2011 4:21 pm

Crownie wrote:
Lucifer wrote:
Can't wait 'till the next chapter.

If you're talking about chapter 2, it is out but since these are very long chapters I posted them somewhere else. Link is in my siggy.
&This was only the beginning part of chapter 1 x:
just sayin`

Okay, Thank you! :]
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PostSubject: Re: Charm Juice★    Sun Sep 25, 2011 4:28 pm

that's a preview? Shocked that's like a whole chapter or a movie trailer! !
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