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PostSubject: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Tue Sep 27, 2011 7:08 pm



This is my New Story Series! Hope you Like it!

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~About The Story~:
 

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~Characters Info~:
 
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~Chapter 1~:
 

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~Chapter 2~:
 
So Goddess Siera warped them to the practice battle field. She gave Bella a Magical Pendant that let her transform.
"Here put this around your neck and say Heart to Heart Give Me Your Power." She said.
Bella nodded and did as Goddess Siera said, and yelled out
"Heart to Heart Give Me Your Power!"
She transformed to a beautiful girl, her hair color changed to blue and it turned short with a purple flower, a cute dark blue and white dress with white gloves and lastly she had a purple scythe for her weapon. Bella looked at herself,
"Is this really me?" She asked.
"Yes your form depends on your Spirit, you have a bit of hatred in your life but you are still shining with good Spirits." Goddess Siera answered,
"Now Let's start with the Healing. Wave your spear around with your body and say Plants of Life Heal this injured person."

Bella did as she said,
"Plants of Life Heal this injured person!"
Plants from the ground started coming up and healing Bella.
She was surprised of all the things she did, so Bella listened more and wanted to discover more of her powers.

"Good Job Bella. Now the attacking spells." She answered,
Bella discovered a lot of spells during the training and couldn't stop being surprised. After the training was done and Bella was reading her Favorite Book A Diary You can Write Forever, a loud noise went all over the city. She dashed down the stairs to her parents.
"Oh Mother! What is happening and who is doing this? It's to cruel!" She said frightened.
"Dear, your...your sister is doing this. She is on her transformation mode and your the only one who can stop it, so please. For this planet's sake." Bella's Mother replied.
Bella nodded and said her transformation spell
"Heart to Heart Give Me Your Power!" She yelled.
And so she transformed and flew through the air to stop her cruel sister.
"Are you my sister?" she asked.
"Why are you here! Our parents abandoned me and only kept you!" she screamed back casting the spell of darkness.
Bella dodged and replied back bravely,
"Mother did tell me you were cruel starting since you were born, so I will have to defeat you!"
She started making a big ball of light and swing her spear to attack it to Ella. It didn't hit her, so she just waved her scythe and tried to attack her on the arm but missed. Ella waved her bladed sword and swing it to Bella's Arm, leaving a cut. It bled hard but Bella still used Magical powers to stop Ella. Before Bella could attack back a voice said from the air
"Ella! Come back, we need you to do a mission."
Ella flew back to her master disappearing in mid air.
Bella was confused and returned on with a cut on her arm.
"Mother I have a cut on my arm. Should I use the healing spell?" she asked. Her Mother nodded and Bella did as she said,
"Plants of Life! Heal Me!"
A flower grew and put pollen on her cut, and the flower faded away. Bella's cut was healed, but her cruel sister is still around doing such terrible things.
It was night and Bella had to get to bed. So she read a book and when she was tired, she slept.


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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Tue Sep 27, 2011 7:11 pm

nice story
cant wait for the next chapter
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Tue Sep 27, 2011 7:12 pm

The next chapter is when their Sixteen and find out about their powers. C:
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Tue Sep 27, 2011 7:16 pm

That's pretty good.
Epic :]
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Tue Sep 27, 2011 7:17 pm

@Lucifer/Infinite ~ Thanks. C:

@Everyone ~ I'm going to start making Chapter 2. So just wait. C:
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Tue Sep 27, 2011 7:21 pm

It's short, but it's good~ <3
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Tue Sep 27, 2011 10:52 pm

I'll continue Chapter 2 Tomorrow! I need a mini break from all that writing. Thanks! C:
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Wed Sep 28, 2011 1:06 am

I like it! Keep it up
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Wed Sep 28, 2011 4:20 pm

Real good <3
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Thu Sep 29, 2011 4:53 pm

i aint reading it! Its to long but i think it will be awesome! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Fri Sep 30, 2011 7:19 pm

Chapter 2 is Done! = 3=
Sorry had not much details.
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Fri Sep 30, 2011 7:21 pm

*kinda off topic*

im a twin in rl!
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Fri Sep 30, 2011 7:22 pm

You Are! Cool. Wonder what's your twin. >.>
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Fri Sep 30, 2011 7:27 pm

its sdr o.o
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Fri Sep 30, 2011 7:30 pm

This is so awesome

SINCE THE PLANET IS NAMED AFTER MWUAH <-------------------------

loljk its cool
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Fri Sep 30, 2011 7:37 pm

@Sonic ~ Lol. I know. I was joking. Cx

@Toastie ~ Thanks. I randomly put a fantasy name Anastasia. C:
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Fri Sep 30, 2011 7:43 pm

Queenfairylight7 wrote:
@Sonic ~ Lol. I know. I was joking. Cx

@Toastie ~ Thanks. I randomly put a fantasy name Anastasia. C:

Cause im sexy

LIKE A SIMBODAYYY
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Fri Sep 30, 2011 7:51 pm

bravo bravo [: can't wait for the rest *Clap Clap*
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Fri Sep 30, 2011 7:52 pm

good job not only are you a good Siggy maker your also a awesome author
although i didn't even bother to read the chapter, just skimmed. i can tell you MUST have put a lot of effort into this
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Fri Sep 30, 2011 7:58 pm

Aww. Thanks!
I did do a lot of effort, but only 50% of it. Cx


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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Fri Sep 30, 2011 7:59 pm

Fffffff YES IM THE QUEEN ;D Love the story <3
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Fri Sep 30, 2011 8:01 pm

xXlexiXx wrote:
Fffffff YES IM THE QUEEN ;D Love the story <3

Off Topic: You name is Alexandra? o 3o
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Fri Sep 30, 2011 8:03 pm

Queenfairylight7 wrote:
xXlexiXx wrote:
Fffffff YES IM THE QUEEN ;D Love the story <3

Off Topic: You name is Alexandra? o 3o

yurrrrrppppp ;D lawl it was so epic o3o
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Fri Sep 30, 2011 8:05 pm

Wow. But your not the goddess. Cx >.>
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PostSubject: Re: The Twins of Good and Evil |Read: Chapter 2|   Tue Oct 11, 2011 6:02 pm

*Clap* *Clap* I loved it all!!
I did read it all, I just can't wait! and you should makle a quiz when you finish.. Wait can you even read this?
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