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Usui
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 1 (Beta - Un Written fully)   Sat Oct 08, 2011 3:58 pm

Aurora wrote:
@Mr.Taost Critiques are supposed to be constructive not downgrading goodness gracious. Give the kid a break he is only a few months older then you (Maybe even a year+a few months) I suggest you stop trying to start drama on HIS thread. It's off-topic and rude.

I totally agree with you

@mr.Taost you are being very rude
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 1 (Beta - Un Written fully)   Sat Oct 08, 2011 4:08 pm

I Agree with the 2 above me.

I say that the Story is great, all he needs to do is improve. I used to be a bad author and now look at me, I already have 7 Chapters.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 1 (Beta - Un Written fully)   Sat Oct 08, 2011 4:10 pm

nice try Patrick.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 1 (Beta - Un Written fully)   Sat Oct 08, 2011 4:13 pm

/facepalm mmkai,heres whats wrong:
-I get its beta,but you need to make it a bit better,as in details ect.
-KEEP TRYING even though people might hate it,improve it and people will warm up to it
-STOP BLAMING STUFF thats why people are disagreeing with you,alls you do it blame stuff on someone/something
-BE GRAMMAR-SMART go on maybe mircosoft word and find out what you have spelled wrong.
hope SOME of it hepled (sorry if MY grammar is so bad,my mouse it acting crap-ish and so I have to put it on my laptop and put my arm on it xD)
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 1 (Beta - Un Written fully)   Sat Oct 08, 2011 4:16 pm

xXlexiXx wrote:
/facepalm mmkai,heres whats wrong:
-I get its beta,but you need to make it a bit better,as in details ect.
-KEEP TRYING even though people might hate it,improve it and people will warm up to it
-STOP BLAMING STUFF thats why people are disagreeing with you,alls you do it blame stuff on someone/something
-BE GRAMMAR-SMART go on maybe mircosoft word and find out what you have spelled wrong.
hope SOME of it hepled (sorry if MY grammar is so bad,my mouse it acting crap-ish and so I have to put it on my laptop and put my arm on it xD)

/facepalm it sounds like your trying to correct him in a bad way
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 1 (Beta - Un Written fully)   Sat Oct 08, 2011 4:17 pm

Kat_kat11 wrote:
xXlexiXx wrote:
/facepalm mmkai,heres whats wrong:
-I get its beta,but you need to make it a bit better,as in details ect.
-KEEP TRYING even though people might hate it,improve it and people will warm up to it
-STOP BLAMING STUFF thats why people are disagreeing with you,alls you do it blame stuff on someone/something
-BE GRAMMAR-SMART go on maybe mircosoft word and find out what you have spelled wrong.
hope SOME of it hepled (sorry if MY grammar is so bad,my mouse it acting crap-ish and so I have to put it on my laptop and put my arm on it xD)

/facepalm it sounds like your trying to correct him in a bad way
I'm not,I'm telling him what to do and how to keep from argueing,I'm facepalming others who ARE argueing...0.0 /minifacepalm
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 1 (Beta - Un Written fully)   Sat Oct 08, 2011 4:22 pm

xXlexiXx wrote:
Kat_kat11 wrote:
xXlexiXx wrote:
/facepalm mmkai,heres whats wrong:
-I get its beta,but you need to make it a bit better,as in details ect.
-KEEP TRYING even though people might hate it,improve it and people will warm up to it
-STOP BLAMING STUFF thats why people are disagreeing with you,alls you do it blame stuff on someone/something
-BE GRAMMAR-SMART go on maybe mircosoft word and find out what you have spelled wrong.
hope SOME of it hepled (sorry if MY grammar is so bad,my mouse it acting crap-ish and so I have to put it on my laptop and put my arm on it xD)

/facepalm it sounds like your trying to correct him in a bad way
I'm not,I'm telling him what to do and how to keep from argueing,I'm facepalming others who ARE argueing...0.0 /minifacepalm

facepalm/ I was going to edit my post then u posted XD sorry though

but why are ppl correcting Patrick like really
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