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amanda
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| Subject: Drawings :)  Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:14 pm | |
| I made some drawings of some cartoons that are well known.  Warning : First Picture Is Big. - Spoiler:
 Finn 
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 Jake 
Please critique.  Fionna Finn | |
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alex
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Age : 24
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| | Subject: Re: Drawings :) Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:15 pm | |
| They're nice... but why are the arms so skinny? | |
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Zelda
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| | Subject: Re: Drawings :) Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:16 pm | |
| Love the Jake one!! The Finn one was so big I just got confused xD 8.5/10 for the Finn and 10/10 for Jake! | |
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amanda
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| | Subject: Re: Drawings :) Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:16 pm | |
| @Ani Finn's arms are pretty skinny | |
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FruitCake
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| | Subject: Re: Drawings :) Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:18 pm | |
| 8/10 for finn
9/10 for jake | |
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: Drawings :) Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:18 pm | |
| - ❤Fionna❤Finn❤ wrote:
- @Ani Finn's arms are pretty skinny
They look like noodles, are they supposed to look like that? xP | |
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amanda
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| | Subject: Re: Drawings :) Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:19 pm | |
| - Ani wrote:
- ❤Fionna❤Finn❤ wrote:
- @Ani Finn's arms are pretty skinny
They look like noodles, are they supposed to look like that? xP Lol I guess? | |
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Blackrose
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| | Subject: Re: Drawings :) Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:22 pm | |
| I like Jake much better then Finn.
Finn's arm's are skinny part of his left ear is a little bit cut off. | |
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amanda
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| | Subject: Re: Drawings :) Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:23 pm | |
| - Skye wrote:
- I like Jake much better then Finn.
Finn's arm's are skinny part of his left ear is a little bit cut off. It's cut off because scanner couldn't scan whole thing... | |
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v
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| | Subject: Re: Drawings :) Sun Nov 13, 2011 3:18 pm | |
| They both look pretty good.
Finn's eyes are a bit uneven, though.
That's all I really see, lol.
Good job. c: | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: Drawings :) Sun Nov 13, 2011 4:06 pm | |
| 8/10 For Finn.
His boot is a bit odd-looking. His eyes are uneven.
8/10 For Jake.
His head is crooked, and the body is way too round. His snout should be thinner. |
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no
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| | Subject: Re: Drawings :) Sun Nov 13, 2011 8:46 pm | |
| I think Jake's face is sitting too far right.
Also, Finn's legs seem more disoriented than usual.
Finn: 9/10
Jake: 8.5/10 | |
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