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Demonica Bishi
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Mon Nov 28, 2011 6:40 pm

**cutey_larl** wrote:
She scares me!
7.5/10.
Its good for your age!

I think if you're going to critique her on something, you should at least try and explain what she needs to fix instead of just "she scares me"
It doesn't help if you just say something looks weird and give no reason.
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Tue Nov 29, 2011 5:41 am

IchigoPanda wrote:
**cutey_larl** wrote:
She scares me!
7.5/10.
Its good for your age!

I think if you're going to critique her on something, you should at least try and explain what she needs to fix instead of just "she scares me"
It doesn't help if you just say something looks weird and give no reason.

Thanks for that. It was getting on my nerves.
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Tue Nov 29, 2011 6:01 am

Sorry but i didn't want to hurt your feelings.
critique:
try to fix the hand
make the nose and mouth
her face is kinda weird

Tips:
try to feather the flowers
Put a Star Like a Star @ heaven
fix the crown
put littlemakeup

but ill give you now 8.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Tue Nov 29, 2011 6:16 am

Could you stop saying weird? It's bugging me -o-
I'll fix the hand, i'll put the star, the makeup tomorrow. But what do you mean by 'feather the flowers'?
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Tue Nov 29, 2011 6:24 am

the flowers are bit pointy try to make it smooth from the edges
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Tue Nov 29, 2011 8:08 am

Okay then. I'll do that!
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Sat Dec 03, 2011 5:00 am

It's very pretty. he drawing is rather good for a 9 year old and you're not even very experienced in digitalized drawings.
7.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Sat Dec 03, 2011 2:31 pm

Not bad, though I think it looked better without the 'sparkle' effect. The sparkle doesn't even look like glitter or sparkle. It just simply blurred the picture.

I suggest that if you ever draw her again, that you make the arms a tad bit shorter, give her a chin, eyebrows...
Overall I think you're very good at drawing for a... 90-year old? x'D
Soo, 7.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Sun Dec 04, 2011 4:58 am

Thanks guys! ^^ I'll put those tips in my head the next time I draw.
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