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Daisy
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PostSubject: Poem-My Perfect Dreamland   Fri Dec 23, 2011 9:12 am

My Perfect Dreamland

I'm walking in a path full of roses
Trees of delight lining the path and giving me shade

I'm heading to a place full of happiness
Where all my dreams can possibly come true

Right ahead the path he is standing
Looking straight to me, starring and smiling

A perfect picture I see few inches ahead of me
A few steps it only takes to reach my one and only

Yes, it is only a scene that I can only see
For this is an insane fantasy and reality finally hits me

For I am walking in a path full of pins and thorns
The trees that lines give darkness to my path

For I'm heading to a place full of loneliness
Where everything you dream can never be true

Right ahead the path two silhouettes i see
One is him but the other is not me...
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PostSubject: Re: Poem-My Perfect Dreamland   Fri Dec 23, 2011 10:21 am

This is quite good! I like the way it mirrors itself...
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PostSubject: Re: Poem-My Perfect Dreamland   Fri Dec 23, 2011 11:02 am

HIHIHI
CAN YOU
GIVE THIS TO ME FOR CHRISTMAS?
Loljk
This is a wonderful poem, especially for your age! Keep it up!
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PostSubject: Re: Poem-My Perfect Dreamland   Fri Dec 23, 2011 11:11 am

What Aubrey said! For your age to write that, You must be a genius. I'm very impressed. (^_^)
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PostSubject: Re: Poem-My Perfect Dreamland   Fri Dec 23, 2011 5:10 pm

This is beautiful ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Poem-My Perfect Dreamland   Fri Dec 23, 2011 7:50 pm

Thank you guys.. Very Happy Very Happy I am making poem thats my habbit Very Happy Very Happy
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