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Mustard
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PostSubject: Short Poem ?   Sat Dec 31, 2011 8:02 pm

I made this in less than a minute
because I was thinking about how the dead
would ever come to life...? I don't know.

Mourn the dead and their existence
They're alive, a contradiction
Makes no sense, what a surprise?
They were beside you in the light.
They see you when you wake
They make you want to shake
But all the dead died to do
Nothing more but to die for you.

I know the end doesn't really make sense,
that's what I was looking for.
Thanks for reading.
You may critique & rate.
But don't CHANGE the poem.
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PostSubject: Re: Short Poem ?   Sat Dec 31, 2011 8:05 pm

I like it very much :3

seeing as I'm not good at poems I don't find t fair for me to rate and critique.
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PostSubject: Re: Short Poem ?   Sat Dec 31, 2011 8:48 pm

asdfghjkl. I'm terrible at poem writing;
If I gave my friend a hand,
I suppose you'd understand.
The need of every broken heart
is broken, shallow, and drowned apart.

TROLLOLOLOL. That shows you how bad I am at poetry. So I like your poem~
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PostSubject: Re: Short Poem ?   Sat Dec 31, 2011 9:25 pm

Thank you guys.
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PostSubject: Re: Short Poem ?   Sun Jan 01, 2012 11:46 am

i lyk ur poem lolz
10/10
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Mustard
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PostSubject: Re: Short Poem ?   Sun Jan 01, 2012 1:43 pm

O TY 4 LYKIN SIR!!
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PostSubject: Re: Short Poem ?   Sun Jan 01, 2012 1:44 pm

Mustard wrote:
O TY 4 LYKIN SIR!!
OMG UR WELCOME cyclops cyclops pig
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PostSubject: Re: Short Poem ?   Sun Jan 01, 2012 1:48 pm

Wow! Im impresed.
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