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Vatt
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PostSubject: What do you guys think of my poem   Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:02 am

I entered a Poem for the Writers den from Fantage.. what do you guys think of it???
FISH FISH!

You are probably wondering
What’s next on my dish
Well, it’s...

FISH FISH
They’re gonna go
SWISH SWISH
The people probably gonna find it a
DELISH
On there
DISH DISH
Yeah, that’s
FISH FISH

I’m kinda in a hurry
So please can you swish,
a little bit to the left....

cause its,
FISH FISH
They’re gonna go
SWISH SWISH
The people probably gonna find it a
DELISH
On there
DISH DISH
Yeah, that’s
FISH FISH

The fish go, yummy yummy
What’s better then worm Delish
Ill tell you, it’s...

FISH FISH
They’re gonna go
SWISH SWISH
The people probably gonna find it a
DELISH
On there
DISH DISH
Yeah, that’s
FISH FISH

Going on my little row boat
Is a little game called Fish Fish
yepp, I said...

FISH FISH
They’re gonna go
SWISH SWISH
The people probably gonna find it a
DELISH
On there
DISH DISH
Yeah, that’s
FISH FISH


OoOoO~Vatt~OoOoO


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PostSubject: Re: What do you guys think of my poem   Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:03 am

lol! its kinda like a mini song xD i like it Smile
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PostSubject: Re: What do you guys think of my poem   Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:07 am

Hahah, I enjoyed it, good luck on winning!
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PostSubject: Re: What do you guys think of my poem   Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:09 am

Epic.
xDDDDDDD
I believe u might win.

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Vatt
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PostSubject: Re: What do you guys think of my poem   Wed Apr 21, 2010 5:52 pm

Aww, i didnt winn, DX ahh well

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PostSubject: Re: What do you guys think of my poem   Wed Apr 21, 2010 5:58 pm

Well that was a great poem and i agree with val it sorta is like a song
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