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PostSubject: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:43 am

Moving to LA!
Charpter 1
One Day Nicki and her BFF Taya were sitting in Taya’s House and were getting ready for Lunch.




They were getting popcorn. When her phone rings.
“Whatt!!!!!!!! No! Why!!!!!!!!!!
I Can’t Leave My BFF!”




Taya and I Started Hugging “This Can’t be I said I Can’t do this!
I’ll Miss you too Much! Then as I Ran Home Crying I Started to Text Taya.
“ Why!!!!!!! This is so Bad!” “I’ll Miss you too Much!”




“I’m coming over right now! Ok!” “ Yes Please Come I need you too come!” Said Taya!
I went ever there and We Couldn’t Stop Crying!



“ Why is This Happing too us!” “I Don’t Know Said Taya”
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By Nicki445 and Taya1087

Chapter 2

So Nicki went home that night and asked why they were moving.
Her Dad said: “Nickerz Im sorry But my manger is making us go do other things in LA” “ Oh but why do we have to go can’t mom and I Stay here?”
“No you can’t Honey I’m sorry!” “ Are we every going to move back?”
No I Don’t Think so but Taya is Moving too you know.”
“Oh my Gosh! Really I Need to text her” As she Text Taya She started crying of Joy! She Yelled “ I’M SOOOO HAPPY!”
She ran into the house and said “ Thank You Dad! I Love You!”
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I Know that was a short chapter and there was no pics its because Taya wasn’t on Fantage so I Couldn’t Take Pics without her! Thanks For Reading Chapter 2 Chapter 3 should be out tonight or tomorrow!


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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:45 am

its great! Very Happy cant wait for chapter 2
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:47 am

I can barely understand it. Your grammar and punctuation is not the best...
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:50 am

I Need to Get the Pics First lol
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:53 am

I have to agree w/Anaira...
It's really hard to understand.
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 11:15 am

SjeeshBack wrote:
I have to agree w/Anaira...
It's really hard to understand.

My sister says its supposed to be that way, she says its a trick authors use.

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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 11:28 am

Hey, at least you used puncuation.

It's awesome!

Can't wait for more!

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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 11:41 am

Wonder what's going to happen next...
I like the story so far.
:)
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 11:44 am

its good. just...kinda hard to understand..
still good thoo Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 1:01 pm

I Posted Pics I'll be working on Chapter 2 later it may be out tonight or tomrrow thankies!
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 3:11 pm

kinda hard to understand but i get most of it Very Happy I love it so far ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 3:31 pm

This is WAY better!

The pictures help a lot too!
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 3:34 pm

Chapter 2 is out Chapter 3 will be out soon!
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 5:31 pm

It'd be better if someone got maimed by a pack of squirrels.
Besides that, nice. (:
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 5:50 pm

LOL GHOST! it is rather difficult to understand.... but good. plus, i agree with ghost XD
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Sun Apr 18, 2010 8:17 pm

Lol Ghost! But I think it is better wrh pictures! Like a picture book
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:45 pm

Chapter 4 is Out!
Chapter 4

So the next day we started Packing.
Because the next three days were moving Days!
I Was sooo Happy I couldn’t wait! So me and Taya Packed
All Day as we Packed we listened to Justin Bieber!
All you could here was “There’s Gonna Be One Less Lonely Girl!”
Finally At Dinner Time we were all done! We went to bed and the next morning we just spent are last moments in our houses! I Was sitting on the
Leather Couch when my White Mutt Puppy Bluey came up to me and Started barking. I Said “What Boy?” All You heard was “woof bark woof, woof Cry, cry” “You Ok Boy as I Walk to the door I Was So Scared as I looked out “Oh My God! Who are you?” all I heard was “MUHAHAHAHAHA!”………………….
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Sorry For Such a short Chapter! Its Very Short No Pics Sorry But didn't have the time!
Chapter 5
I Told my mom about the guy that was banging on the door she said that she was going to call the police. I Got the phone and she called and they said that they were coming down to are street now.
I started to text taya I wrote: “Taya watch out there’s this guy out on are street that is going to house after house to hurt us watch out!”
Then I Heard the door banging again I Ran down to it when I looked in the peephole I say him again. This time he had a gun in his hand. I was sooo scared that I Started Crying softly so no one could hear me then of course
My cell had to ring because Taya had to text me at that time and the buzzer was so loud that he started screaming because I guess he heard it because he said “OPEN UP OR I SHOOT I’LL SHOOT I’M NOT SCARED!”
I was soo scared I got on my hands and knees and started crawling up to my room. My mom went to see who was at the door as she walked out of her room all I heard was BOOM, BOOM, BOOM! I thought Oh My God………..

Chapter 6

I got on the ground and crawled to see what happened and what I saw was my mom laying on the ground her arm was bleeding bad and I Was Screaming I Look at the door the guy was gone. But I picked up the phone and called emergency number. The Ambulance came and Pick my mom up and put her on one of the wheeling things. I Walked Into the ambulance
And started crying I was so sad. I Texted Taya: “Taya that guy that was walking down the street shot my mom in the arm shes ok but shes hurt! Idk what to do! Help me!!” I Went home finally and finished packing and then I got all my stuff and once my dad got home we packed up and went to Taya’s
Bluey was Scared to Death but I picked him up and carried him so he was OK once we got to Taya’s My Dad put are stuff by the door and started talking to taya’s dad about what I told him of what happened I told Taya we were both so scared that we hugged each other and cried! Then we got a call from the Hospital saying that my mom was ok I jumped up and started laughing I was laughing because I was soo happy that’s what I do!.
We had to wait a couple days before my mom got out of the hospital
Then we all got into are cars and went started driving to LA We were getting exceeded when something bad happened………


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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:01 pm

Oh my gosh!!


Chapter 5 is so scary!


Can't wait for more!
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Tue Apr 27, 2010 2:25 pm

Nicki this is so scary...please don't make the dog die

I'm sensitive to that stuff. SHH
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Tue Apr 27, 2010 3:49 pm

Chapter 6 is out! Its with chapter 4-5
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Tue Apr 27, 2010 4:37 pm

Wow, Chapter 6 is great, and I wonder what happens...
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Tue Apr 27, 2010 4:57 pm

Thankies Bestie! I'm liking my story! lol
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Tue Apr 27, 2010 7:29 pm

Ooh, I can't wait for more!!!

I agree with Straw, Chapter 5 is scary!!! D:

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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Tue Apr 27, 2010 8:45 pm

i agree with all of u guys :O it is scary but cant wait for moree
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PostSubject: Re: Moving To LA!   Tue Apr 27, 2010 9:18 pm

so scary. i hope chap 7 doesnt get any scarier!
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