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PostSubject: Entering Billeh's Contest   Entering Billeh's Contest Icon_minitimeSun Feb 05, 2012 9:11 pm
So, I have decided to enter the art contest that Billehnessy is holding. I only have a rough line art sketch so far. I will edit this post when I have finished outlining and coloring it. For now, I decided to show everyone a peak at what I am doing.

Warning! LARGE IMAGE:

Rate and Critique, please!
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PostSubject: Re: Entering Billeh's Contest   Entering Billeh's Contest Icon_minitimeSun Feb 05, 2012 10:52 pm
The head looks more like an oval than a circle, but still, since I can see your style is anime, a circle seems odd. But it's your style, so.. ignore this I guess.

I really like it. The folds are perfect, but her body is crooked and she looks like she is going to fall forward.

I'm going to give it an 8/10. Great job.
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PostSubject: Re: Entering Billeh's Contest   Entering Billeh's Contest Icon_minitimeSun Feb 05, 2012 11:43 pm
It looks fabulous c: I think you did great,but as what taost said her body does look crooked. But I would rate 9/10 :3
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PostSubject: Re: Entering Billeh's Contest   Entering Billeh's Contest Icon_minitimeMon Feb 06, 2012 12:01 am
It looks really good. : )
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PostSubject: Re: Entering Billeh's Contest   Entering Billeh's Contest Icon_minitimeMon Feb 06, 2012 3:08 pm
Your style is to die for :3

It's real cute ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Entering Billeh's Contest   Entering Billeh's Contest Icon_minitimeMon Feb 06, 2012 5:50 pm
Wow...that's both cute and beautiful! I really love your style. c:
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PostSubject: Re: Entering Billeh's Contest   Entering Billeh's Contest Icon_minitimeMon Feb 06, 2012 6:53 pm
It looks amazing. I really like your style, too. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Entering Billeh's Contest   Entering Billeh's Contest Icon_minitimeMon Feb 06, 2012 6:56 pm
Thank you everyone! Toast, thanks for the critique, I will work on that. The final version will have some cleanup done. I will probably color on SAI, since my colored pencils gave me a weird color for the hair.

I didn't get to see anyone's response, since my internet got blocked soon after I posted this.
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