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PostSubject: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Wed Apr 21, 2010 3:01 pm

So this is is going to be the next part to "Blindfold"

It's coming soon, I promise! (:


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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Wed Apr 21, 2010 3:12 pm

nice titele XD
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Wed Apr 21, 2010 3:19 pm

Here is a quick 'Lil preview:

It was the summer after the dance, and it felt like nothing had changed.

But, something DID change,

McKenna and I were friends again and closer together.

“Ding dong!”

The loud ringing noise of my door bell woke me up with a fright.

I ran down the stairs as quickly as I could and couldn’t believe who I saw standing on the other side of the door.


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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Wed Apr 21, 2010 4:05 pm

OMGGG!!! EVN THE PREVIEW IS AMAZING!!
love the title. Very Happy
arghhh!!! now i desperate to find out wots guna happen!!!!
cant wait ;D
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Thu May 06, 2010 2:27 pm

~Chapter 1~
~After the dance~

It was the day after the dance, and it felt like nothing had changed.

But, something DID change,

McKenna and I were friends again and closer together.

“Ding dong!”

The loud ringing noise of my door bell woke me up with a fright.

I ran down the stairs as quickly as I could and couldn’t believe who I saw standing on the other side of the door.

Bridget,

I walked towards the door and slowly opened it.

“Lyli, I need to talk to you,” Bridget said as she let herself come into my house.

“What’s left to say?” I said as I questioned Bridget’s actions.

“A lot, Lyli, a lot,” Bridget said as she sat down on my stairs.

I pursed my lips together and put my hand on my hip, just staring down at her without saying a word.

She looked up at me with a hurt look on her face.

“Lyli, I’m really sorry for hurting you,”

I laughed.

“You don’t have to feel sorry for me,”

“You have to realize what you did to McKenna…”

Before Bridget could say another word, I opened the door and looked at Bridget.

She was perplexed.

“What?” She said

“Leave,”

“We are no longer friends, but you could’ve figured that out by now,”

She ran out of the door, screaming;

“I had no choice! You have no idea what it was like being forced to do something that will make you lose your only friends!”

Before I let her finish her last words, I slammed the door, and stood there trying to figure out what Bridget meant.
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Thu May 06, 2010 4:04 pm

awww!!!
i realllyyyyyyyyy cant wait for next chap
i loved it!!
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Thu May 06, 2010 4:49 pm

Thats really great!

DARN YOU BRIDGET!

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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Thu May 06, 2010 6:26 pm

Its great so far, I like it Smile.
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Thu May 06, 2010 7:08 pm

I like it too! :3

Can't wait for more! :3

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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Thu May 06, 2010 7:35 pm

I lurve it so far! Awesome!
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Sat May 08, 2010 9:07 am

~Chapter 2~

I felt the summer air blow on my face as I was riding my bike to McKenna’s house

On my way there I past Max’s house,

And riding past his house reminded me of how much I used to like him; and what a jerk he turned out to be.

I froze for a while;

The memory that I swore would haunt me did just then;


“Before we arrived there, her eyes were full of tears,

She knew, and she saw.

She quickly ran over to Max and Bridget…

“Max! How could you!”

Everyone stopped dancing to see what all the hype was about, and the music kept blaring through the speakers.

McKenna turned to Bridget

“And you know what, I thought you were my friend, but instead you turned me against Lyli and make me think you were the “Good guy”!””


Immediately, I thought of what Bridget said the other day.

She claimed that she was “forced” to kiss max, but the look on her face when she was kissing him didn’t seem that way.

As I came up the inviting Gregory drive way, I was greeted by a strange dog.

When did McKenna get a dog? Were we that drifted apart because of Bridget?

All these questions flooded my brain, but I was too focused on the cute little puppy barking uncontrollably at me.

“Oreo,” A recognizable voice came from the garage. “What did I tell you about bark-“

“Oh,” McKenna dropped her Popsicle.

What the heck was going on here and why was she so surprised to see me?

“Hey, Lyli,” She said while jumping over her melted Popsicle to run over to me.

“Heyyyy,”

The dog ran away.

“Is that your dog?” I asked

“Yuuup, I got him yesterday; isn’t he so cute?”

“Yuuup!” I said

“Haha yeah,” McKenna said.

“Anyways, what’s up?” McKenna began to say, while going into the freezer to get 2 popsicles.

She handed one to me.

“Well,” I began saying while licking my popsicle.

“The other day,”

“BridgettoldmethatshewasforcedtokissmaxandIdon’tbelieveher,doyou?”

“Haha, what,” McKenna asked, confused.

“Bridget came over and…”

“I know she came over yesterday, crying.”

“And,” I asked

“Annnddd, she told me the whole kiss-max-to-make-me-hate-her-forever thing was part of a dare type thingy.”

“Yeah, she said something like that to me, too.”
“What did she say,” McKenna asked.

“She said she was forced to kiss him,” I began to say “But when she was kissing him, it looked like she was happy to,”

“I know right,” McKenna said.

Something in her voice told me that she didn’t want to bring up Max, again.

“Come awn, let’s go to the pool,” McKenna insisted.

“Okayyy…race yaaaaaaaaa!” I giggle-said.

“Haha, I’m gonna get cha!”

All of sudden, she pushed me in the pool, without warning,

“Oh no you didn’t, gurlllllll,” I giggled trying to make a straight face, while splashing her with water.

“WATTTEERRRRR GUNNNNN!” She screamed-giggled.

We both broke into hysterics.

Everything was back to the way it was before, but even better.

My new iPhone began to sing,

“Baby there’s a shark in the water, there’s something underneath my bed, oh please believe I said…”

I quickly grabbed it, and began to read the text.

Max: Hey, do u wanna go 2 a movie with me nd B?

Did he send the text to the wrong person?

“Kenna, come herrreeeeeeee,” I screamed,

“Whatttt is itttttttt,” she said.

“Look for yourself,” I said as I gave my iPhone to her.

“Ehmagawd,”

She froze.

Then stared at me,
Then ran.
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Sat May 08, 2010 9:11 am

Ehmagawd.

Ish awesome!

MAKE MORE NOW1!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Sat May 08, 2010 9:12 am

AWESOME.
Love the story <3
Can't wait for the third chapter! :DD
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Sat May 08, 2010 10:04 am

make moree!!!
cant wait for next chappterr!!
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Sun May 09, 2010 5:19 pm

I cant wait for the next ch!!
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Sun May 09, 2010 7:38 pm

Lovey the sotry!!! I can't write that well! xD
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Fri May 14, 2010 2:08 pm

Note: This chapter contains mature content.

~Chapter 3~

I searched for McKenna for hours, with no luck.

“McKenna?”

I heard crying, more like bawling.

“McKenna, are you in there?”

“Y-yes,” She cried

I pulled back the bushes to see McKenna’s mascara and eyeliner running down her cheeks, crying.

“McKenna, I bet he sent the text to the wrong person.”

“Ya, like that would freaking happen.”

“McKenna, I’ll text him back if you want me too.”

“Saying what? I wanna ditch my friend for a slut and a jerk?”

“She’s not a slut, Mck-“

“What?”

She raised her voice.

“So, you’re saying that the way Bridget kissed max wasn’t slutty at all?”

“It was but-“

“But?” She raised an eyebrow at me.

“McKenna,” I began to say

But she got up, wiped her tears away, ran into her house, and slammed the door in my face.

I stood there, crying.

Thanks Max and Bridget! Now McKenna freaking hates me…Again!
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Fri May 14, 2010 2:55 pm

awww. once again. i cant wait for more!!!
i lovee itt
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Fri May 14, 2010 3:03 pm

Awww....

I don't hate you!!! xD


MORE!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Fri May 14, 2010 7:50 pm

neic.
FOURTH CHAPTAH NAOS.
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PostSubject: Re: Poison Ivy - A "Blindfold" Sequel   Fri May 14, 2010 8:34 pm

I WANT MORE NOWZ.

IT'S ABSOLUTELY FANTABULOUS!

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