Deceased. ( 5th Story in Maddie's Ghost.)

The sunlight glows down onto my pale skin. I'm barefoot, and wearing nothing but a short, white dress that feels like a piece of cloth wrapped around my body. Even though i'm an official angel, Ribbon's guards insisted that they keep me in handcuffs just incase I try anything funny. So here I am, handcuffed to a poll. Unfortunately, the red marks on my hands are too weak, and they burst, spraying blood everywhere. I groan, wiping my bloody wrists on my dress, which leaves a big red blotch right smack in the middle. Thank God that most Angels are still sleeping. Most of them. When I turn around, I see two small Angels. My eyes Widen. Its Stream and Alyssa's little sister.

They raise they're eyebrows at me, then shake there heads. Alyssa's little sister comes forward. " Oh, why are YOU here?!" She spits at me. " I-I d-on't know." is all I say. " Well, I'm Janelle. Thanks for killing me, by the way." Then there off. I place my chin in my hands. I don't want to be here, and I don't deserve to be here. Eventually, the devil inside me will eat my heart, and I'll become evil. I can already feel the effects. I already know Alyssa is dead. I really wish I was with her. For good. I look at the "ground," which is really a bunch of clouds, and see a hole. I sigh. Closing my eyes, I through myself back. Maddie, Is now Deceased. I can almost hear Ribbons voice saying that.

I love it, again! Are you going to make another story? They're really good!

Omg i just read all of them these are AMAZING!

Rainbow. wrote:

The sunlight glows down onto my pale skin. I'm barefoot, and wearing nothing but a short, white dress that feels like a piece of cloth wrapped around my body. Even though I'm an official angel, Ribbon's guards insisted that they keep me in handcuffs just in case I try anything funny. So here I am, handcuffed to a pole. Unfortunately, the red marks on my hands are too weak, and they burst, spraying blood everywhere. I groan, wiping my bloody wrists on my dress, which leaves a big red blotch right smack in the middle. Thank God that most Angels are still sleeping. Most of them. When I turn around, I see two small Angels. My eyes Widen. Its Stream and Alyssa's little sister.

They raise their eyebrows at me, then shake their heads. Alyssa's little sister comes forward. " Oh, why are YOU here?!" She spits at me. " I-I d-on't know." is all I say. "Well, I'm Janelle. Thanks for killing me, by the way." Then there off. I place my chin in my hands. I don't want to be here, and I don't deserve to be here. Eventually, the devil inside me will eat my heart, and I'll become evil. I can already feel the effects. I already know Alyssa is dead. I really wish I was with her. For good. I look at the "ground," which is really a bunch of clouds, and see a hole. I sigh. Closing my eyes, I throw myself back. Maddie, Is now Deceased. I can almost hear Ribbons voice saying that.

I corrected your spelling. Good short story, I kind of like it.