pokeranger
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 | Subject: Love Story (sort of) Act 1-2  Fri Mar 12, 2010 7:10 pm | |
| So I was bored, and I made a story. It was stuck all in my head! I don't think you guys might like it. But in the middle, it gets better. I only wrote the beginning. *takes deep breath* Okay, here it is A Story
Act 1:
Pokeranger: When I turned level 50 in fantage, I had a party with my friends! We celebrated until the end. Then later, my friend, Kiki, said you have to officially work. I thought no one would accept me. Not the furniture shop, not the board shop, not the Id shop, not anywhere. Until, I finally found the clothing store. They thought I was like pro. They wanted to let me work there. Later, I got my own shop, and I was the top clothing manager/boss.
( Shows fantage, later, moves to Pokeranger sleeping in bed, phone rings. )
( Voice mail ) Hey, please leave a message at the sound of the beep! *giggles* Thanks!
Grace: Hey Pokeranger! I’m visiting fantage tomorrow! I haven’t visited for a long time! Hey, I’m wondering if you can come for the giving of the one hundred thousand stars? Do you think you can come? Thanks!
Act 2:
( Pokeranger takes deep breath )
Pokeranger: Work will be over in eight hours…
( work passes by )
( walking outside )
( pokeranger bumps into a guy )
Pokeranger: Sorry!
Unknown Guy: It’s ok. Names Damien!
Pokeranger: Pokeranger. ( shakes hand )
Damien: Ya, I was heading home, can I have your number?
Pokeranger: Sure! Its 123-4567 yours?
( tapping numbers on their phones )
Damien: 890- 1254
Pokeranger: Okay, see you later. ( blushing )
( both walks different ways )
( cell phone rings on Pokeranger’s phone )
Pokeranger: Hello?
Grace: Hey Pokeranger!
Pokeranger: Hey Grace!
Grace: Hey, do you think you can come over?
( Pokeranger gazing in the sky, looking dreamy )
Grace: Pokeranger? You there?
( Pokeranger blinks )
Pokeranger: Sure! Be right over!
Last edited by pokeranger on Sat Mar 20, 2010 7:33 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
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McKenna
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| | Subject: Re: Love Story (sort of) Act 1-2 Sat Mar 13, 2010 8:05 am | |
| Cool! I like it! Can't wait for more! | |
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pokeranger
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| | Subject: Re: Love Story (sort of) Act 1-2 Sat Mar 13, 2010 10:52 am | |
| I think the beginning is boring... | |
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McKenna
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| | Subject: Re: Love Story (sort of) Act 1-2 Sat Mar 13, 2010 11:03 am | |
| Nah! Its not boring at all! Its great! | |
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pinkys
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| | Subject: Re: Love Story (sort of) Act 1-2 Sat Mar 13, 2010 11:16 am | |
| Love it! can't wait for more and its not boring!! | |
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pokeranger
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| | Subject: Re: Love Story (sort of) Act 1-2 Sat Mar 13, 2010 11:23 am | |
| Really? maybe I can make more, but I'm afraid it won't come out so well... | |
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