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PostSubject: diary of a tourist: Pokemon fanfic   Sat May 22, 2010 12:47 pm

Dear Diary,
So many things happened today... where do I start? Ah yes! We finally made it to the airport in Goldenrod, which means that we are about to tour all of the Kanto-Johto landmass! Josh jokingly calls it "Kanjoh," even if that dosn't make sense. So annoying.... verything here is so placid compared to technologic Sinnoh. Humanity and nature intersect in a way I havent seen since forever. Beautiful. Here is a photo: That kid with the blue hair is Josh. Doesn't he look annoying?

first, we had to fly to the safari zone gate. Josh didn't have fly in his moves so he had to use on of my pokemon. We finally reached the Safari Zone. I expected it to be full of advertisements and fees and stufff like that, like the Safari Zone in Sinnoh, but it was sort of depilated. It was a little homely, but that was part of its charm. Th fee was slighty higher, but that didn't matter because the game was harder. I only got three pokemon! It was still early morning, we hadn't even had breakfast yet! However, the shopkeepers were here early and I managed to get a hand-made quick ball. It was nice and smooth.

Rout 48 was very non-descript. A fearow attacked us, though, so I don't like that road alot. "A pleasant path from the base of the mountain to the Safari Zone?" yeah right. Route 47 was beautiful. There were few wild pokemon, the cliffs were imponent but not intimidating, the waterfalls... wow. the steam at the bottom made its way to the top, where we were, making the air humid. It caught the sunlight so you could see each individual water droplet, dancing through the air. We made our way down to the water using a cave. It was a dark cave, and I was scared. Josh rose to the occasion and acted all Hero-y. Ugh.

The water was blue and green and yellow and took my breath away. Even Josh was silent. There were ALOT of tentacools, dashing shadows beneath the sun-struck surface. We used our pokemon (for me, an empoleon) to surf on the waves, and after going through the water we arrived in Cianwood city. We ate breakfast there and relaxed. the few people out on the streets wanted to battle, so we did a double battle andlost. The sky was clear of clouds, but a little glaring, so I put on my visor and sunscreeen. We left the quaint town and realizd the next destination was route 41.

There were TONS of whirpools. I hated that place. the water was dirty with random stuff, and white due to the whirpools. Josh wantd to go to Whirl Island, so we did. We shouldn't have. It was dark and full of Golbats. For a chiroptophobe like me, it was terrifying. He also wantd to find Lugia, of all things, But I dragged him out. We reachd land, but not before I had salt water in my mouth, nose, eyes, ears, and certain other places I will not mention. I had to comb my hair again, but it was hard with so much water in it! And I was dizzy.

We could calm down on route 40, where we shared some food. It was dotted with small isladns, and there were few waves. There was this nice girl called Elaine who I greeted, then battled. It was sorta like rout 48, ony without the fearows. Then.... we reached OLIVINE CITY! i say it ike that because thats how it was.

Shouting, yelling, screaming, laughing. Agh, it hurt my ears. We managed to see a seasid sunset, though. It was nice. the docks needed some claning up, becaus the wood was rotting. Some ships went all the way to Vermillion City! We didn't need to go to Vermillion City, though, we needed to go the the lighthouse.

glitter lighthouse looked plain and unadorned, but inside it was pretty fancy. Josh immediately sprung up the stairs to the top, so I had to follow. The ladders were very steep, and sort of rickety. the top, though, was another matter. You could see the whole town, outlined by sea. Th world glittered in the sunset, as all the magic in the world stopped here t rst. The town did not seem Hectic from up here. It seemed serene. Th world was frozen in time. Ampharos looked at us quizzically. Josh tried to break th silence, but he could only muster "Wo-wow,"
Here's a pic: !

We had dinner in Olivine café. We could see the lighthouse through the window. Well, now I have to go to sleep1 See you tomorrow
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PostSubject: Re: diary of a tourist: Pokemon fanfic   Sat May 22, 2010 12:55 pm

Nice start! i like it!
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