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Bluerivers1
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PostSubject: ~Growing Up: The Story~   Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:41 am

This is based on the Growing Up series, but some parts are a little off. (:
Blue never really had a name, so I'm giving her one lol, Rachel. Turtleby's name is Logan.
Chapter One

"Mom, I'm serious..."
"Me too, Rach...the last party you went to all the kids were..."
"I know, Mom. But was I one of them?"
"No, but-"
"But what? Why can't I go!?"
"Because I said s-"
"MO-"
"Because I SAID SO! Go to your room, Rachel Lynn. That's the last I wanna hear from you for the next 24 hours."

With tears in my eyes I felt like screaming I hated my mother. This was Alicia Danforth's party! Everyone knew to be cool, you had to go.
And since Logan, my boyfriend, was going, I was afraid another girl would make him cheat on me.
I could NOT let that happen.

Maybe it would now...I pictured him dancing with another girl...her nose in his neck...Animal by Ke$ha playing(our song), and him lightly kissing the top of her head, and then he'd move to her lips and-

I slammed my door.

"Don't slam!" Mom yelled, not sounded as frazzled as she had earlier, moreso tired.
"TOO LATE!" I screamed back, not at all tired.
I sobbed into my hand-knit pillow and then threw shoes at my wall.
"Ew, Doc Martens." The boot hit my mirror. Then I had an idea.

What if I sneak out? The voice inside my head urged me to do it.
I was ready. I was NOT going to let another girl steal Logan.

Or miss my chance to be cool.

I reapplied my mascara, touched up my eyeliner, and put on clear cherry-flavored lip gloss. My blonde, wavy hair was perfectly conditioned from earlier, and my deep navy blue eyes were shining and gleaming, part tears and part excitement.

I looked at my outfit: ripped dark-wash skinny jeans, Aeropostale shortsleeve pink shirt, and black Ugg boots.

Perfect.

I climbed out my window, jumped down on the roof, and snuck around the side of the house.
Then I ran.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Growing Up: The Story~   Sun Jul 18, 2010 12:54 pm

Reached the destination??? Continue! I think it will have an amazing end!!!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Growing Up: The Story~   Sun Jul 18, 2010 2:21 pm

The plot seems interesting, and I like how you used a kinda cliffhangerish (that's not a word XDDD) ending. Can't wait for more! :3
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PostSubject: Re: ~Growing Up: The Story~   Sun Jul 18, 2010 4:22 pm

I Saw the utube Series so im hopin it turns out like that i cant wait for more!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Growing Up: The Story~   Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:45 pm

This is a good story, at long as you keep some of the "pregnancy stuff out from the movie.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Growing Up: The Story~   Sun Jul 18, 2010 6:27 pm

Oh, and I saw the YouTube series as well. You've got talent, and I hope to see more YouTube series from you.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Growing Up: The Story~   Sun Jul 18, 2010 6:37 pm

OMG! It's awesome, make more! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: ~Growing Up: The Story~   Sun Jul 18, 2010 11:35 pm

UHMAZIN<3 please continue
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