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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Thu Oct 07, 2010 1:06 am

"Well, then what do you not understand?!" He glared at me like if I was the most stupid thing ever.
"Uhhh... I don't understand how you got that information, sir," I said.
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Thu Oct 07, 2010 4:42 pm

"Well, I am a researcher.." He murmured, and sighed. Wait what? This made no sense. As I crossed over, and then stared up.
"Ugh..."

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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Thu Oct 07, 2010 5:04 pm

I fell down.He slapped me in the face.Ow! I said.I looked out the window a shooting star came by.I wished for......
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Thu Oct 07, 2010 5:05 pm

I wished... to know more about my past.

Should I explain who I am first to you?
My name is David Souren. (Just came up with some random first name, if that's okay.)
Both of my parents are dead, but sometimes I see them as ghosts. Either in dreams, or in real life.
Or at least I see my mother. I've never seen my father as a ghost. Heck, I'm not even sure if he had ever seen me alive, not even as a baby. Maybe he's still alive...?

Then who have been taking care of me through all these years, after they both apparently died? My evil aunt. She's an abomination. My mother's only sister, and my closest living relative. She tells me that my father left my mother while she was pregnant. Later, 2 years after giving birth to me, she died as well, and according to my aunt her last words were: "Take care of my baby, my dear big sister."
That's all she had told me about my past. I barely remember anything by myself either, do I have a weak memory? I guess so. That's probably why I want to know something more about myself. About my past...(Did you like it, Timegear? Smile)

Anyway, back to the actual story:
"Why? Why won't you tell it now, Mr.researcher?" I begged.
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Thu Oct 07, 2010 5:10 pm

"Okay, shinigami." And smiled.
Shinigami? WHAT?
ARENT THOSE JAPANESE?
"Stupid joke teacher."

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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Thu Oct 07, 2010 5:16 pm

Ye,my past!I finally know more!Now that I know more I can go back to the researcher.I stepped one step then another,then another,then another.I got furios.I yelled at the researcher.He punched me in the face.....
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Thu Oct 07, 2010 5:53 pm

...and I started bleeding from my nose. Such a mean researcher guy. First refusing to tell me my secret before a week had gone, and now using violence on me?!
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Thu Oct 07, 2010 6:43 pm

"But whadda ya mean by shinigami?"
"You are, a shinigami. Simple."
As I sighed, a bit in astonishment, and a bit in mock.
"Wha?"
"Now go back."

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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Thu Oct 07, 2010 7:04 pm

I don't think I'll ever forgive that dumb old researcher.Did he really have to do that!?I mean gosh!I'll never,ever trust someone like him!Doesn't he know I have anger managment problems?After that,I left his house.I went home,brushed my teeth,then went to bed.The next day,I needed a vacation from him.I don't think he should really be a researcher.For my vacation,I wen't to play tennis for a while.About an hour later the dumb old researcher came!BACK OFF!I hollered MAYBE YOU SHOULD GET AWAY!He sucked his cheeks in and walked away.....
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Fri Oct 08, 2010 4:25 pm

But suddenly, he stared at me.
"Pick up lost souls." He called.

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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Fri Oct 08, 2010 4:53 pm

I had a puzzled face after he said that.I don't know what he men't,but I AM sure it ment SOMETHING.After that,I saw him walk away.But then something very,very suspicious happend.I don't know why that researcher did it.But I am NOT calm about.It's like a dog barfing all over ya!He was about to go into a building.But that's not it,no that's not it.HE PULLED OUT A GUN!!!I couldn't beleive it.HEY!I hollered out-loud.HE'S GOTTA GUN!First,everyone stared.But then,a random guy popped out and said,N.Y.P.D!He yelled.The researcher ran ran as fast as he could trying to reach the building.The cop caught him.He punched the cop in the face.The dog pressed his hand against his face an said,YAH!The researcher ran away.As soon as he got into the top floor,he backed up,and just out the window.I had a shocked face on me.I fell on the the floor,and said,HOLY CRAP!I got up and ran to my car....
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:25 am

And decided trying to drive by myself. That didn't go so well...

When I finally got home, my car was as bulky as... well, let's just say that it was extremely bulky.

Oh, and should I mention that I think I saw a slug crawling out of his ear and falling into the water nearby while I drove away from him? Ew.
I don't really trust that researcher guy anymore, especially not when there has been a slug inside his head. But I'm pretty sure it wasn't a normal slug, though. Not from Earth, at least. I mean, come on, I doubt there are any slug species native to this planet that crawls into your head!

I felt nauseous about that thought, and ran to the closest toilet...
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Sun Oct 10, 2010 11:53 am

The fliggeroggan was in the toilet.
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Sun Oct 10, 2010 11:56 am

And so was a small, whimpering girl. She looked very sad, and suddenly held up a gun at me, and shot it. The world went blank. What the heck? Why wasn't I dead.
A young women appeared, with silvery-white hair, and red blank eyes.
"Pick up lost souls.." She called, over and over again.

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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:44 pm

WHAT IS THIS i screamed. hello said
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Sun Oct 10, 2010 6:30 pm

I have risen to heaven?Was I dead?Who knows!My face went pail.I fell on the floor.I sighed very hard.Was that lady an angel?"WHO ARE YOU?" I said.Something very misterious appeard.It was....
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Mon Oct 11, 2010 3:32 am

the Ellimist! Shocked (Remember that guy? If not, then check page 4 of this thread)

"What are you doing here!?" I yelled.
NOTHING, I WERE JUST CHECKING HOW THINGS WENT.., the Ellimist said.
"Come on, I know you're up to something. Was it you who froze time?" I asked. Everything except me and that Ellimist guy were frozen, you see.
OKAY, YOU WIN. YES, I FROZE THE TIME. BECAUSE I WANTED TO TALK WITH YOU, he said.
"Then what do you wanna talk about with me?" I snapped back.
YOUR PAST...
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Mon Oct 11, 2010 6:17 am

"...Is...Idk" Shouted z3r0.

z3r0 randomly acts epic and doesnt kno wut the story is about xD
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Mon Oct 11, 2010 10:52 pm

"Your past is the best past throughout the world.You should be proud of it."Said the Ellimist.My face got puzzled-up.Its like little twsities were in my brain.Just then,I heard a loud slam.It was....
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Tue Oct 12, 2010 1:00 pm

The fliggernaggle! Shocked

"Ksey focbsaw klro! Blahblehbla!"(Me is dead too! No no no), that weird foot with three noses said.

I looked back at the Ellimist. "Okay, sure my past could be awesome. But could you please TELL ME ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED!? I'm dead anyway, so that won't matter much anymore..."
AS YOU WISH. I AM YOUR FATHER, the Ellimist said. I was shocked.

"You are my WHAT?! No, that cannot be true. Would you mind explaining closer how that can be possible?"
JUST KIDDING! Laughing I JUST WANTED TO SEE YOUR REACTION, LOL! And then he ROFLed.
I got annoyed, and wanted to smack him.
"Okay, do you even know my past, or are you just trying to annoy me?" I said.
NEITHER. BUT I COULD TRAVEL BACK IN TIME TO SEE YOUR PAST.
"Then do it," I told him/her/whatever that ellimist thing is.

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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Tue Oct 12, 2010 1:33 pm

He pushed me back into earth.
"See the people crying? Pick them up."
"Grab their souls."
I stared at the man, what?
Okay, what the heck.

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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Tue Oct 12, 2010 2:02 pm

"Uhhh... How do I grab their souls?" I asked the man. This entire "pick up their souls" thing was confusing, at least for me.
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Tue Oct 12, 2010 2:07 pm

"JUST PICK UP THEIR SOULS! YOUR THE SON OF MERODI FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!"
No. My moms name is Lisa.

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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Tue Oct 12, 2010 2:18 pm

Or maybe... Maybe Lisa is just my step-mom, and that old aunt my step-aunt? Or is he mixing me up with somebody else? Shocked

Oh, well. I guess I've got to pick up those souls, however I do it.
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PostSubject: Re: Finish The Story   Wed Oct 13, 2010 5:43 pm

I DO NOT KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN!I hollered.TELL ME!TELL ME NOW!His face got red,like chilly red peppers.Or just TinkerBell.I just ran out of the room after that,he shouted come back,but I didn't.He chased after me.Haha your cant catch me!I thought in my head.I couldn't sleep tonight.Something slammed the door.I checked the windows,BUT THEY WERE NOT OPEN!I stuck my hand into my draw and looked through there for my flashlight.Something bad was there,very bad.It was....
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