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Blackrose
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PostSubject: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:09 am

hm this is a compairson

Life is like a rose.
A pedal is like a year
and a year is like a pedal
the years go by
And when the last pedal is at a stand still it floats away
And marks the end of the human life cycle

i don't know if it was that good but hope u enjoy!
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:18 am

Wow! Very nice! Pretty meaningful BD
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:19 am

thank you italia! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:33 am

I like it!!

it mentions death..
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:39 am

lol jk but i rlly like ur comparison Smile
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Fri Jul 29, 2011 8:16 am

hm thank u!
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:06 pm

I love it. You should keep on making more poems!
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:10 pm

It's real nice.
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:37 pm

Thats liek the first poem i understood O_O
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:23 pm

wow thats really good anime. good job.
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:39 pm

Katie_Forever wrote:
wow thats really good anime. good job.

Agreed. You should make more.
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Fri Jul 29, 2011 9:04 pm

hm @finn O o
@Relora thank you
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Sat Jul 30, 2011 1:42 am

wow, not bad anime! obviously you have good writing skills Wink
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Sat Jul 30, 2011 1:48 am

wonderfull *claps*
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Sat Jul 30, 2011 1:53 am

thank you! oh and i made this up all in my head Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Sat Jul 30, 2011 2:08 am

Good poem. Like dancing daffodils.
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Sat Jul 30, 2011 2:23 am

thank yhu Smile
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:43 am

^really? Don't forget me when you are the next J.K Rowling, lol
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:51 am

lolz melody ty
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:51 am

lol np anime it's a really good poem Wink
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PostSubject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)   Sat Jul 30, 2011 7:19 pm

hm thank you!!!! i i will i will post another poem but ima gonna have to think about 1 first
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