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Blackrose
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| Subject: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good)  Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:09 am | |
| hm this is a compairson
Life is like a rose.
A pedal is like a year
and a year is like a pedal
the years go by
And when the last pedal is at a stand still it floats away
And marks the end of the human life cycle
i don't know if it was that good but hope u enjoy! | |
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Pommu-pon
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:18 am | |
| Wow! Very nice! Pretty meaningful BD | |
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Blackrose
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:19 am | |
| thank you italia!  | |
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Luka✯ + Ruko¿
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:33 am | |
| I like it!!
it mentions death.. | |
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Luka✯ + Ruko¿
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:39 am | |
| lol jk but i rlly like ur comparison  | |
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Blackrose
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Fri Jul 29, 2011 8:16 am | |
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isolxtedsystem
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:06 pm | |
| I love it. You should keep on making more poems! | |
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Relora
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:10 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:37 pm | |
| Thats liek the first poem i understood O_O |
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Katie_Forever
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:23 pm | |
| wow thats really good anime. good job. | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:39 pm | |
| - Katie_Forever wrote:
- wow thats really good anime. good job.
Agreed. You should make more. |
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Blackrose
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Fri Jul 29, 2011 9:04 pm | |
| hm @finn O o
@Relora thank you | |
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IM MELODY'S HACKER!!!!
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Sat Jul 30, 2011 1:42 am | |
| wow, not bad anime! obviously you have good writing skills  | |
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FruitCake
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Sat Jul 30, 2011 1:48 am | |
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Blackrose
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Sat Jul 30, 2011 1:53 am | |
| thank you! oh and i made this up all in my head | |
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Blue
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Sat Jul 30, 2011 2:08 am | |
| Good poem. Like dancing daffodils. | |
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Blackrose
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Sat Jul 30, 2011 2:23 am | |
| thank yhu | |
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IM MELODY'S HACKER!!!!
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:43 am | |
| ^really? Don't forget me when you are the next J.K Rowling, lol | |
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Blackrose
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:51 am | |
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IM MELODY'S HACKER!!!!
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:51 am | |
| lol np anime it's a really good poem | |
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Blackrose
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| | Subject: Re: a poem. (idk if it's not rlly good) Sat Jul 30, 2011 7:19 pm | |
| hm thank you!!!! i i will i will post another poem but ima gonna have to think about 1 first | |
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