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| Subject: A Diary You Can Write Forever! |Chapter 11 is being made|  Fri Sep 09, 2011 7:49 pm | |
| Hello This is My Story. Sorry For It Being Sooo Long and Some being soo Short, I just Love writing Stories. And please don't press the emails and websites! Their not real. And also, if you have nothing good to say about my story. Don't even Comment.Character Kind: Anime/Manga  - Spoiler:
A Diary You Can Write Forever is a Story Made By Me (QueenFairyLight7). This Story is like Dear Dumb Diary and Madison Finn, but with Popular Girls Teasing The Girl and More! And also Mai's Brother's doesn't show in The Story! There might be a Surprise on one of the Chapter's That will talk about the Information of Mai's Brother's and Their Secrets.
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This Story Is About a Girl named "Yumi". She is a Beautiful, Smart, Intelligent, Shy and Sweet, but she doesn't get along with The Popular Girls since they are Mean, Greedy & Selfish. Her only Best Friends Are Mai & Yuki. And All The Character's except Hana and Rei Goes to The School "Red Heart High School".
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Yumi Sakura ~ |Click To Read About Yumi| |What Yumi Would Look Like|
Yuki Senshi ~ |Click To Read About Yuki||What Yuki would Look Like|
Mai Akira ~ |Click To Read About Mai||What Mai would Look Like|
Hana Sakura ~ |Click To Read About Hana| |What Hana would Look Like|
Rei Sakura ~ |Click To Read About Rei| |What Rei would Look Like|
Courtney De Francoise ~ |Click To Read About Courtney||What Courtney would Look Like|
Erika Ito ~ |Click To Read About Erika| |What Erika would Look Like|
Iva Ayame ~ |Click To Read About Iva| |What Iva would Look Like|
Zen Aoi ~ |Click To Read About Zen| |What Zen would Look Like|
Ren Aoi ~ |Click To Read About Ren|
Daphne Collins~ |Click To Read About Daphne| |What Daphne would Look Like|
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"Oh Hello! I am Yumi, do you wanna hear my life story? Then just keep reading my Diary!"
Dear Diary,
Today Yuki had Soccer Practice and Mai had Violin Class. What am I ever going to do? And for the millionth time, did you know I like Zen. He is The Coolest Boy At School! Can you Believe that, he's cooler than the tenth and above grader's! Now change of Topic. So the Popular Girl's which I call the Meanie Follower's came up to me and said "Umm, Excuse me your in my Hall." And I was going to say this is The School Hall, but I just moved to the side and waited for My Best Friends. So I need Help with Something, it's almost the Christmas Prom and I don't know what to Buy. Should it Be This Long Dress or This Mini Dress? Well i'll talk Later, I have to go to bed.
|In The Dream|
Zen? Is That you? Zen!!??
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Dear Diary,
I just woke up from bed, but I am still a little bit sleepy *yawn*. I have to take a Shower then Go to School, so i'll write longer later.
|At Red Heart High School|
"Yumi, over here!" yelled Yuki & Mai.
Yumi walked over to her friend's.
"What's Up?" Yumi replied.
"Nothing, oh and Yumi do you want to go to the Mall To Buy Christmas Stuff? I don't have Violin Class Today." Mai said with a soft voice.
"Sure." Yumi said, "Why not."
"No Fair! I have Soccer Practice, but i'll catch up in 3:00 PM." Yuki said Frowning.
So after school Yumi & Mai went to The Mall to Buy Christmas Stuff.
"Can we go eat first?" Yumi said with a growl on her stomach, "I am pretty hungry."
"Sure. I'm needing a snack,too." Mai replied.
Yumi & Mai walked to the Food Court and Yumi saw her sister Hana.
"Han-." Yumi ran to Hana and bumped on Zen.
"Z-Zen, S-Sorry." Yumi said To Zen nervously.
"Are you okay?" Zen replied worried.
"Yes, Zen." She said trying to Run Away.
"Great! Want to have Spaghetti with Hana, Mai and I? I'll pay for it."
"Sure! But are you sure you want to pay for it?"
"Yup, I have a credit card now."
Yumi walked over to Hana and asked,
"Hana, do you want Spaghetti with Extra Sauce?"
"No Thanks, i'll have a Normal Spaghetti with no Extra Cheese." Hana replied Smiling.
She walked over to Mai and asked her what she wants.
"Mai, what do you want to eat? Spaghetti with Extra Cheese?"
"Okay, I'll Have Extra Cheese." Mai replied.
Yumi ran over to Zen and Told him to give Hana normal Spaghetti and Mai Extra Cheese.
After they got their food, they sat on an empty table and Yumi got embarrassed since she was sitting right beside Zen.
"So what are you girls doing here in The Mall?" Hana asked.
"We were going to buy some Christmas Stuff, but we don't know much stores." Mai replied
"There's one near the Mall Square, it's called the Christmas Present and Stuff Shoppe." Zen answered.
Yumi said with a really soft voice "Then let's go There after we eat Mai."
"Okay Sure! But you have to pay with your stuff." Mai replied.
Hana said smiling "Let's all go There Together then, there's a Christmas Prom in My School Diamond High and I have to buy some stuff. Are you coming with us Zen?"
"Yup I am. I have to Buy something For My Mom & Dad anyways." He Replied.
After they ate they went over to Christmas Present's and Stuff Shoppe.
Yumi looked all over for the dress she saw yesterday on The Internet and she thought it would be here.
After looking for about Thirty Minutes, Hana said
"We should go back home in Thirty minutes."
"Okay." Mai & Zen replied.
Yumi didn't reply because she was still looking. At the end of the Shop she found a Small Mini Dress with a Hat, gloves and matching boots.
Yumi thought "Oh My! I found it! The Dress I found on the Internet, I am so lucky it's the last one and my size!"
Yumi hold it on her hands and carried it to her Sister near the Cash Register.
"Hana, can I buy this dress?" She said.
"Okay Yumi, buy anything you want." Hana replied.
Yumi went back of the line and after five minutes, she bought the dress. She was Delighted to finally buy her Dream Christmas Dress.
"Well Yumi and I should go back home now. Our parents are waiting for us". Hana said.
"Okay Bye Yumi, Bye Hana!" Mai said.
"Bye Yumi, Cya tomorrow at school." Zen said with a big smile.
Yumi felt really embarrassed.
|When they got home|
Dear Diary,
Today I never really expected it, but Zen bumped into me! I got really Embarrassed. Zen did say he will see me tomorrow but yeah. We will never know what will happen in our Lives. But your not really alive since your just a Diary I am writing on. And I almost forgot, The Christmas party is in 1 Week! I have to think on what make up and what hair to wear. Maybe I'll ask Hana. Well I'll write later, I have to go eat then to bed.
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Dear Diary,
I'm still thinking about myself bumping into Zen Three Day's ago. The Christmas Party is in Monday! I can't Believe it, time goes really fast. It Felt like it was November than zoom, December Today. Now Today at school we will be doing an Art Project about Christmas with two Partner's! I hope my Partner is Yuki and Mai, we can think a lot of great ideas. And I haven't seen Courtney, Erika and Iva for a while. Why am I thinking of her!? It's not like she's nice to me or anything. I'm going to go get ready for school now, so i'll write back when I have free time.
Yumi Walked to the nearest Bathroom and she brushed her teeth.
"Now to take a shower." She said.
|After Yumi's Shower|
"That was a Good Shower, which clothes do I wear?"
Yumi Stare's on her closet "Chiiiii..."
"I Got it! I'm going to wear my Denim Skirt, Violet Shirt and a Denim jacket. Oh and I'll also put my hair down, that should work.  "
After Yumi finished Dressing up she was headed for school. Since Yumi's Mom had No work, she dropped Yumi & her friend's to school. Ten Minutes past they finally got out of the car and went to school.
"Ahh, I finally get out of the car. Mai said Stretching, "It's so Hot in there."
"My Mom Must have forgot to turn off the air conditioner." Replied Yumi.
"I am so psyched about the Christmas Party next week." Yuki said.
Yumi & her friend's went inside Red Heart High School and found the Popular Girl's teasing a kid.
Yuki walked up to Iva and said.
"Why The Heck are you Teasing People who are under our grade?!"
"Hmph, why do you care? It's our thing." Iva snapped back.
Yuki walked to class with Yumi & Mai, leaving a stink eye on The Popular Girls.
|When The Girl's got to Art class|
"I will now announce everyone's Partner's for the Art Project." Miss. Paulie said.
After saying all of the Partner's Miss. Paulie said Yumi's Partner's were.... Courtney & Zen!
"Ehh. Z-Zen a-and C-Courtney??" Yumi said with a Fright.
Courtney and Zen walked to Yumi's desk, Zen said with a Smile "We meet again Yumi Sakura."
"Y-Y-Yeah." Yumi replied nervously.
"Who has Ideas?" Courtney said smiling like never before.
......................
"No Answer's? Seriously? How about you Yumi?" Courtney said.
"W-Well I was thinking of umm making a 3D picture of people opening presents near a Christmas tree. Yumi replied.
"That's Not a bad idea actually." Zen said.
"Well let's make it then, I'll make the 3D people." Courtney said.
"I'll Draw the People and St-." Yumi said.
Before Yumi could say Stuff Zen said.
"I'll help Yumi with the Drawings."
Yumi felt her heart going faster ans faster.
"Okay, let's get to work people!" Courtney yelled.
The Group got to work as soon as Courtney said to get to work.
Zen looks over to Yumi's Drawing's.
"You Should put some shading on the drawing." He said
"O-Okay." Yumi replied back.
Yumi start's to put shading's on them.
"Hey Yumi, What to do want to do later?" Courtney said.
"Aren't you supposed to be mean to me?" Yumi Asked.
"I'm not mean every time!" Courtney yelled.
"Okay. Well we can work on our Art Project at my house." She said.
"Sure. ^.^ " Courtney replied.
Two Hours Later and Yumi's Group is half finished their project.
"Done, Drawing! You guys work on your Stuff At Yumi's House. Okay?" Zen Delightfully said.
"Sure, That will work." Yumi and Courtney said.
"Everyone Stop what your Doing." Miss Paulie said, "Clean up and you can bring you Project home. You have to go To Science Class."
Everyone cleaned up in a Flash. Yumi's Group finished cleaning first.
Some Girl's were jealous of Yumi since Zen was in her group, but Zen didn't really notice. Only Yumi heard them whispering. After School Courtney and Yumi went to her house and finished the 3D Work.
"Finished!" They Both said at the same time.
The Next Day Zen, Courtney and Yumi met up at the Art Room and handed the Project to Miss. Paulie.
"Your Group is the First one Done and it's Incredible!" Miss. Paulie said.
"Want to go to the movie's Yumi?" She asked.
"Okay Courtney. Can we go after school? And why are you So Nice all of a Sudden?" Yumi answered.
"Well. Don't Tell anyone else, but my mom will make me grounded if I don't be nice to everyone every once a week." Courtney said with a really soft voice.
In Math Yumi saw Mai and Yuki. She walked to them to say Hello, and they obviously replied saying Hello back.
|After School|
"Courtney, your thirty minutes late. xD" Said Yumi.
"I Know That! I'm not Dumb. Well let's go in." Courtney snapped.
Yumi and Courtney went inside Orange Star Theater.
"Hey Courtney, don't these movies cost a fortune like fifty dollars for each person?" Yumi asked.
"I have two-fifty in my pockets. So I have enough money." Courtney answered.
They went inside The Theater and watched Spy Kids 4 4D. Two Hours Later the movie is finished.
Yumi And Courtney went outside the Theater and Yumi saw Yuki & Mai.
"Yumi!" Yuki yelled, "Come over here for a minute!
Yumi ran To Yuki and once again she bumped into Zen.
"Sorry." Yumi said.
"It's Okay. Nice Bumping with you again." xD He Replied and walked away.
Yumi walked to Yuki & Mai and she asked
"What's up?"
"Why are you hanging out with Courtney?" Mai whispered.
"She's nice once a week and she asked to come to the Theater with her. What are you Guys doing?" Yumi replied back.
"Nothing Much. Came To Eat some Food." Yuki said.
"Well I have to catch up with Courtney, Cya Tomorrow at school." She said.
Yumi walked to Courtney instead of running since she might bump to someone again.
"I have to go home now Yumi." She said.
"Okay, Me too. Cya Tomorrow Courtney." Yumi replied.
|At Home|
Dear Diary,
Today was a really weird day. Courtney was nice since her mom might ground her for not being nice for at least once a week. What should I do Tomorrow? We ate Spaghetti for Dinner/Supper. There are always Surprises in every day. Oh And my Friend's and I found this Chat game called "Red-Heart-Mall", you know Madison Finn right? It is like BigFishBowl.com, it was also made from the person who built "Red Heart High School". Oh and one more thing Zen bumped into me again in the Mall! Is that a Coincidence? Well I'm going to use my Laptop Then go To Sleep. So I'll write Tomorrow. Bye
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Dear Diary,
I cannot believe it! Today is the Christmas Party at School! Miss. Paulie said we will be having a dance, that was a short notice. She also said we have to partner up with a guy! I can't believe this, how if I get stuck with a weird disgusting guy? Or Maybe, how if I get partnered with Zen? Well let's change topic. I think I am going to let my hair down, then wear my Mini Dress set. Is that a good idea? I think it is. My Friends and I already planned our Christmas Party at Mai's house, Mai's house is huge like mansion! Well she's rich! We also have our Skiing Trip next month in January 7th. Oh yeah, I am going to wear my red ruffle dress when were dancing. So i'll have to Dress up at school. Well I have to go to school, i'll write Later! ~Yumi
Yumi dressed up to her winter clothing and headed to school.
|At Red Heart High School|
Yumi opened the school door and found a crowd of people walking to their locker's and home room.
"There's soo much people than any other school day." Yumi thought, "They must be really excited about the Party."
She walked to her home room and finally found her friends Yuki and Mai.
"Hey Yumi, Don't ya think there are too much people than any other day?" Yuki yelled across the Class Room.
"Yes, Yes I do think there are more people than before!" Yumi yelled.
Her two friends walked to Yumi and talked about the Dance.
"Are you worried you might have a bad guy paired with?" Mai asked with a Soft voice.
"Well I don't really care." Yuki answered, "If their bad we can switch to Hip~Hop.LOL."
"I'm a little worried, because how if I fall or stepped on their foot? That will be so embarrassing." Yumi said.
"How about when we have break I can teach you. ^.^" Mai said.
"Okay." Yumi replied back.
"Everyone take your Seats!" Miss. Paulie said, "We will talk about the Christmas Party and your Partner's for the dance."
After Miss. Pualie said all of the Christmas Stuff and the other people's partner's she finally said Yumi's Partner.
"Yumi and ........... Zen."
Yumi looked at Zen and Zen turned to Yumi and smiled. Yumi blushed. All of the girl's were jealous of Yumi. When It was their break time for thirty minutes Mai & Yumi met up at the cafeteria.
"Yumi, lets go to the Gymnasium to practice." Mai said smiling.
Yumi nodded and they started walking to the Gym next to the Cafeteria.
Once they got there Mai started telling the Beginner Steps of Dancing.
Twenty Minutes later Yumi mastered medium Dance.
Ring!! The bell rang.
"Sorry for the Late notice." Miss. Dorothy said, "But we have to take off Ten minutes of your Break due to people have to dress up for the Party!"
"Oh my, I forgot! I must dress up Mai." Yumi said.
"Okay." Mai replied, "I'll wait."
Yumi walked to her Locker and took her Clothes. She went to the Girl's washroom to go change and brush her hair. After Three minutes of Dressing up and Seven minutes of fixing her hair, she finally finished. Yumi ran out the Girl's washroom and saw people whispering on how Yumi is so pretty.
Mai was walking to the Girl's washroom to check if Yumi was Done.
"You Look So Pretty Yumi." Mai said Smiling.
"Thank you." Yumi replied "I bought it from that Christmas Shop."
Yumi and Mai walked to their Home Room.
Yumi Found Zen sitting there writing on his Notebook.
"I wonder what he is writing. Eh Never mind, might be just homework." Yumi Thought.
The two girls sat on their desks. Zen walked over to Yumi and said.
"Yumi, you look pretty today." He said blushing.
Yumi Froze for 1 minute and she replied.
"Thanks."
"Oh and meet me at the Middle of the Mall after School." He said.
After he said to meet after school Zen walked back to his desk.
"The Christmas Party stars now! Do anything that was told yesterday." Miss. Paulie announced. Two Hours later everybody finished the activities.
"Everyone please go to your partner's and line up with them!" Miss Paulie Yelled.
Zen walked over to Yumi and they line up together. Yumi barely could breath since Zen is her partner. Zen just stood there and waited. All of the Students walked to the Gymnasium to dace.
"We will now start the Christmas Dance!" The Principal announced.
Zen and Yumi hold hands and started dancing.
"You’re a pretty good dancer Yumi." Zen said.
"Th-Thanks." She replied blushing.
Every ten minutes the music changed.
"Have you." Yumi said "Have you heard this song before?"
"I don't know, it sounds familiar." Zen replied
Yumi thought and thought about the song and she remembered. It was when there was a dance in elementary school and Yumi didn't know Zen, she also remembered dancing with Zen that time. Yumi remembered everything but she never told Zen about it.
After the dance it was time to go home. Before Yumi can go out the door Yuki yelled.
"Yumi!"
Yumi turned back and found her two friends Mai & Yuki.
"So how was the dance with Zen?" Mai asked.
"Pretty Good. Well I gotta go. I'll see you Later at Mai's house." Yumi replied.
She ran outside and went to the mall. Yumi waited for Zen in the mall. Five minutes after she came, Zen finally came running to her with a small green box and red ribbon. He finally reached Yumi and gave her a box.
"Here's a present I found you from the Christmas Shop." He said Blushing.
"Eh. Thanks." Yumi said opening the box, "It's soo Pretty/Cute! I love this Heart Locket."
"Why did you give it to me though and not Courtney?"
"That's a secret." Zen said winking.
After he gave the gift he ran and disappeared behind the crowd.
Yumi walked home thinking why Zen would give her the gift instead of Courtney.
Once Yumi got home she wrote on her Diary.
Dear Diary,
Today was really Fun. The Dance went out well. Guess who my partner was. It was Zen! Well anyways he said I looked pretty with the Mini Dress and he also said to meet me at the Mall. So I went to The Mall and he gave me a Heart Locket, I asked why he gave it to me instead to Courtney and he said it was a Secret. This is really suspicious. Well I have a Christmas Party to go to at Mai's house. So I'll write Later when I get home.
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Dear Diary,
Tomorrow is the Ski Trip. I can't believe it! Time is so Fast. My Friends and I are going to Shop for Ski Stuff today since it is Sunday. Oh and I told you about Red Heart Mall Right? Well I met a nice friend her ShopperName is LittleDaph, her name is Daphne and she lives in New York City! We are going to talk on Red Heart Mall right now so i'll write when I get home from Shopping.
Yumi turned on her Laptop and started to type Red-Heart-Mall.com, she explored around the game and dressed up her Character. When her character was at the Technology Stuff Plaza and when she was there she found an E-mail Feature on the right hand side, she clicked the Feature and it sent her to her Red-Heart Mall E-mail Website. Yumi found a message from the Head Shopper which is the Administrator, it said.
Welcome New~Shopper's! You will be able to find this E-mail Feature in your second day or when a friend tells you. Red-Heart-Mall is a fun chatting place for Students of Red Heart High School or Someone looking for Fun websites and found this site. There are Contest's, Prizes and More! Contact us if you need a Guide or a question, here is our E-mail HeadShopper@Red-Heart-Mall.com.
After Yumi read the E-mail, she sent an E-mail to the Head~Shopper saying.
Dear Head~Shopper,
Can I Please get a guide of the Website to know more about it? Thanks in advanced.
~New Person: YumiSakura
Yumi clicked Send and a Note Popped out.
LittleDaph is now Shopping!
Yumi quickly went on her buddies list and pressed chat with LittleDaph.
YumiSakura~Desu: Hi Daphne! What's Up.
|LittleDaph is Typing...|
LittleDaph~Desu: Hi Yumi! I'm Great! Tell Me Who was The Zen Guy again. I forgot. LOLz xD
YumiSakura~Desu: Zen is the guy in my class and he gave me this Heart Locket. Oh and My Friends and I are going to buy some Skiing Stuff in Ten Minutes.
|LittleDaph is Typing...|
LittleDaph~Desu: Okay. I have to do Laundry in Ten Minutes anyways.
YumiSakura~Desu: Ten Minutes is Done! I have to go now. Let's say Tuesday we'll take again?
|LittleDaph is Typing...|
LittleDaph~Desu: Okay Tuesday it is. I have to do Laundry. And when I send this message I'll be out.
|LittleDaph Stopped Shopping...|
Yumi logged out of the Online Chat and Turned off her Laptop. She walks to her Closet and looks for Cute Winter Clothes, she finds a Cute Denim Shirt, Fluffy Coat and Cute Red Pants.
"Yumi~Chan! Are you Ready?! We have to get to Yuki's before I have to go to Work!" Yumi's Mother Shouted.
"I'll be right there!" Yumi said.
She put on her socks quickly and headed downstairs. While she was downstairs she brought a snack with her just in case she needs to eat. After she got her snack she went outside and went inside the car. Ten Minutes later they finally got to Yuki's House.
"Yumi! Over Here!" Mai shouted while running to Yumi.
Yumi turned her head towards Mai and smiled. An action for saying Hello.
Before Yumi can press the door bell her mom warned her.
"Come back before dinner. There's going to be a bad blizzard later."
Yumi nodded and continued to ring the door bell.
"DING DONG!"
Yuki opened the door and said.
"Come in my mom is making Hot ChoCho for us."
The two girls went inside the house.
"Your house is so pretty Yuki!" Yumi & Mai said with amazement.
"Sure it is! My mom cleans it every week." She replied.
Yuki's Mother gave the three girls their hot chocolate.
"Ahh. This is really Good!" Yumi said with delight.
"Lets go!" Yuki said finishing her Hot ChoCho, "We will miss all of the good stuff."
Yumi nodded, the three girls walked outside and went inside Yuki's Dad's Car.
Ten Minutes later they finally reached their destination.
"Were finally here!" Yuki shouted while strectching, "Lets go to the Ski and Stuff Shop."
Mai replied "Okay lets go."
The girls went inside the shop and they split up so they can find some Skiing stuff.
Yumi walked all over the shop and found nothing. Minutes later Yumi spotted something just right.
It was a Skiing stuff set. There was a Ski outfit color white and pink camouflage, the outfit had matching Hats and everything! It even had matching Ski's, Helmet and Skiing Stick with Ski goggles.
Yumi took the set and bring it to the Cashier Lady. The Cashier Lady smiled and said "Your Lucky Miss. This was the last one and your size."
"I am Lucky." Yumi replied smiling wide.
After the Cashier Lady scanned the Set, she handed the bag with their logo on it with the Set inside. Yumi looked for Mai and Yuki to tell them she bought the right thing.
Five Minutes later Yumi Finally found Yuki and Mai. They were outside waiting for her with bags full of stuff.
"Yumi you only have ski's in there?" Mai asked.
"Nope." She replied, "It's a ski set. The set has Ski's and all that other stuff."
Yuki gasped "Wow! I should have looked harder so I can buy a set like yours."
The Girls went to the Cafe to buy some snacks. They bought some Mini Chocolate Chip cookies, Yumi took her other snack from her pockets and ate it.
After they finished eating Mai called her Mom to pick them up.
Mai's mom came and picked them up. Finally Yumi got home.
"So how was Shopping?" Mom Asked.
"Great!" Yumi answered, "I got a Skiing Set for $40.00."
"Wow! Well Dinner is almost served so do what you want until I call you."
Yumi nodded and headed up stairs and started writing on her Diary.
Dear Diary,
Today was a Fine day. I bought a Ski set for $40.00! It was so cheap! Since there was a sale of course. I forgot to tell my friends about Red-Heart-Mall. So maybe I'll ask them tomorrow at school. I also put a face on the Red Locket. Oh mother is calling. I have to go Eat. Bye!
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Dear Diary,
Today is the Ski Trip, right now I am sneaking in writing on my Diary right now at Social~Studies. So my Friends were thinking of going to the same group to be together, but sadly the teacher has to pick our groups. I already have my Skiing Outfit in my Locker, I can't wait to wear it! I tried it on for like Five times already!
"Yumi, please answer this question about Canada." Her Social Studies Teacher said, "What's the Capital of the Country Canada?"
Yumi quickly stopped writing and answered,
"Umm. Ottawa?"
"Correct! You got that right even though you weren't paying attention."
Yumi paid attention instead of writing because she might get detention except of going to The Ski Trip. One Hour Later it was finally the Skiing Trip, the Gym teacher Mister Anderson, which is the Sports Trip Leader gave us the Rules and don't go to a Mountain that is out of bounds or you cannot Ski down it. After he finished talking about the Rules and other stuff, everyone went outside and got in the Bus. Yumi, Mai and Yuki both sat together since it was a really long seat.
The Three friends talked about what they would do about the Ski trip for the whole Bus Trip.
Finally, they are now in Moose Mountain Ski Place. Mister Anderson called out the Skiing groups, he called out everyone's group and announced Yumi's group.
"Yumi, Mai, Yuki and Zen!" Mister Anderson called out.
The four groupies huddled up together and they went inside the office showing their Group passes. As they got inside Yumi said.
"Well I gotta go change to my Skiing Outfit."
The three others nodded and put on their ski's. After Yumi got dressed up she was the Most fashionable Skier at the Mountains! Her groupie complemented her at least two times, even Zen! As they were talking Courtney came out of No where! She was here to ask Zen which Hill he was going on.
"Which Hill are you going on, Zen?" She asked bushing and holding her hands behind her.
"Well. I'm going to where Yumi is going since we are a group. So pretty much the biggest hill, since Yumi is the Ski Pro." Zen answered Laughing.
"Oh." Courtney mumbled, "I have to go to the medium one."
"Uh huh, yeah what ever. Now shoo." Yuki said pushing Courtney to her group.
Courtney was really annoyed. The groupie used the Ski lift to get up, after a while they finally got up the hill. First up to Ski down was Yumi, she was Skiing like a Pro out there! Zen was amazed and followed on to Yumi.
"Your a Pretty good Skier." Yumi complemented to Zen, Yumi didn't feel nothing at all. She just knows she likes Zen.
Zen smiled and sloped around the snow and ice.
"Eh?! So were having a race." Yumi said squatting to get faster.
She sloped all over the place fast and Zoom! Yumi was down the hill.
Zen gasped "Wow! Your speed is even faster than I expected." He said
Hours past, Yumi went down the hill over One-Hundred Times! Before she went down the hill someone announced a Warning.
"Everyone, please come to the front of the Office! There is a Grade 6 Grader who went to the out of bounds hill!"
Yumi gasped, everyone was whispering and they saw the boy going down it. The Students were looking way over to him and they think he is scared and can't get down. For the first time Yumi skied over to the boy without caring about herself. Mister Anderson yelled out worrying "Yumi Sakura! Don't go there, it's dangerous!"
Yumi stopped and listened, but after that she kept moving to the boy. She took the Ski Lift and after five minutes, she found the boy scared. She asked,
"Why are you here?"
"W-Well M-My used to friends dared me to go down this hill." The Boy said feeling guilty.
"Well. I'll Help you." Yumi said, "I'll Help you go down this hill, just hold my hand."
The Boy nodded. The Two Skiers held hands and went down the hill. Zen, Mai, Yuki and the other Students thought they would never get down the hill. But Luckily Yumi was a Pro skier and she knows the ways of Skiing, they went around the snow obstacles and finally got down. Yumi and the Boy went over to the front of the Office and she felt guilty. Before the Announcer can speak, Yumi said with guilt "W-well I just tried to help."
"That was Dangerous but the Capital's Professional Teenager Ski Team, The Flaming Obstacles has to ask you something."
The Team Leader, Jessica asked "Will you join our team? And what is your name."
Yumi gasped and stared at her for a Minute,
"Y-Yeah, S-sure. I w-would love t-to, and I am Y-Yumi."
"Well your a Professional Skier there, you will be our first best Skier at the team." Jessica replied, "And also call me Jessie for short.
Yumi didn't feel shy much anymore so she just nodded and smiled.
"It's the time to go back home everyone! Please get to the bus." Someone announced. The girls sat together on the bus and Zen sat on the other seat with nobody.
"So Yumi, you got in a Professional Ski Team, eh?" He asked.
"Yes." Yumi replied not feeling shy talking to Zen the first time, "Jessie said our Race next month, but I didn't have to practice."
The groupie talked about Yumi's Ski Team and everything! Even Zen was talking about their stuff. After an hour Yumi finally got home and her Mother asked
"How was your Ski Trip?"
"Awesome! This Girl named Jessica, Jessie for short, asked me to join their Professional Ski Team called Flaming Obstacles. So I totally said yes!"
Her mother replied "Let's talk about the great news over dinner, I want to know everything!"
Yumi nodded and headed to her Diary.
Dear Diary,
Today at the Trip I saved a Grade 6 boy and I joined a Professional Skiing Team called the Flaming Obstacles! Jessica the Team Leader, Jessie for short, told me I was the first fast Skier in the Team! I can't believe it, everything is going so Fast! Well change of topic. I forgot to tell my friends about Red~Heart~Mall again. And can't you believe it! Zen had that online chat and he added me, I totally accepted it. Well I gotta go Eat dinner and talk about the Trip to my mom. So Write to ya Later.
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Dear Diary,
I just woke up from a really bad nightmare. The nightmare was about Zen, he first looked at me near the lockers and smiled then when I went home on the nightmare he stared at me gloomy. Well that was just a silly nightmare, they don't come true.
"Yumi~Chan! You have to get to school!" Her Mother yelled walking up the stairs.
"I'm coming, i'm coming, i'll be right there just a minute."
Yumi stared at her closet for a few seconds and took out her Fluffy coat, her cute Winter skirt, black tights and put put her hair down.
She bolted down the stairs, grab Toast and put on her White Boots. Finally Yumi got in her Mom's Car and they were driving to her school.
"I am going to tell about Red-Heart-Mall to my friends when I get there." She thought.
Ten Minutes later she was finally at school, Yumi dashed to her Class Room trying not to be seen by a teacher and came to talk to Mai and Yuki.
"Mai, Yuki. Do you have a Red-Heart-Mall Account?" She asked breathing hard like she ran Ten Miles.
Mai and Yuki stared at her and answered surprised,
"You Have one of those! Tell me your Shopper Name."
"My Shopper Name is YumiSakura. How 'bout you guys' Shopper Name?"
"Yuki and I already are friends on there and Mine is Musical~Girl and Yuki's is Sporty~Gurl" Mai answered.
Yumi wrote her friends' shopper names and sat down to her desk.
"Everyone! Please sit down on your seats, I have an announcement. As you all know our fellow classmate Yumi Sakura joined the Skiing Team. Well Her ski team leader Jessica, told me that we can go to another skiing trip at the most expensive ski hills in Mount. Petal for skiing lessons from the most well known ski professionals. So please bring your skiing stuff tomorrow!"
Everyone stared surprised at Yumi even her friends and she asked,
"What did I do? Why you guys staring? I did nothing for this to happen."
After she said her mini speech everyone didn't look at Yumi.
A Few hours past and it was P.E . Yumi went to her locker to grab her Gym clothes and shoes, and when she was about to go to the Gymnasium Zen passed by and smiled.
"Wasn't that in my dream?" Yumi thought suspiciously.
"Nah, maybe its a coincidence."
As Yumi walked in the Gymnasium she saw students playing in door soccer.
"My Second Favorite Sport before Skiing! Great."
A lot of Hours Past and it was finally time to go home.
Yumi went to tell her friends about Red-Heart-Mall again.
"So you guys coming on The Online Mall Today?" She asked.
"Okay Sure." Her friends said, "I'll come on after I eat Dinner. Bye."
She was happy to finally talk about the Online Mall, she could not wait.
Yumi was walking near her street and found Zen who passed by and looked at really gloomy. He look like he just lost a really really precious thing or it.
"This can't be possible! My dream came true!." She said frightened opening her house door, "I'll talk to him tomorrow."
"Welcome Home! I'll call you for Dinner." Mom said flipping the meat.
Yumi nodded and dashed up the stairs to her room, turned on her Laptop and started typing "www.Red-Heart-Mall.com".
When she got on Two E-mail's popped up, it was from Daphne and From The Head ~Shopper. She clicked on The Head~Shopper's Email, it was a guide, so she printed it out. Then she clicked Daphne's Email it wrote:
[url=https://2img.net/h/oi55.tinypic.com/a1lllh.png]~Click To Read Daphne's E-mail~
She read it again and quickly Sent an E-mail.
~Click To Read Yumi's E-mail~
Yumi quickly clicked send then her Mom called,
"Yumi~Chan! Come Down for Dinner!"
She closed her Laptop and dashed down the stairs.
"Mmm. This is very good, Let me guess chicken and Strawberries with rice?"
Her Mother smiled and nodded sitting down the seat. Yumi first took the strawberries and started eating, she loved Fruits!
After she ate she went up stairs to her room and opened her Laptop, she just put her Laptop to sleep so she won't have to turn it on again.
As soon as she Logged on there was a Chat called "Mai, Yuki and Yumi only!"
Yumi knew it was her friends, she went to chat with them and they where waiting for Yumi.
YumiSakura~Desu: Hey Girls! Waddup?
|Musical~Girl~Desu & Sporty~Gurl~Desu is Typing...|
Musical~Girl~Desu: Nothin. Just Chatting. You?
Sporty~Gurl~Desu: Me, too. I have to go in a Few. My Mom wants the Comp.
|YumiSakura~Desu is Typing...|
YumiSakura~Desu: Okay, I gotta go in a few too. To Bed. LOLz xD
|Musical~Girl~Desu is Typing...|
Musical~Girl~Desu: Ah. Me too, I gotta go to My Aunts House.
|YumiSakura~Desu & Sporty~Gurl is Typing...|
YumiSakura~Desu: I bet your Aunts House is Big Like yours. >.>
Sporty~Gurl~Desu: Why do we always have a Desu on our names?? o.o
|Musical~Girl~Desu is Typing...|
Musical~Girl~Desu: @Yumi ~ Not really. It's just Normal, I like it Normal. C:
@Yuki ~ We always have that since the "Head~Shopper" made it to that. xD
|YumiSakura~Desu & Sporty~Gurl: is Typing...|
YumiSakura~Desu: Well we Gotta Go. Send me an E-mail sometimes. Baii!
The girls said their good byes and Logged off. Yumi tucked into her bed and went to sleep.
Ten hours past Yumi got up and got dressed to go to school. Took a Toast and went outside to the car. When they got there Yumi went straight ahead in front of Zen and asked,
"Zen are you feeling okay?" She asked, "Because yesterday you were smiling and then you were gloomy all over."
He just laughed and replied
"That might be my Twin. He's coming over, he looks at people gloomy for fun."
She stopped and smiled
"Okay, WHAT! You had a Twin brother?!?! Why you didn't tell us?"
"Well I forgot about him over the years since he lives in New York, By the way his name is Ren. Tomorrow come over to my house so you guys can talk."
He replied laughing. School started and Yumi was glad that it wasn't some kind of disease with Zen. But she never knew Zen had a Twin named Ren, Just Impossible!
After School started Yumi started writing on her Diary.
Dear Diary,
Today at school Zen told me he had a Twin name Ren! Is that possible? So the person who looked at me gloomy was his Twin. His name is Ren, he has black hair and brown eyes to separate Zen and they look the same. You can tell they are different by their personality. Oh I gotta Sleep Bye!
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Dear Diary,
Right now I am sitting on the bench at school writing. There is nothing to do right now. But guess what! Zen he asked my friends and I to go to his house for dinner! And yes Ren will be there, since he did transfer to our school. Oh I gotta write later, since Science period is in five minutes.
Yumi scurried to her class and finally got to her class. She saw her friends and came to talk to them.
"Want to meet in Red-Heart-Mall again?" Yuki asked.
"Don't we have to go to Zen's?" Mai asked looking at Yuki.
Yuki scratched her head and nodded,
"Oh Yeah! I forgot, sorry."
The Teacher Miss. Anderson walked in front of the class and students started sitting on their seats.
"Welcome Students! Today in Science class we will make advanced robots. Everyone should have made a custom robot in Grade six. So lets start."
Miss Anderson announced. Everyone whispered how fun it would be and stopped. The Teacher told them the instructions and everyone started as soon as she finished. Three hours later everyone finished their robots. Mai made a robot that holds her book and did everything she wanted it to do for school. Yuki made a sports robot, so she can play tennis and more with it. Zen made his robot speak any language for translation. And finally Ren made a robot that is like a comedian. "Everyone." Yumi though, "Everyone's robot is so well made, but mine. Mine can only sing and dance."
Everyone stared at Yumi with her frown then to her robot. Yumi accidentally turned on the switch when she leaned down to her robot to touch it.
Her robot amazed everyone, asking questions.
"Yumi how did you make it talk and dance?! It looks like a doll instead of a robot." One girl asked. After school Yumi and Zen talked to discuss the dinner plans. Ren was about to go home, he saw Zen with Yumi and started to get jealous.
"I wonder what they're talking about" He thought. Ren stopped eavesdropping and continued to go back home. Yumi walked home alone and got ready for dinner.
"Mom! I have to go now!" She talked readying up to leave.
"Okay Bye Hun! Tell me about it when you get home!" She replied waving to Yumi. Yumi set out and reached Zen's house.
"Wow! Does all of my friends have big houses?" She gasped.
Yumi continued walking to the door steps and rang the doorbell. Zen knew it was Yumi and let her in. All of her friends were already there on the couch.
"You never told me you had a big house like Mai's." She glanced at Mai amazed.
"Sorry." He replied, "I had no time to tell you."
It was time for Dinner and there was a basket of fruits, noodle soup and other delicious things. Yumi and Zen talked all day, and again Ren glanced at them and got jealous. So Ren asked Yuki some questions about her self, he had the same personality as Yuki but he still liked Yumi. After Dinner Yumi and her friends had to leave, so Yumi went outside and Ren walked to her,
"Yumi, i have a confession. I really like you." He said looking at her.
Yumi was too amazed, it was her first confession. They talked a bit and Yumi went back home.
"Mom, i'm home!"
"Lets talk during dessert later." Her Mom replied.
She nodded and headed up stairs to her Laptop, she noticed that Daphne sent her an E-mail. She clicked it and it wrote:
~Click To Read Daphne's E-mail~
Yumi read it multiple times and replied saying:
~Click To Read Yumi's E-mail~
After she sent the email she turned off her Laptop and went to write on her Diary.
Dear Diary,
Dinner at Zen's was fantastic today! Did you know Ren liked me! It is true, he confessed to me right after the dinner. Well anyways today at Science class everyone was amazed about how I made my Singing and Dancing Robot! They asked a billion question, and no not for real i'm being sarcastic. Oh I have to eat dessert and talk to my Mom. I'll write tomorrow! Bye.
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Dear Diary,
I just got the mail from Daphne right now! It said she was going to come today at five o'clock PM! I'm so psyched and so jumpy. Yuki, Mai, Red and Zen are coming over to meet her. Be right back, I am going to go on Red-Heart-Mall, maybe she's on and we can discuss.
Yumi hopped on her bed and starting keying the website and quickly logged on. She clicked her E-mail and a note popped out, it said
"LittleDaph has updated her Status to: Almost there, Yumi!"
Yumi's jaw dropped, Daphne was actually online! So she clicked the quick shop message and talked to Daphne.
YumiSakura~Desu: Daphne! Are you almost here?! I am so psyched! Oh and Hello. Lols.
|LittleDaph~Desu is Typing...|
LittleDaph~Desu: Yes I am almost there, my parents is in our apartment. I'm just here with my iPod talking to you and OMGosh I cannot wait!
YumiSakura~Desu: Which street are you in? I can lead you the way.
|LittleDaph~Desu is Typing...|
LittleDaph~Desu: I am in 56764 142 avenue, Red-1615. That's where I am.
YumiSakura~Desu: OMGosh! Your really near, just turn right and you will see a red house with star windows.
|LittleDaph~Desu is Typing...|
LittleDaph~Desu: Okay, I am here! I'll ring your bell, so lets just leave this Red-Heart-Mall. Okay? Okay.
The two girls logged off and Daphne rang the doorbell.
"Ding, Dong, someone's here!" The bell rang.
Yumi bolted down the room to the door, opened it and saw Daphne with a big smile in her face.
"Yumi! We finally meet, it was only a short time when we last talked." Daphne said taking off her cute designer boots.
"You really have a beautiful and pretty house, Yumi."
Yumi scratched her head and replied,
"Not really, my friends has a mansion of these. And by the way, I love your boots."
Daphne thanked her and went in the house, she saw Yumi's mom cooking some of Yumi and her favorite dishes.
"Ah, you must be Daphne Collins. Yumi talked to me about how nice you are." Yumi's mom complimented.
"My friends might be late, so do you want a tour around the house?" Yumi asked.
"Why not?" Daphne said answering her question.
Daphne and Yumi went to Yumi's room, Daphne complimented her room,
"I love your room, its so much organize than mine and you even have your own television! I don't have those, only a laptop, though."
After they toured all around the house the bell rang,
"Ding, Dong, someone's here!"
"You can sit on the couch and wait Daphne." Yumi said.
"No, it's fine." She replied.
Yumi nodded and they headed to the door and opened it.
"Hi there, you must be Daphne. Welcome to the Aurora City, I don't think humans even know this place" Mai said greeting her.
"Oh come on!" Yuki said, "Enough with the professional style, all you have to do is this. Hello Daphne, hope we will be good friends."
Everyone giggled even Zen and Ren.
"Aurora City is a beautiful place, I live in New York. They used the human name."
"Why are we talking about humans?" Ren asked, "They are only computerized and only seen in TV's."
Everyone went inside and sat on the couch.
"Who wants some refreshments?" Yumi's mom asked.
"Yes please!" Everyone replied looking at her mother.
Her mother gave them some sugar cookies, hot chocolate, and other yummy stuff. Daphne started digging in the sugar cookies.
"Yum, your mom is really good at cooking. So Delicious." Daphne said.
After they ate some refreshments Mai questioned Yumi,
"Yumi, where we going? Because we should go to the skating rink."
"Great idea!" Yumi said.
So they were off to the skating rink at River Parks Skating Rink. Finally they got there and was ready to skate.
"Daphne, do you know how to figure skate?" Yumi asked,
"Because maybe we can dance together."
"Of course I do. My mom put me to skating camp back in New York."
Daphne and Yumi danced and jumped in the rink, they were having so much fun when Daphne's cell phone rang. She took her phone and talked to her mom.
"Daphne, dear. Charlotte's asthma attack happened and she doesn't have her inhaler. And we do not know where the hospital is." Daphne's mom said.
"I'll ask my friends where the hospital is right now! Charlotte might stop breathing by the hour."
Daphne turned to Yumi and told what happened,
"And we don't know a hospital here. Please help."
Yumi nodded and they left the rink, went to Daphne's apartment and then the hospital.
"I hope she's okay." Daphne said with tears.
Yumi patted her back and replied,
"The doctors here are really professional, she must be okay."
After the check up was done the doctor went outside the room to where they are waiting and said with a smile,
"She's okay, I will give her a new inhaler because her old one was running out."
Daphne and her mom was really glad and went back to their apartment.
"Bye Yumi and friends. I'll come to your house tomorrow!" She said walking out.
Yumi and her friends and all went home.
"Hello Yumi, welcome home, I heard Daphne's sister Charlotte had an asthma attack. Tell me what happened over dinner." Her mom welcomed her.
Yumi went up the stairs to her Diary.
Dear Diary,
Daphne, Me and the others went to the rink. Her mother called and her sister Charlotte had an asthma attack. It's a good thing Daphne was with us or her sister would have died, I mean stop breathing. We had a lot of fun today. Well I have to get to dinner and talk to my mom. Bye!
 - Spoiler:
Dear Diary,
My mom told me I was transferring schools! This is outrageous! I have never transferred schools before, and what about my friends Mai, Yuki, Ren, and Zen? Oh I am going to give my mom a piece of my mind. But first I promised my friends we will go shopping at the new mall called Starlight Emporiums, so bye!
Yumi closed her diary and stretched.
"Ah, time to go shopping. Good thing I have no homework." Yumi said.
She walked through the hall and dashed down the halls.
"Mom, I am going shopping!" she said, "Love you bye!"
Yumi kissed her mom's cheek and went outside. As she went outside the warm wind blew the autumn leaves in front of her.
"Ah, the wind of Autumn."
She kept walking until she finally got to Daphne's apartment, and rang her room's doorbell.
"Who is it?" A voice asked.
"It's Yumi. Yumi Sakura, I came to pick up Daphne." Yumi replied.
The voice hung up and the door opened, the halls were decorated with fake coloured leaves. As she walked to Daphne's apartment, the door swung open and Daphne came out.
"So were off to Starlight Emporiums right?" Daphne asked.
Yumi nodded and they headed to Mai's house. Thirty five minutes passed and they finally got to Mai's house, when they were finally there Yumi rung the doorbell. Yuki answered the door and invited them in.
"I thought Mai lived here." Daphne said.
"She does, Yuki is just here so we won't have to walk to her place." Yumi replied.
"Oh." she replied walking in.
Mai's mother gave them some refreshments until Mai as ready.
"Yum!" Daphne said "These are really delicious! Are you a famous cook, Miss. Akira?"
Miss. Akira, Mai's mother nodded and went to a room to feed the house puppy.
As the three girls ate the refreshments Mai came walking to the room wearing her favorite scarf and a matching outfit.
"So are we ready?" Mai asked.
"Oh yes!" We all said replying to Mai.
Mai hugged her mom and petted her dog Max and went outside with the others.
When they got to the Starlight Emporiums there was a dozens of designer's clothing stores. So first the group went to the first designer's clothing store and then zig zag through all of them.
"Oh My!" Yumi gasped "I don't think we can go through all of them!"
"Why is that?" Daphne asked.
"That's because there are two floors of this store!"
Everyone gasped and kept looking through for cute clothes. Yuki already found a nice purple and white soccer uniform, so she went and bought it then continue to find some clothes.
"What is your team name and number please?" The cashier asked.
"The black fire cats and number sixteen" Yuki replied.
The cashier sowed on their logo on the front top left corner and sowed the number sixteen big at the back.
After Yuki bought the uniform she explained to her friends about what happened, and they were really surprised. Now Mai found a dark blue school uniform and bought it. After that Yumi and Daphne found an Autumn outfit with a scarf.
"Hey Daphne we should buy this outfit." Yumi said.
"Okay, we should! Its the perfect sizes."
After all of the girls found their dream clothing they were off to Starbucks to buy some food to eat.
"Guys, I have to say something. My mom is transferring me to another school this Monday." Yumi said frowning while looking at her chocolate drink.
"Maybe we can tell her we can teach you to be good at math and all of those subjects your failing at." Mai said.
So that is what they did, went to Yumi's house and told her mom to not transfer her. And actually Yumi's mom trusted her friends and let her not transfer. Yumi hugged her mother and her friends left since it was already dark.
Dear Diary,
We went to Starlight Emporiums and there was a whole lot of stores! But we all got something we could wear, Daphne and I bought the same outfit. And the great news was my friends made my mom not transfer me, but the deal was they had to tutor me so I can have good grades. Oh I have to go! I promised Daphne we will go on Red Heart Mall online tonight. So bye!
 - Spoiler:
[color=#BF40FF]Dear Diary,
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May continue later...
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| Good, but during Chapter one, you should've made it in first person view. (EX: ".. Well today, I did blah blah blah) | |
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| good  some writers here....  jk  | |
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| Okay Thanks. I'll Try doing that next time Ani. Thanks For The Tips!  I had a thousand Ideas for Chapter 2. xD | |
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| | Subject: Re: A Diary You Can Write Forever! |Chapter 11 is being made| Fri Sep 09, 2011 8:25 pm | |
| It was pretty good bro. Good word choice. You can make it longer and more detailed though. :3 |
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| Yeah. I'll do that in Chapter 3. | |
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| | Subject: Re: A Diary You Can Write Forever! |Chapter 11 is being made| Fri Sep 09, 2011 8:33 pm | |
| - Queenfairylight7 wrote:
- Yeah. I'll do that in Chapter 3.
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| I need Idea's! T.T
I have Writer's Block. So next week is the Christmas Party in the Story. And I don't know what the Chapter 3 will be about. T.T | |
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| | Subject: Re: A Diary You Can Write Forever! |Chapter 11 is being made| Sat Sep 10, 2011 1:33 pm | |
| Woo! Chapter three is really long. I can tell you put a lot of effort into it. :3 |
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| - Finn wrote:
- Woo! Chapter three is really long. I can tell you put a lot of effort into it. :3
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| I need Ideas For Chapter 4.
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So In Chapter 4 it's The Christmas Party.
The Teacher hosts a Dance. And Zen is Yumi's Dance Partner.
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| i didnt finish it because i didnt have enough time because we r going home now but i think its a good story! | |
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| | Subject: Re: A Diary You Can Write Forever! |Chapter 11 is being made| Mon Sep 12, 2011 3:21 pm | |
| @Skye and what is that supposed to mean >.>
@Elli Girl you don't know the meaning of writers block until you talk with me xD
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| Thanks! Someone said No on the Poll but at least only one person. @FantageRoxs Thanks Fantage. @Relora Okay let's talk about Writer's block. LOLz! xD  | |
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| - Relora wrote:
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| | Subject: Re: A Diary You Can Write Forever! |Chapter 11 is being made| Mon Sep 12, 2011 8:17 pm | |
| I'm to lazy to finish it. i will just say yes | |
| | | | cynthia
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| | Subject: Re: A Diary You Can Write Forever! |Chapter 11 is being made| Mon Sep 12, 2011 8:32 pm | |
| I really like your Story/Diary. I can't wait until chapter 5. | |
| | | | Queen
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| | Subject: Re: A Diary You Can Write Forever! |Chapter 11 is being made| Mon Sep 12, 2011 9:32 pm | |
| - cynthia wrote:
- I really like your Story/Diary. I can't wait until chapter 5.
Thanks! The Chapter will come out when I think of Ideas. | |
| | | | Queen
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| | Subject: Re: A Diary You Can Write Forever! |Chapter 11 is being made| Mon Sep 12, 2011 11:21 pm | |
| Chapter 4 is Being Written! I might finish the rest tomorrow if I didn't finish! | |
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