~Blindfold -a Love story~

Beauty26 was a fifteen year old girl.
And an average one.
She was shy when she wanted to; And wasn't anything else...

~Beginning~
The sun was rising at the crack of dawn one summer day.
"Yawwwwwwwwwwwwn..."
I looked at my iHome/alarm clock.
"6:00?!?!?"
I went back to bed; I was NOT going to wake up at that time...
Never!
I rolled on my side, refusing to look at the time.
"I wanna be a rockstar, a sup-" my alarm clock sang.
"A shut-up!"
I hopped out of my bed...
There was no use of trying to fall back asleep.

~At School~
~September 9th~
"Okay class! The project is due on the 21st!...."
"...No exeptions!"
"Whatever.." I moaned, followed by an eye roll.
"Hey..."
I felt something tap me on the shoulder...
I turned around, with my heart racing faster.
"Ahhhh!" I screamed
"Hahahaaa" Ashley said with a paper mustace taped to her face.
"Ash, you scared the crap outta me!"
"Haha, I know.." She said with a devious smile.
Ashley said something.
But my heart and eyes were on something else.
Max.
He was just foolin' around with his buds.
Suddenly, our eyes met.
My heart skipped a beat.
I put my head down.
Oh my god. I bet he thinks I'm a freak! I was staring at him for like 10 minutes!
"What were you staring at?" blue asked
"Oh, nothing..." I lied
"Uh huh, sureeeee" Blue giggled..
*BEEP*
Thank god for the bell!

~End of chapter 1~

good beginning! can't wait for more!!

nice beginning it actually grabbed my attention i wanna hear more!

I edited the story! Now there's more! (: Enjoy.

Beauty, you copyed too much from my story.

1. You centered it.

2. You added an introduction

3. The pics.

I mean, c'mon :/.

otherwise, its an ok story. Needs a little more detail though.

sharpsul99 wrote:

Beauty, you copyed too much from my story.

1. You centered it.

2. You added an introduction

3. The pics.

I mean, c'mon :/.

otherwise, its an ok story. Needs a little more detail though.

I am NOT copying you...

1. It would look bad if I didn't center it.

2. Every single story in the world has a introduction.

3. The pic is for when someone reads my stroy, they can actually see what the character looks like.

So, I just proved you, Sharp, that I am not "copying" you.

I think it's a pretty good story, but it doesn't really have that excitement/suspense feeling. Sorry. :/

Candy456 wrote:

I think it's a pretty good story, but it doesn't really have that excitement/suspense feeling. Sorry. :/

This story isn't supposed to be like Sharp's story, Suspenceful and "exciting"

Sorry to dissapoint you. -.-

Great story! Can't wait for more!

Chapter 1 is completely finished!

Beauty26 wrote:

Candy456 wrote:

I think it's a pretty good story, but it doesn't really have that excitement/suspense feeling. Sorry. :/

This story isn't supposed to be like Sharp's story, Suspenceful and "exciting"

Sorry to dissapoint you. -.-

I never reffered to sharp's story, did i? >> its just that, well, nevermind. Anyways, I also said I though it was a good story! don't focus on negative stuf!

Great. I think you stalked me, because this happens to me EVERY day.

Beauty26 wrote:

sharpsul99 wrote:

Beauty, you copyed too much from my story.

1. You centered it.

2. You added an introduction

3. The pics.

I mean, c'mon :/.

otherwise, its an ok story. Needs a little more detail though.

I am NOT copying you...

1. It would look bad if I didn't center it.

2. Every single story in the world has a introduction.

3. The pic is for when someone reads my stroy, they can actually see what the character looks like.

So, I just proved you, Sharp, that I am not "copying" you.

1. It looks fine if you center.

2. not everyone on here has introed stories

3. maybe instead of pics, you could DRAW them, since this barely is fantage themed.

Sorry, but Im not letting you bump past my story since your copying me :/.

sharpsul99 wrote:

Beauty26 wrote:

sharpsul99 wrote:

Beauty, you copyed too much from my story.

1. You centered it.

2. You added an introduction

3. The pics.

I mean, c'mon :/.

otherwise, its an ok story. Needs a little more detail though.

I am NOT copying you...

1. It would look bad if I didn't center it.

2. Every single story in the world has a introduction.

3. The pic is for when someone reads my stroy, they can actually see what the character looks like.

So, I just proved you, Sharp, that I am not "copying" you.

1. It looks fine if you center.

2. not everyone on here has introed stories

3. maybe instead of pics, you could DRAW them, since this barely is fantage themed.

Sorry, but Im not letting you bump past my story since your copying me :/.

Sharp, shes not copying you.
Its like if I wrote a book and someone else used an introduction, pictures of the same thing, etc.

And, your stories are each 99.99% Different from each other!
Don't start with it sharp, please. Just keep calm. I introduce my stories, I center, AND I PUT PICS.of.same.stuff. kthnx

I'm making chapter 2! Woot! (;

Beauty26 wrote:

I'm making chapter 2! Woot! (;

Awesome! Can't wait for it!

I Cant Wait
Till Chapter Two! This one was awesome!

that was so cute!
I love it!!!
I favorite thing would be the title.
It's awesome!!!

But I would add in a lil more vocab, the words you use are a little plain.
(LOL sorry habit) D:

Sakura wrote:

that was so cute!
I love it!!!
I favorite thing would be the title.
It's awesome!!!

But I would add in a lil more vocab, the words you use are a little plain.
(LOL sorry habit) D:

Thanks, Grace xD It's my first story, but I'll keep editing it (:

Awesome chapter : )
Kinda remind me of someone ;]
& i can't wait for the 2nd chap.!

Awesome! I like deh part with Straw in it xD

but great! 10/10

Thanks, straw! I'm going to make chapter 3 soon!

Also, Mace, Can you move this out of Fantage Creations, because this isn't really "Fantage Themed"...Thanks...

Great job! [:
I have a single question...
Why did it go from "Ash" to "Blue"? o.o

Zezori wrote:

Great job! [:
I have a single question...
Why did it go from "Ash" to "Blue"? o.o

In the second chapter, I'm home..and Blue is the one who thinks I like max...So that's why she texted me. Yupperz xD

P.S My three friends in the story are Blue, Ash, and Straw.