Dog
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 | Subject: My New Story (Sneak Peak)  Mon Jul 23, 2012 5:53 am | |
| Hi guys! This is the introduction/preview of my new story. The quoted paragraph is a paragraph from the actual book. I hope you guys like it!  It's about a tween angel who wishes to live in the real world, but she doesn't say Earth specifically. So she gets transported to a different world. I'm not going to go into details. Please rate and critique!
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Winnowill
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| | Subject: Re: My New Story (Sneak Peak) Mon Jul 23, 2012 9:16 am | |
| This is a lovely beginning. I'm curious to see how you would continue it... | |
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taehyung
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| | Subject: Re: My New Story (Sneak Peak) Mon Jul 23, 2012 11:11 am | |
| It looks interesting !I would be the first one who will reply and read! | |
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kirky1233
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| | Subject: Re: My New Story (Sneak Peak) Mon Jul 23, 2012 11:15 am | |
| awesome. i would want to read it | |
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Dog
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| | Subject: Re: My New Story (Sneak Peak) Mon Jul 23, 2012 3:22 pm | |
| Thanks guys! Your support means a lot to me. I'm glad to know that people are interested. LOL A spoiler in a spoiler! - Spoiler:
Cassandra wishes to go to the real world, but she doesn't say Earth specifically, so she gets transported to a different world. The world is better than earth. Less populated, less polluted, more beautiful. But there is one problem. She has to fend off a cannibalistic tribe to protect the new world. I know, there are a lot of elements in this story lol.
If you didn't open the spoiler, let me tell you one thing. This is not another story about a beautiful mythical creature coming to earth, trying to fit in at her new high school without exposing her secret, and who eventually goes out with the popular girl's boyfriend. I will create another topic for the first chapter, and edit it when I write more. Thanks again guys!
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mich
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| | Subject: Re: My New Story (Sneak Peak) Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:28 am | |
| This sounds like a cool story. i can't wait to read it. | |
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Donutangel♥
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| | Subject: Re: My New Story (Sneak Peak) Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:35 am | |
| cool story i cant wait to read the rest! | |
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