Stranded~ RP

"It hurts, to breathe.. Breath.. Quickening." she said between deep, painful breaths.

"Take a deep breath and ignore the pain," Sophie instructed. She heard Naomi's voice go through the woods.

Naomi was so weak she couldn't speak. Blood was flowing out slowly, because there wasn't as much. She turned pale and had no color. She started to collapse on the floor.

Ashley heard Naomi's voice booming through the woods. "NAOMI!" she shouted. She instantly sprang up and sprinted in the voice's direction, dodging all the trees and clutching her stomach. I wasn't a professional long-distance runner for nothing, she thought. She saw Naomi sprawled across the ground, groaning in pain, she ran to her side and knelt down. "What happened?" she asked worriedly.


(Now would be a good time for her to get a flashback of her and Ashley's friendship)

(Wait hold on a minute
Okay so you just sprang up to save naomi, even though your character is injured and in need of cpr?)

Naomi closed her eyes. Am I dieing? She asked to herself. Pictures and memories running around her mind crazily.

(Yeah, she had an adrenaline rush powered by her friendship with Naomi.. DUH. JK. That was actually really corny.. Bad move, but I didn't want Naomi to DIE)

Ashley felt dizzy once more, she fell beside Naomi and laid her head on her stomach, listening to each breath. Naomi was in some type of day-mare.

(someone answer please!)

Cooking, pranking, running, swimming, drowning (almost), tsunamis, islands, Raquelle, Lance, Timmy, Ashley,Sophie, Rose, Sky, Mimo, Isabella (Her other sister), Daniel (Her brother), her mother and her father. Plane crashes.. Oh.. She thought. Now I remember.. Too bad I'm going to die.. A tear goes down her cheek.

Following Ashley, Crystal finally reached Naomi. "You look like you're about to die."

(( LOL @ LENS CHARACTER XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ))

I stood up and walked towards the woods were all the screaming was coming from I saw Lance and Naomi & Ashley I stood next to Lance ''Hey dying Naomi & Ashley'' I said ''why are they dying'' I said with a derp face

"I don't know why they're dying," answered Lance. "Naomi lost most of her memory.

(I have two characters, lance and crystal)

Ashley clogged up Naomi's head and the blood stopped seeping out. She ran to the food and got a huge jug of milk. "Drink this, it will help you get your blood back" she said as she handed her the jug, she laid down beside her and began taking deeper breaths.

''Interesting'' I said ''What happened to Ashley''? I said.

Naomi suddenly felt like it was the end. Life was exiting her body without saying goodbye. Naomi's eyes were closed, permanently. Next thing she knew was that she was sitting in a cloud. She looked down to the island. She had wings, and grey eyes. Her hair was blonde. She was pale. She was wearing a white ancient Greek-like tunic. She was wearing sandals.

((Aw.. you killed your character, Ashley has no friends now.))

"Naomi.. Naomi?" Ashley said. The body was motionless. "NO NAOMI, YOU CAN'T DIE.. DON'T LEAVE ME!! TAKE ME WITH YOU!" she screamed, now shaking Naomi's lifeless body. She smelled of peaches. "No, No, Why Naomi, Why?" Ashley begged, she buried her head into Naomi's chest and began to sob.

Sophie went to Naomi, who had a lifeless body. Aw, she died.

(just wait and see what comes next.)

Naomi felt so bad. For everyone. She closed her eyes and swore to herself. "I'll take care of them, I'll be with them so that what happened to me won't happen to them."

"Where's her ghost?" he asked quietly.

Naomi flew down to the island. She flapped her wings and sat down on the sand.

Sophie looked at Naomi's body. It's sad. She died at such a young age.

She makes herself visible. She holds in the tears.

Ashley looked up to take a breath and there it was.. NAOMI! "Naomi! You came back for me!" she shouted, she ran to her and hugged her. She went right through.

Naomi tried to smile. She made herself solid. She flaps her wings. "I made a promise."

He saw Naomi. "Woah, what happened, Naomi?"

"I-i'm an angel." She said. "I don't know why I look different though.." Her blonde hair was in two braids. Her cheeks were reddish.