Oliver
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 | Subject: Telephone Cord- A story  Sun Dec 05, 2010 8:03 pm | |
| Hope you like it! Its science fiction/surreal/Slight Horror. So yep... - Prologue:
The darkness fleshed the room. She kept staring at me, calling me master, but with a very weak, shy voice. Why do I take care of her? She isn’t necessarily important, a bit disturbing at times actually.. I guess its just because I pretty much made her, or Im just too kind to kick a little girl like her out of the house. No ones found out about what happened. Not even her parents. What a shame. She kept passing the ingredients to me, smiling and bowing whenever it happened. I thanked her each time.
“Here you go master.”
“Thank you.”
“Heres the next one master!”
“Thank you.”
It just went like that every day, I couldn’t say I loved it, but it wasn’t bad. But the pressure of them coming some day clenched my spine, it would really get me in trouble, and it would get Lily in trouble too. The house was hidden though, so it would be hard for them to come anyways.
But of course, it had to happen someday. The price of what I did was a heavy one. And as I expected, it happened soon enough. Barging in, and putting handcuffs, ah.. Its silly to say no. Lily was taken too, grabbed by the ears and mouth, her eyes were covered too. She screamed, saying master over her breath. How mindless are you Lily? And where are you now?
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case1998
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| | Subject: Re: Telephone Cord- A story Sun Dec 05, 2010 9:00 pm | |
| Nice I like it! Makes me want to read more, know all about it!
(Wow Makkine was right I do use to many '!' marks.) | |
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Burittanie
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| | Subject: Re: Telephone Cord- A story Sun Dec 05, 2010 11:34 pm | |
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bladerunner22
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| | Subject: Re: Telephone Cord- A story Mon Dec 06, 2010 12:08 pm | |
| Wow luv it so far! im waiting for more. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Telephone Cord- A story Sat Dec 11, 2010 12:41 am | |
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