Sorry about December, my Photoshop on the laptop does that sometimes xD;
I think you've made a huge improvement. Only one thing I would add..
Eyebrows. ;A;
I know they're like one of the most annoying things evaar, but you have to draw them in, otherwise your person's expression won't come out right~ :]
EDIT: Never mind. I've noticed you're putting them in now. Keep up ze good work!! ^^;;