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PostSubject: New Art Improvement   Sun Dec 25, 2011 11:00 pm

So I used my new Christopher Hart drawing book to make this:

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Rate and critique please! (Except for the hands, I'm not that good at hands, and I know they look too small.)
It was also scanned in a weird way, so it looks too big. And the head is huge.
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PostSubject: Re: New Art Improvement   Sun Dec 25, 2011 11:24 pm

It's nice! I like how the hair is divided into sections :] and I absolutely love the wings and the fingers.

Critique:
The folds need some work. I see you have the direction for the folds ( her dress is blowing to the right) which is good, but the folds don't look realistic. However, you're getting on the right track, so keep practicing c:

Yes the head is huge, making the waist seem small. Do you use any guidelines for drawing? Like lines or polygons? They help construct the drawing more correctly.

The top of the head should be more rounder. It look kind of flat here

I can tell you have a lot of potential. Keep on drawing! <3
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PostSubject: Re: New Art Improvement   Sun Dec 25, 2011 11:57 pm

Rawr wrote:
It's nice! I like how the hair is divided into sections :] and I absolutely love the wings and the fingers.

Critique:
The folds need some work. I see you have the direction for the folds ( her dress is blowing to the right) which is good, but the folds don't look realistic. However, you're getting on the right track, so keep practicing c:

Yes the head is huge, making the waist seem small. Do you use any guidelines for drawing? Like lines or polygons? They help construct the drawing more correctly.

The top of the head should be more rounder. It look kind of flat here

I can tell you have a lot of potential. Keep on drawing! <3

Thank you. I still need to figure out how to do folds, that's my biggest weakness.
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PostSubject: Re: New Art Improvement   Sun Dec 25, 2011 11:58 pm

the hands are actually better than anything i can do
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PostSubject: Re: New Art Improvement   Mon Dec 26, 2011 12:07 am

Mr.Taost wrote:
the hands are actually better than anything i can do

Thank you. That is one of the few hand poses I can draw.
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PostSubject: Re: New Art Improvement   Mon Dec 26, 2011 12:08 am

The hair is beautiful, I love the pose and the mood of the drawing especially.
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PostSubject: Re: New Art Improvement   Mon Dec 26, 2011 12:14 am

Thank you guys so much. Very Happy

Sorry if this is advertising.
title of the book that helped me draw it:
 
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PostSubject: Re: New Art Improvement   Wed Dec 28, 2011 7:28 am

There's seems to be a point just near the forehead. It should be either flat or round. I don't know, I'm terrible ad drawing side views.

The marker that goes over the lineart is kinda messy at places.

Folds have already been mentioned o W o

When I look closely, there's a few smudges here and there. The pupil goes out from the lower eyelid.

I actually think the hand is pretty nice. I agree it could be like half an inch larger.

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Other than that, I'm unsure on how to critique since I'm not even as good as that for sideviews myself. By the way, I don't know how yor using that book for help.. But if I were you, I'd only be using the book for anatomy references but not your own style. You should develop your drawing style by refering to actual photography, etc.. And by drawing style I mean clothes, colouring, facial features, hair, etc..

Good work :] 6/10
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PostSubject: Re: New Art Improvement   Wed Dec 28, 2011 9:13 am

I like the hand Very Happy its nice so ill give you
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