Poem: Rain

The days going by are getting in the way

of the new morning i'd found at last. It wasn't "next'' that i was headed toward,but " bygone " that I was always chasing after My incessant merciless memories don't seem likely to forgive me. It may not be long before my turmoil spills out down cheeks wearied by my fumbling about. Will the rain ever stop? I've been cold for such a long time. Why dose the rain choose me? Can I wrap myself up in it? The rain is unrelenting and it's still coming down, but tenderly under a umbrella,we share our warmth as we huddle close.


I made it for pikachu160 Hope you all and pikachu160 like it!

cool poem about rain

I am so proud of how you did it!!
But some how i kind of found it a bit hard to read???
Even so i really loved it!!!

Thank yu!!

MOAR POEMS!

It's okay, but kinda hard to read xP
8/10

pretty good and nice try on the effort scale but i agree with Ani....

How is it hard to read...

Freddy333 wrote:

How is it hard to read...

Maybe try reading over the poem...and see what was needed to be added to it...
(like ,.?! etc....maybe somethings missing from your poem that makes it very hard to read....)

Line breaks:

Poetry needs linebreaks, or it's just flowery prose. Unless you use metre or rhyme, in which case you can still tell it's a poem without the breaks. That's how I'd split it up, but change it if you want a different feel.