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PostSubject: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sun Feb 21, 2010 10:37 am

Chapter 1~ The Beginning
Sharp was a fellow Fantagian. He was wise, kind, and honest. Then one day, something changed him. Then, he felt like a failure. But one day, he rescued millions of Fantagians, and saved their lives for the living. What happened to the Fantagians? What changed him? Read this story (NOT TRUE) of the saga of this Fantagian, Sharpsul99.

I (Sharp) ran to the lighthouse, and stopped by the lighthouse door. I took out my rocket board, yet my favorite board, and hopped onto it.

I took out my adventurous penguin, Chilly, and put him on my board.

"I'm hungry." he said, so I fed him his favorite fish.

"OK Chilly, activate the Flying Power, so I can get to that tree over there." I said, pointing at the tree.

"Flying Powers, Activate!" Chilly shouted. He clapped his hands together, and put them on the board. My rocket board went into flame, and I blasted to that tree!

"Woooooooohooooo!" I shouted, and I flew into the tree.

"Thanks Chilly!" I said, and then I lounged back on the tree.

"No problem, just make sure not to fall off the tree, or your the creature's lunch." and Chilly poofed away.



I took out my bag of rocks I got from the beach, and I took out a small yellow stone rock. I threw it into the sea, and my special watch said I threw it 10 feet.

I took out a small rare red rock, but before I could throw it, I noticed.. someone was watching me.



I saw her name tag, it said "Beauty26" on her shirt.

"Why are you spying on me?" I asked Beauty. Her angry face stared at me, and I can tell I did something wrong.

"It took you 2 minutes to realize me. But anyway, you throwing rocks will hurt the sea animals, and when you get eaten one day, don't go crying for help." Beauty said, she had a very angry face, I just threw ONE rock.

What she doesn't realize is that there are millions of rocks in the ocean.

"Do you know how many rocks are in the ocean? There are millions. These small rocks won't hurt the animals." I said, and I threw my red rock.

"It can knock out a fish, and they can die!" she shouted, and then it was ON.

"Don't tell me what to do!" I shouted, but I accidently threw a huge yellow stone at her, and she dropped to the ground.

"Oops," I said. I stood up on the tree, and almost fell.

"I- I'm reporting you!!!" she shouted, she put my name, "Sharpsul99" on her IDFone, and reported me.

"Hey, how do you know my na-"

But she got up, and jumped into the ocean, and swam away.... she was a suspicious one...
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Chapter 2~ Continuing Progress

The next day, I woke up at 9:00 AM. I saw my window, and I saw spray paint all over my wall!
It said;

"Sharpo is a back-stabbing animal hurter"

"Are you kidding me, Beauty?" I said, picking up my towel and wiping up the spray paint.

Later, I went downtown in my pajamas, and went into the Star Cafe for breakfast and coffee. Your not gonna believe it, but the cafe was on FIRE.

"AAAAH, SHARP, HELP! MY HANDS ARE ON FIRE." screamed the cashier, and it was true. His hands were bleeding, bleeding like leaking water.

I had no choice but to summon Chilly.

"Oh no, Summoning: Chilly!" I shouted, he popped up, and his eyes were full of scare.

"What in tarnation happened?!!" Chilly shouted, he was scared as I was.
"Listen ChilLy, I need to fly over the fire to get the towel!" I shouted, and he automatically obeyed.

"Flying Powers, Activate!" he shouted, he clapped his hands, and put his hands on the rocket board, I blast over the fire and got the towel.

"Switching, Surf Board!" I said, and my surf board appeared, and my rocket board vanished.

It made a very big wave, and it was so big, the Star Cafe people blew outside, but the cashier.

"The fire is gone, but my hands are black." said the cashier, and he was hurting a little bit.

"AAAAAH" shouted Lori9931,
"EEEEEEEEK" said Sj224 flying out the window
"HOLY FISHSTICKS" said Ghost and he blasted 44 miles out of the door and dragged until He reached the end of the creature world.



And there it was, empty all but the cashier left.

"Thank you Sharp!" he said, and he hugged me and almost suffocated.

I dragged out of that nightmare shop, and forgot my breakfast. I helped SJ224 and Lorena, and I helped them up.

"Be careful girls," I said, and they got up and walked to the beach.

"Thanks Sharp!" they said, and vanished into the beach.

Later that day, I walked to Mt Fantage, finding an interesting Fantage creature called the Yeti. But I couldn't believe who I ran into when I popped up there:



It was Beauty, I couldn't believe it.



She started to ask me questions, and I WAS the one who deserved to ask the questions.

"Hey, you spray painted my wall!" I shouted at Beauty.

"Did not!" she said, I could not believe she was denying it.

"Really? I see spray paint in your pocket!" and it was spilled.

"Fine, you caught me, bu-"

"And you probably set the Star Cafe on fire!!!" I said, but she gave me a very scared eye.

"Bea-beauty?"

But, she disappeared, and all of a sudden, a ghost came by. It punched me so hard, I went flying across Mt Fantage.

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Chapter 3~ The Breakdown


I stopped near the Comet & Co. My arm was all bloody from the draggings. I looked up, with my eyes in hate. But, before I can yell out something, I couldn't believe my eyes.



It was a GHOST. Talking to me.

"What the?!!" I shouted, and then all of a sudden, there was a huge wall behind me.

"AAAAH" I shouted, and the wall collapsed, and I ran for my life.

"You will find me again." The ghost said, and it gave me a final blow I flew 500 miles around Fantage

"WA-WA-WAAAA!!!" I shouted, while I went flying.

"Holy smokes!" Canada said, running for his life.

"Look out!" Sameer said.

"A tornado!" Andrew shouted.

It wasn't even a tornado? It was a Human Being!

When I flied through the beach, the ghost caught up to me. It was faster then wind!

"I repeat, you will see me again." it said.

"UGH!" YOU'LL PAY!" I shouted.

Then, the ghost uppercutted me into the sky. And I was stunned.

Once I reached the sky, I coughed blood.

"*hack*"

I had to summon my dragon, Ranger. Ranger helped with injuries, and serious damages.

"Summoning: Ranger!"

Ranger popped up in the sky, and fell with me.

"What the fishsticks?! Sharp what happened?!" Ranger said, putting his hands in the air during the fall.

"Th-this GHOST it blasted me into the sky! Help!"

He automatically obeyed, and used his special rope power.

"Fire Laser!"
The fire laser did not give damage to partners. I grabbed onto it, and held on for my sake life. And then when the ground came, I let go, and I jumped onto Ranger's back.

Then, we landed.

"Thanks Ranger, you saved me." I said, and fed him his fire crackers.

"Be safe." he said, and he poofed.

It wasn't my fault, was it?"

Later, I went home. I had to change out of these clothes. I was in them since yesterday.



I put on my shirt that was unbuttoned. And my folded up jeans. I liked my hair like that all the time, and with my special crown on. I put on my preppy pencil board. Then, I went to clean up the blood that was on my chin, from earlier.

I went to the mirror, and made sure I cleaned up the blood. Then, I had to see if my hair was perfect. I liked to look stylish.

But, all of a sudden, something freaky happened.

"DESIRE YOUR SHADOW!!!" and it popped out of the window. It was slimy and green.

"What the heck?!" I said, and it grabbed my neck. And pulled me in.
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Chapter 4~ Mysteries
I went through the mirror, with blood all over my chin.

I rushed through Fantage, in that weird person's arm. I looked up while the wind was blowing, and it was a different ghost!

"Who-who are you..?!" I shouted, trying to jump off.

"You'll see.." it said.

We finally came across this mountain. We totally were not in Fantage anymore. The mountain was called "Two Shadows".

"Two Shad-"

I got interrupted. The ghost spoke when we reached the cave entrance.

"You are going to know the real truth.." he said.

"Huh?!-"

And all of a sudden, I saw a huge fire dragon. And it iverted.

"Wha--, Whoa, whoa, whoa!! Stop! It burns!! AAAAAHHH-"

I shouted in pain, and all of a sudden, I landed in a black room.



Then, the REAL ghost came into the room. And suddenly, I was still.

"Wha-wha, I can barely breathe. What's going on?!! Tell me!!!!!" I shouted, and then. The room got darker.

"I have to talk to you. Sharpsul Lacario;", the ghost said.

The ghost clapped his hands together, and a wind rushed the room.



"Ah you again!" I shouted, cuz I knew it was invisable, and even in the dark, he was invisable.

Parts of his body were showing. And then all of a sudden. I choked.

"Are you ready? Fate. Truth." the ghost said.

"Hu-huh?!!" I said, but it was too late.



The Art Of Ivert Pain. I dropped to the ground. And he was ready.
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Chapter 5~ Truth & Fate


I coughed blood, and the ghost put his hands up and spoke.



I screamed blody murder and shouted at him so loud, he flew back a little bit.

"You have to stop!!!" I shouted.

Then, he put a misty feeling through me.

"Hmph" he said. Then, he laughed.

"HAHAHA" he shouted.



I screamed, then suddenly, I saw blood floating in the middle of the room.

I couldn't even read it. All I noticed was that the first letter was a "T".

He started to speak.

"You noticed you received the cold shoulder lately. A lot of people hate you. You just don't notice it."

I was stunned. What was he talking about?

"Hu-huh?" I said.

"I didn't jump at a random topic, Sharpsul. I received word from certain people. Even BEAUTY said so."

"But.. how?!" I shouted. I jumped up and tried to punch the words out of him. But he pushed me back.

"DR-ATS!" I shouted. I had blood leaking from my chin.

"Anyways, Beauty pretended she didn't know you. The only reason she did pretend was to play along" he said.

Thats when my eyes were full of fate.

Fate.

Just fate.

I put my hands slowly up to my face. Covered in fate.

"Your full of lies." I said.

"If I'm lying, you would be dead by a crowd." he said.

"STOP LYING!!!" I shouted. I lost it. Completly. I coughed more blood, and had blood leaking from my chin.

"If I'm lying, YOU WOULDN'T BE ALIVE!!!" he shouted. Then I jumped with fear.

"Ugh," I said. And I started to calm.

"Everyone hates you because you betrayed them. You always backstabbed them, and the whole world of Fantage wanted revenge on you."

I just stood there, the fate never fled.

I was on my knees. Blood leaking from my chin. Big fate eyes.

Truth & Fate.



I just said "Yes.", then I was stunned.

Then the ghost left, leaving me behind. I was frozen.

Frozen.

Stunned.

Full of FATE.

At the forest, a princess and the daughter was looking for a orb.



Then something major happened.



The daughter screamed. The princess screamed as well. Then, they got sucked in.

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Chapter 6~ Dark Shadows

The girls vanished because their were spies coming near the forest, but how did they suddenly vanish?

Then something so shocking happened. The shadows... were....
REVEALED.



They laughed and gave each other high-fives.

"Hahaha" said the first shadow.

"This was fun," said the second shadow.

I was still in the cave, and it wasn't black anymore.

I was frozen. I didn't budge a bit.



"I can't believe it..." I said. I dropped to the floor.

Crying.

Pulling my hair. Experiencing that Pain...

"Life is a matter of hate..." I said, with my head on the floor. A tear splashed onto the rug.

Just then, I heard noises... I picked my head up, and wiped my tears.

BOOM.

It grew louder.. then....

EXPLOSION.

Two girls popped into the room... wait...

Princess Strawberry and the daughter, Pinkys?!!



Then, we all screamed for God's sake.



"I, I, DON'T UNDERSTAND!!!" I said, then, I felt a blur. I heard bloody-murder screaming, and I heard a big pumping echo, and my head dropped to the rug.



"SHARP?!" shouted Straw.

"WHAT THE?!" Pinkys shouted.

Then.. we all felt a shock in our stomachs.. and an ivert popped up. For bloody murder, we screamed.

I screamed until blood coughed up. I was living a deathly nightmare.



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Chapter 7~ Confrence

I finally stopped screaming. I took a deep breath, and got up.

"You all Fantagians hate me." I said, I was charging at the princess and the daughter.

"Huh?!" Pinkys said, and she grabbed Straw and they both jumped back.

"You heard me." I said.

"A ghost spoke to me, and he said that he was holding a secret in Fantage that everyone hated me, because I made betrayal." I said.

OF COURSE, they acted like it wasn't true, but I saw a smirk on the princess's face.

"Nah," the princess said, but then I noticed Pinkys covered her mouth.

That's when I went crazy.

"STOP LYING!!!" I shouted, and leftover blood came out of my mouth.

Then, they vanished.....

Vanished...?

Just... left?

"You little.." I said.. then I just let it go.

I walked out of the cave, and out of the Two Shadows mountain.

I wobbled back to Fantage, and to my house.

I got changed, since I was in these clothes for 3 days.



I hopped onto my bed, I looked at the ceiling.

I had tears rolling down my face.

Tears of hate.

It makes my body heat up.

Then, I felt something squeeze my neck... hard.

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Chapter 8~ Experiencing Pain

I woke up the NEXT MORNING. When I woke up I was covered in WATER!



I could not believe it. I had to get on a new outfit, and I was so angry.

I walked around Fantage with my head down the whole time. In just one week, my whole life was ruined.

I just found out everyone hates me.

"I wonder what's going on." I said dusting off my shirt.

I walked to the Lighthouse, and of course, I saw BEAUTY there.



And so was the princess...



"Oh Hey Straw," I said, completely ignoring Beauty.

"No hi to me?!" Beauty shouted, shoving me.

"Hey, don't push!" I said, pushing her back.

Then, we started fighting, until Straw came in to break it up.

"Stop it you two!" she shouted. Then, she grabbed Beauty.

"Moron," I said to Beauty.

"Jerkaholic!" she said louder.

"Lol, no such word." I said, flicking a pebble at her.

"Ow! Gah!".

She marched away and put her back against the lighthouse.

"So anyway, why you here?" Straw asked, and she took out a Hershey bar.

"I just wanna relax, and not stress." I said, sitting on the sand.

"So about that ghost yesterday-"

Then, my eyes grew wide. Again, full of fate.

Then, I had a flashback.

""

Then, I felt tears run down my eyes.



I had a heat up in my body, hatred feeling.



I notice Beauty left not even a minute ago.



"Cym..?" I said, but then I just ignored both of them.. and took off.

I ran to Mt. Fantage, and I noticed Beauty was there. Cymidei followed me to the mountains.
Straw didn't keep up however.



Then, I heard screams.



"I must.." I said..

"Don't go." said Cymi.

"Yeah!" said Beauty.

Wait, Beauty is caring??

I just dashed into the air, and vanished.

.

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Chapter 9~ A New Mission

I had my adventure pack on my back, and I had my little creature scroll in it. I had no clue where I was going.

"I wonder what Cymidei and Beauty is up to." I said with a long sigh.


I walked miles, and then I ended up in the woods.

"No sight of Fantage," I said. I sat there in the woods, and got some big logs from near the trees.

I got a match, and I lit up the wood.

"Sunset," I said.

Just like Fantage..


It was 8:00 PM (EST), and it was getting dark.

"I can't stay here all night." I said, and I packed everything up, and walked for the enxt 10 miles.


At 10:00 PM, I found a house.

I dropped to the floor, in relief.

"I'm freeeeee-ee." I said, with my head on the ground.

I got up, and it was a wood house. But it was like the grotto on Fantage, I could tell.



"What the heck," I said. I went in.

But, it looked JUST LIKE the Two Shadows cave!



I was scared. I saw those weird things come up again. Of course, I could only read the first letter, "T".


"What's going on?!" I shouted in fear. Then, something was strange.

Was it an earthquake?

NO. I WAS HANGING LIKE A BAT.



"Art of Ivert Pain?!!" I screamed, because it looked and FELT like it!!!

I could actually read the letters. It said:

"True Blood."

"TRUE BLOOD?!" I screamed in horror. I fell to the ground.

It was pitch black.

I was shaking in fear. It was dark.

"Maybe I can play dead." I whispered.

Yeah, that's a good idea.

I closed my eyes...

Then... I dozed off.


It was midnight when I woke up. I wasn't in the weird cabin.

I was in..... SPACE.

But when I was in space, I saw a women..

What was going on?



"Is it an alien?" I said... in complete horror.

Silence....
_________

Chapter 10~ Adventurous Tours

"Wha-what's going on?" I said, in complete fright.

"I am a space exploror, my name is Kim." she said.

"Oh, hello there." I said.

"Do you wanna know a secret?" she said smiling.

I wonder what secret she was talking about.

"Sure," I said, smiling back at her.

She gave me a paper, that said, "Adventurous Tours."

"Follow me." she said.

I followed, but I still felt fear...


_____

Chapter 11~ Training Zone

It was quiet... TOO QUIET...

I followed Kim and I looked at this "Adventurous Tours" thing.

It said something about powers.. vampires..

Wait, what the heck?

We made it to a desert called "Wind Brothers". It was a very sandy desert for an area like this.

"So was this named after two brothers that had the last name, Wind?" I asked Kim, following her to the end of the desert.

"Yup." she said, but..

Why was she bleeding? Blood leaked from her chin.. very strange.

"You okay?" I asked her.

"Uh-yes. Yes, I'm OK." she said, but blood leaked from everywhere now.

"WHOA, YOUR NOT OK!" I shouted, backing up.

She tried to punch me, but then she missed.

"I shall train you to fight Pain!" she said, then, she covered her mouth.

That's what questioned me. Was the shadows...

Pain....?

"Who's Pain?!" I said, throwing bullets at her.

"OUCH!" she screamed, then she dropped.

"Pain is a god who is aiming to kill you." she said.

I went crazy again.

I suddenly disappeared, and came back.

Quiet... and Kim was gone.

And.. I was CONTROLLED. My clothes changed!



Then, I started coughing blood. I dropped my paper, and put my head to the ground.



I suddenly went to an empty room... and I lost it completely.



All of a sudden, POOF. Gone again..

I was in a bush.

A BUSH.



_______

Chapter 12~ Pain In The Dark



I ran away from this bush. I was covered in dorns and all that.

"This isn't how it used to be.." I said, trying to get the fright out of my brain.

It went dark again. Thats when I lost it.


"Why me?!!" I screamed in terror.

Then, something touched my arm. No..

SOMEONE.

That person was breathing hard. I had drool coming down my neck. I punched them.

I heard a loud, "AARGHH!".

I turned around, and it wasn't dark anymore.

In my horror....

IT WAS THE SHADOW.

"You little!!!" I screamed, and through him onto the ground.

"GRRRARRRAH!!!"

I felt a strong power within me.... it was starting to go all over me. My teeth turned sharp, and I felt a cold chill of blood.

I punched the shadow until he coughed globs of blood.

Right in the stomach, fast movement, hard punches.

"GRAAAH!"

"GAAAH!"

"GRAAH!"


10 minutes later, I got tired, there was blood on me, and the shadow, he had blood on his chin, clothes, and his hands.

He wasn't invisable this time. He was caught right in the act of visibility.



"I'm Pain.." he said, with blood all over him.

"WHAT?!!" I screamed, punching him in the arm.

"*GAK*. I shall kill you. Then hunt down your secret powers." he said, and he took out this sword, that looked like a najato.

BUT, it WAS a najato!

It got me in the arm, I gaked blood, but it didn't hurt as much.

"*GAKK*, I popped up the wrong time." he said, and he kicked me all the way to the creature arena.

I was in FANTAGE.



"Until the next." he said, and he vanished.

I was alone in the twilight.

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Chapter 13~ Twilight



I was in the lonely twilight. I had nothing to do but sit there.

I wanted to cry.

All of a sudden, I heard a name call me.

"Come here!" it said.


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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sun Feb 21, 2010 10:52 am

Lol..I like my part! Teehee! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:05 am

LOL @beauty! I like tht part to xD Good story sharp!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:16 am

ashley123 wrote:
LOL @beauty! I like tht part to xD Good story sharp!

Yup, really good story, sharperz! LOL Smile
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:18 am

aha nice story!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sun Feb 21, 2010 12:49 pm

Nice story! But, don't say your a failure in it because its not true Wink
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sun Feb 21, 2010 3:42 pm

Thank you guys, Chapter 2 is out! *Added onto first post*
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sun Feb 21, 2010 3:50 pm

Ooooo! I love the second chapter! (:
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sun Feb 21, 2010 4:25 pm

Ooh! I like the 2nd Chapter! A mystery!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sun Feb 21, 2010 8:41 pm

Thanks Beauty! B.U.M.P Please read my story people.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sun Feb 21, 2010 8:43 pm

love the second chapter!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sun Feb 21, 2010 9:12 pm

cool story sharp
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Mon Feb 22, 2010 5:50 pm

B.U.M.P Please reply to my story.

Chapter 3 added! Poll added with it!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Mon Feb 22, 2010 5:52 pm

Spoooooky xD Great job, sharp
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Mon Feb 22, 2010 5:55 pm

I love the 3rd chapter! Spooky! I think it's Beauty xD
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:39 pm

wow its spooky!! :O
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:54 pm

It's awesome. A bit pokemon-ish but its still epic Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Mon Feb 22, 2010 7:23 pm

i like it, especialy the ghost
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:26 pm

Chapter 4 will be added this evening thanks for the comments everyone!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:41 pm

wow boring I Dont get that anyway BORING!!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:44 pm

nicki445 wrote:
wow boring I Dont get that anyway BORING!!

It ainy boring you idiot. Your story stinks.

no sense,

no puncuation,

how about you edit yours Razz


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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:47 pm

No mine is better edit yours looser!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:54 pm

guys, plz stop your fighting, u can fight about this in pm
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:54 pm

nicki445 wrote:
No mine is better edit yours looser!!!!!

Lol, you have no punnucation, noob.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Tue Feb 23, 2010 4:19 pm

Guys, you're fighting about STORIES. Do you know how odd that looks?
Well, that's not the point.

Nikki- Keep your bad comments to yourself.
Sharp- You don't even have to respond.

So quit fighting here! >>"
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